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also how can you say he is addicted to the anime and then say he doesnt care about any of the main characters. If you only like the fem chars you watch compilations of them in a video not the whole series.. View More
Naruto: Sexual Strengthening · C10
1 day ago
may sound petty but dropping cause of sakura... acc despise her character.

Plus kinda hate hinate.. I liked her at first but all the fans of her ruined her for me. View More
Naruto: Sexual Strengthening · C10
1 day ago
big sister, little brother etc are off putting af this isnt a shtty cultivation novel so can only hope it doesnt take that direction of wording View More
Naruto: Sexual Strengthening · C4
1 day ago
Is it like all other dark pokemon fic? I mean with oak being evil, basically everything is dark af and there is no good at all? With pokemon being slaves etc

cause if so cbf to read. I like reading pokemon fics as something light not all that mass dark sht. If you get me ? Does this story do that ? you said it was grey but how grey ? View More

Osiris_Anubis: absolutely LOVE this story. I usually hate any type of "dark/darkish" pokemon story, but this is a perfect grey to me. I get the loving pokemon fill with the thrill of adventure and mysteriousness of the unknown

Pokemon: chaos
1 day ago

Osiris_Anubis: absolutely LOVE this story. I usually hate any type of "dark/darkish" pokemon story, but this is a perfect grey to me. I get the loving pokemon fill with the thrill of adventure and mysteriousness of the unknown

Pokemon: chaos
1 day ago

RebornJayR: Yeah, I think I could do that. I'll look into it.

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago
Oh yeah something I forgot to mention xD maybe when you do the training for the pokemon other than fighting you can show them training if that makes sense ? So them doing reps around a lake, working on controlling thunder etc. I mean he came from a different world so maybe he can incorporate stuff he has seen there.

Like say take the lighting control method off naruto, or the wind one where they cut the lake etc if you get what I mean ? Never see anyone do this in the stories. never understood why either.. xD View More

RebornJayR: Yeah, I read it. Thank you for the advice. XD

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago

RebornJayR: Yeah, I read it. Thank you for the advice. XD

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago
Btw check I got a long ass review on some thoughts some similar to this comment. Has a couple of ideas you could use ^^ View More

RebornJayR: I wanted him to have some sort of cheat. However, I planned that cheat not working in the future for him to learn something. However maybe I should go back and look at it. Also no he wont be fighting with another person and that's all I'll say about that.

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago
wait xD havent read this yet but cba to read get into it to waste time..

is it worth the read ? I mean I love the concept but im wondering does he just have one pokeball and throws it and any pokemon he wants comes out ? or does he train a set 6 he has chosen ?

finally is it a harem where the girls are dolls ? cause cbf to read a stories like this.. View More
One Piece - Adventure of a Pokemon Trainer · C29
4 days ago
you lost me at cheat xD noice, glad he wont just seen that too many times just sick of it. I mean its a good plot but its just been used too many times. Looking forward to where you take it ^^ View More

RebornJayR: I wanted him to have some sort of cheat. However, I planned that cheat not working in the future for him to learn something. However maybe I should go back and look at it. Also no he wont be fighting with another person and that's all I'll say about that.

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago

RebornJayR: I wanted him to have some sort of cheat. However, I planned that cheat not working in the future for him to learn something. However maybe I should go back and look at it. Also no he wont be fighting with another person and that's all I'll say about that.

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago
Reading Status: C14
Okay so there are a couple of things, first is lizz honestly I hate her. Its just how you brought her in exactly like misty and then had her stalk him etc. I found it extremely annoying. Going from that it seems this is gonna happen a lot.. I mean yes they guy may be handsome but girls will look maybe go up to him but they wont be crazy af, stalk him, grab onto him and drag him around etc. All I can say/ask will this happen throughout ? Cause if it does honestly might just drop it cause it makes it so hard to read. I mean Its fine if you say did it once and then did it again in a different way 50 chaps later if that is a style you like. However its just with every girl he meets its the same crazy stalker sht..

There are a couple of things I do like however, is mainly he is going on the journey alone. I mean its fine having friends in the cities etc meeting at centres now and again or other such places. But when traveling through forests, searching around, discovering new places. I feel him doing this alone is much better not to just read but for the story. I mean he can always have one person travel with him now and again but him alone will allow him to surprise ppl, connect with his pokemon and train/develop them in peace. If with others this wont go aswell.

Another thing that I like is that they all have something that makes them unique (but pika) great for the story and makes a way for us to connect with them. Can only hope you dont get too many pokemon, hopefully only 6.. I mean for a reader its so hard keeping up with like 50 different pokemon. One thing I feel you MUST do is evolve pika.. will makes no sense if he doesnt as his whole thing is going by the game system. However with the evolution you can make it special and just find an image of pika is altered and use that.

