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thunder400: knight: duke a metal bird is flying this way
duke: are you drunk
knight 2: duke a bird is dropping something duke; where i don't want mij robes to get stains
KaboomI'm the King Of Technology · C106
I'm the King Of Technology · C49
NoNameJustFame: What a ridiculous excuse to get rid of land(on) you don’t wantI'm the King Of Technology · C1
TobascoDragoon: I dont think its us Dollar
700000. Japanese yen = 6360.40 usd
700000. Chinese yuan. = 101431.64 usd
700000. Philippine peso = 13820.20 usd
700000. South Korean Won= 605.44 usd
Likely South Korean Won.
Justification based on:
Effects, nothing special, just tasts amazing
Rarity, less than 20 on the market
Location, currently at an upscale facility
Buyers, more money than they know what to do with
If at a normal market 5 - 15 usd max
Un sampled 0.5 - 2 usdJourney To Become A True God · C47
Journey To Become A True God · C47
Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples · C3
CANAAN: I like the story. I like the concept. But what I don't like is how you keep saying things are time sensitive and need to happen fast before it's too late and then go do **** all about it by doing side trips or taking noobs along who slow you down.
This completely breaks the pacing of your story. It kills your buildup and it makes what would have been a top novel down to an avarage one....
I'm also a bit confused about your choice for a bridge to exert toll on... There are two other Bridges right beside it.... What about those?
Your character also keeps doing these illogical things against his own urgency. It's frustrating. The thing is that your story is such a fun concept that it's worth making fanfics of... Yet at the same time your story feels like a fanfic due to all these things...
I think it might help if you focus on your beta deadline first, then worry about taking noobs along who can't even get ext due to not making a kill. It's not like you use a party feature...it would be different if you did.
Right now, his sister has been nothing but a drain on his potential. She takes an hour of convincing to leave the apartment, then now she's slowing him down in the subway..
All these things add up or more accurately, subtract off of the quality of the story... Honestly you got talent. You're a great writer but the pacing and interruptions to the build-up through side quests and decisions involved in the story are rather...
Weird...I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse! · C43
bonjee: Now dear author if you are reading this comment, as a professional reader i would like to give you my opinions as follows
1. Keep your writting in either first person pont of view or narrator's point of view(as he entered the dungeon he immediately gave his glock to his sister to practice) thats an example
2. Dont make him to trusting of others because the number one rule of survival is to be wary of survivors
3. Make his sister to be sharper just like "MY MCV AND DOOMSDAY" ok cause we dont need looser's like the ones in "EPOCH OF TWILIGHT"
4. Remember mc is a loner in previous life he was a cold blooded jiller and a cild person. So stick to the script
5.state his levels continuously after his kills.
6. He should be able to get his own system storage space since his own system is hacked. Mc must depend in himself and not others tech
7. Mc should be smarter and calmer in most situations unless they are out of proportions.
8. Mc should have a crystal clear memory because he has the highest soul power currently in his world that should be his advantage, his soul power should naturally be connected tohis will, memory and determination.
PLEASE READ OTHER APOCALYPTIC NOVELS SO AS TO MAKE YOURS THE BEST FOR BOTH YOURSELF AND US.I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse! · C43
Hiri: 🙇 🙇 🙇 im the elder tho 🤔🤔Exp-Sect · C345
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