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Moments 1295
2mth
Commented Gostei do início ainda mais por ser no meu idioma nativo já que é difícil achar fanfics boas em português, porém, essa estrutura de diálogo perde um pouco da imersão. Consegue alterar? Ao invés de:
- Diálogo aqui -
Substituir por:
"Diálogo aqui"
E pensamentos:
'Dialogo aqui '
Dessa forma fica mais fácil a leitura já que é um padrão bem mais comum.
ch 0 2 Infância heróica.
Personagem Peculiar (PT-BR)
Anime & Comics · StKetchup
7mth
Replied to Gabichu_Yeah Yes, even more so when the character is a child. I'll try to read another two chapters but I'm unlikely to continue.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - A second chance
Naruto: The forgotten Senju's
Anime & Comics · Michaellll
7mth
Commented What exactly gave you the courage to threaten someone who was once strong enough to fight Garp? And why didn't Don Chinjao kill him? He can barely defeat a 14 million pirate.
ch 0 5 I Will Kill You and Your Bloodline Chinjao!
Pirate Hunter in Roger's Era(With Bodily Refinement Bead)
Anime & Comics · IWriteFanfic
8mth
Commented Obrigado pelo capítulo, One Piece é uma ótima escolha de mundo para descontrair um pouco.
ch 63 World Of Pirates: Part 01
Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
9mth
Commented Hulk at DC? Sounds interesting, thanks for the chapter.
ch 75 Lanius
Snippets by EgyptianDio
Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio
9mth
Commented There's no point in deleting it, you're stealing content and trying to profit from it, in that last chapter you simply copied ALL of Wonder Woman's interaction from the Young Titan fanfic, ask me if anything in that fanfic is really original and not stolen from someone else.
ch 30 Chapter - 28
Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
10mth
Replied to xine_reader Now I read up to chapter 8 and I must say that the story is very good, I ended up creating high expectations about the MC as he survived a surprise attack from an S Rank Shinobi even during an emotional outburst that not even his father survived and that's why this I had very high expectations anyway I won't read on but I wish you good luck.
ch 0 5 Moving forward
NARUTO : I am not a mob Character
Anime & Comics · xine_reader
10mth
Commented So it's that kind of story huh... An absurdly talented random "OC" that manages to go toe-to-toe with the MC who was able to survive Obito even without Hashirama's cells, too bad because I was really enjoying this story but that kind of forced development is hard to swallow.
ch 0 5 Moving forward
NARUTO : I am not a mob Character
Anime & Comics · xine_reader
11mth
Commented Worse, he's right hahaha
ch 41 Kintama-4
Snippets by EgyptianDio
Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio
11mth
Commented Interesting chapter...but John Uzumaki? what a horrible name
1yr
Commented Wow, is he weaker than the original Spider-Man after all? Spider-sense would have alerted him even though he was "distracted" with Rino, it's always annoying when the convenient author forgets what his own MC can do just to better fit the plot.
ch 17 Arc One. Chapter Seventeen. Midtown Mayhem
Marvel: House of venom
Movies · Mallison
1yr
Commented Congratulations on the translation, is there a schedule for you to post new chapters? I'm very curious about what will happen
ch 0 7 Chapter-7 Gasping bat (Rewritten)
A New Era of Villain (DC/Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Rex_Zatch
1yr
Commented This chapter reminds me why villainous MCs are so popular on this site.
ch 0 6 Now That's Orange (6)
Stop it, Bro~ (One Piece x Baki)
Anime & Comics · FanHarem
DoctorLin
The Enlightened One (Senju!SI)
Anime & Comics · Kakukami