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Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1422
1 month ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard · C40
1 month ago
My bad, 2 instead of 9 as I had typed. Thank you. View More

DragonFlame0728: Great, thank you. Also, would you mind correcting my username please? I believe you typed it wrong. I’m sorry to hear about your personal issues though. I hope everything is alright.

His Words · C4
2 months ago

DragonFlame0728: Great, thank you. Also, would you mind correcting my username please? I believe you typed it wrong. I’m sorry to hear about your personal issues though. I hope everything is alright.

His Words · C4
2 months ago
I can put it on the list for reassessment if you'd like. View More
Can you mend my broken heart? · C24
3 months ago
I just realized now that I liked your reply without responding. The review queue is currently long and closed for the time being. When it opens up again, you'll be first new review. You can also check the thread for updates too. https://forum.webnovel.com/d/19580-novel-assessments-reviews-empowering-writers-helping-readers View More
Transmigration: Endless Worlds · C3
3 months ago
I was away due to some life/personal issues, but the website is continually being updated with new stories and content given that I'm not too busy to do so. View More

DragonFlame0728: Will the website be updated with new information?

His Words · C4
3 months ago
Sorry for the late reply, I had some life/personal issues come up the past weeks. Since the time I originally assessed your book, I changed the reviewing. Currently, additional reviews are on hold due to the long queue.

This forum thread will let you know if I open up the review queue again: https://forum.webnovel.com/d/19580-novel-assessments-reviews-empowering-writers-helping-readers View More

SincerelyYours24: Ye, would love to hear from you . . 😊

The Piano Key · C11
3 months ago
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not love but lust · C1
3 months ago
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He can be the one · C5
3 months ago
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A Taste of Amber · C1
3 months ago
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Archery God · C2
3 months ago
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Miss Not-So Perfect · C5
3 months ago
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The Art of Paying Back · C4
3 months ago
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World unknown · C1
3 months ago
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THRONE OF THE SUPREME EMPEROR · C4
3 months ago
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My brother's friend · C6
3 months ago

Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been reviewed by Virtual Bookshelf.
A review excerpt is as follows:

Writing and Style:

You have a certain style to your writing and employ a nice range of vocabulary.

Settings and Flow of Scenes – Overall, this is very well done. You have vivid descriptions and the scene transitions are fluid for the most part.

Characters:

Great visual descriptions for all of them.

Chang – The throwing of herself into the dumpster is a great hook into her character as it shows some quirkiness and ability to disregard appearances for the sake of her plans. At times she feels too mellow for a character; mellow meaning nothing particularly stands out about her yet nothing necessarily negative either. Other times, she’s rather funny in her actions, almost like a child. These all aren’t bad things, and while this female lead is above average to the many of which are poorly created and developed, Chang has so much more potential to even be better. Currently, she’s a very well made cookie cutter female lead in a romance story.

Chapter 72, the story about her father is nice, but it isn’t very necessary to the story in terms of giving any more insight to her character nor for introducing a character which is dead. Deceased characters can certainly spur development of characters and plot, but this one didn’t. It’s a nice Segway into Jian’s return, but this could be accomplished in other ways which more relevantly tie into future developments.

We see a little more personality in her attempt to escape in chapter 101. It links back to the character she showed when she dumped herself in the dumpster—determination.

Jian – He comes off as the typical mysterious, attractive, and possessive male lead. It does seem a little odd that he would get this obsessively attached after being married for one month with Chang. He becomes more charming as the story progresses as he tries his best to make her trust him.

Justin – Initially, his character comes off as a best guy friend, flirty but nice—I’m sorry if it wasn’t your intention, but he’s almost reminiscent of how a gay best friend would be. There’s nothing wrong with this, and while not everyone would get that inkling, I thought I should point this out anyway. Later on, my feelings were asserted by his behavior toward Jian, so good job distinguishing his character!

After the first few dozen chapters, he’s forgotten until Chapter 150. This isn’t…the best thing to do with semi-important/fleshed out side characters.

Li Hua and Jid – Done well, but nothing in particular which really distinguishes them as very memorable or unique to their roles characters. Jid’s role heavily lacked after instilling the idea that he would significantly help Jian be with Chang. .........(cont.)

The full review: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/03/26/review-siren-song-kayalicia/

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Siren Song
3 months ago
Reading Status: C161
Hello, your novel has been reviewed by Virtual Bookshelf.
A review excerpt is as follows:

Writing and Style:

You have a certain style to your writing and employ a nice range of vocabulary.

Settings and Flow of Scenes – Overall, this is very well done. You have vivid descriptions and the scene transitions are fluid for the most part.

Characters:

Great visual descriptions for all of them.

Chang – The throwing of herself into the dumpster is a great hook into her character as it shows some quirkiness and ability to disregard appearances for the sake of her plans. At times she feels too mellow for a character; mellow meaning nothing particularly stands out about her yet nothing necessarily negative either. Other times, she’s rather funny in her actions, almost like a child. These all aren’t bad things, and while this female lead is above average to the many of which are poorly created and developed, Chang has so much more potential to even be better. Currently, she’s a very well made cookie cutter female lead in a romance story.

Chapter 72, the story about her father is nice, but it isn’t very necessary to the story in terms of giving any more insight to her character nor for introducing a character which is dead. Deceased characters can certainly spur development of characters and plot, but this one didn’t. It’s a nice Segway into Jian’s return, but this could be accomplished in other ways which more relevantly tie into future developments.

We see a little more personality in her attempt to escape in chapter 101. It links back to the character she showed when she dumped herself in the dumpster—determination.

Jian – He comes off as the typical mysterious, attractive, and possessive male lead. It does seem a little odd that he would get this obsessively attached after being married for one month with Chang. He becomes more charming as the story progresses as he tries his best to make her trust him.

Justin – Initially, his character comes off as a best guy friend, flirty but nice—I’m sorry if it wasn’t your intention, but he’s almost reminiscent of how a gay best friend would be. There’s nothing wrong with this, and while not everyone would get that inkling, I thought I should point this out anyway. Later on, my feelings were asserted by his behavior toward Jian, so good job distinguishing his character!

After the first few dozen chapters, he’s forgotten until Chapter 150. This isn’t…the best thing to do with semi-important/fleshed out side characters.

Li Hua and Jid – Done well, but nothing in particular which really distinguishes them as very memorable or unique to their roles characters. Jid’s role heavily lacked after instilling the idea that he would significantly help Jian be with Chang. .........(cont.)

The full review: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/03/26/review-siren-song-kayalicia/

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Siren Song
3 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Please don't plagiarize.
This is chapter is from Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights.
Not only is it pointless and gets you nowhere, but why post one part from the book on Webnovel anyway? View More
ONE DAY OF MY LIFE
3 months ago
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Elemental Wolf Pack · C2
3 months ago
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NEW BIGNING · C1
3 months ago
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He was my reason... · C3
3 months ago
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Angels,Demons and Mortals · C1
3 months ago
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I Saw The Devil · C7
3 months ago
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THE SSS · C4
3 months ago
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XXXTorturing Game · C2
3 months ago
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The Mysterious Lady · C3
3 months ago
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KINGS PATH · C5
3 months ago
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enemies to lovers · C4
3 months ago
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