Another idea is him maybe making his own company, make it a social media company like instagram or something. (do this once he has won the league) and then he can post to others images of places he sees in his travels, his pokemon etc.

Going back to what I hope you dont go to deep into is the family, two souls, light dark thing. It is rly overused and just came to read a light fic about pokemon. I mean thats what pokemon is.. its just annoying to read for me anyway. Plus seen it wayyyy to many tines.

Finally you HAVE to sort out this move thing... its honestly taking the piss. Literally in all his important fights he magically 'temporally' learns a move to let him win the fight. You want him to win by power, strategy etc not by 'luckily' learning the move he needs to win for 60 secs. View More
The World of Pokemon 2.0
4 days ago
so glad he got rid of the girl... or this will just be a copy of ash just with ppl with different names however there are a couple of things I hope dont carry on and if they do can you let us know ?

first is him conveniently learning the moves he needs to win for 60 secs... so stupid its not even funny. Yes it can work now and then but in his 2 important fights he has won both this way...

second is the backstory... ik itll add something to the story but for personal preference I hate stories with two souls, fight for the body, light and dark, taking over someones body with a fam he doesnt know about... all of these I just find so stupid. The only way I can accept it if they merge at the start and he gains the memories etc View More

RebornJayR: I'll do it. But not in the way you think. You'll probably know when I write about it. Cheers! Lol

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C7
4 days ago
Aye lel theyre so hypocritical. Dont atk the innocence who where only left behind cause they where to young or old... but then its fine for you to slaughter the other race... View More
Rise of the Demon God · C100
4 days ago
Reading Status: C177
So might sound harsh but it happens whenever I read a story I liked. Won't go on massively cause will take to long xD but these are the reason im dropping

First reason I dropped in the first place was cause of ly. She gets handed everything and leeches, not to mention how they suddenly caught up to mc with ease.. lot of other stuff to do with this but many ppl have already said about this in comments.

final reason is cause of the class upgrade. I came back cause I was bored and cared less about the story to ignore the first point. However where the class upgrade went it destroyed what I liked most about the story. Won't spoil it but simply dont understand the choice for it. I understand about boosting her other elements to make them more effective but otherwise it makes no sense to me. Her queen option was by far better from what she has been so far and what she had shown. Personality and skill wise. View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
5 days ago
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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
5 days ago

mustrum: This is most definitely a feel good story, and it is up there in quality compared to some other works on this site.
Unfortunately this does not mean that it's great, since there is a lot of **** stories here.

The main problem I see is that the author most likely practices a discovery writing and makes stuff up on the way.

For example the MC gets skills or useful items that are later forgotten and not used when needed.
There's a skill system in the world. What purpose does it serve is unknown, because MC can just go around and make whatever 'cool stuff' with ice she imagines even though it is not her skill, and apparently the stuff she does is for some reason more effective than skills (exploding/splitting/transforming/remotely controlled ice spears/balls/walls/ramps or whatever else).
There's a lot of things that are suddenly introduced even though it might have been important earlier (time dilation in dungeons for example).

Minor spoiler ahead:

What got me to completely drop the story was the MC killing some random bloke after a second auction just because he happened to have bought an item that she needed. He was not fighting or threatening her. He was just running for his life, being pursued by two thieves. There goes all the talk about her moral integrity and not slaughtering ppl for power I guess.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
5 days ago
tried reading again but with the upgrade being one of the main reasons I liked this novel, the choice has destroyed it. I can tell its going to be one of them master of everything op mc like every other novel... whats so wrong with sticking to a quality skillset instead of jack of all trades ?

One of the main reasons I read this also is bc of the snow girl race. Now its gone to sht soo..

people also saying how theres no development in that path ? rly ? cause theres only as much development as the author says... how do you now the fae class has development to it ????? Plus the weakness ppl are bringing up is stupid... what would you rather ? weakness to only fire that you can reduce by amour and nanotech etc or being weak to more that one element ? Also another thing is having 15% dislike with light creatures... where does she stay ? where does she get her quests ? the light side so having a dislike for her before even meeting proves sever consequences...

Finally why TF would you turn into a CORRUPTED race ??? This is just asking for problems... View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C177
5 days ago

Wallabalooza: Meh. Writer who asks for money every chapter, but can't be bothered to even look over and edit his own work for mistakes. Why anyone would support such a lazy person, I really don't know.

Mediocre story, full of forced plot and unrealistic behavior.

If you tried harder, you could probably do decently enough, but this is not it.

Food Wars: The Golden Hands
6 days ago
This makes no sense ? Draco cannot control or do anything to another great family... they are on the same level. How is she a blood traitor when he is a pure blood also? Honestly this is making less sense as it goes on.

Then another thing that is forced/wrong af is how you did the griffendor thing.. his personality that we have seen so far did a flip just when talking to them.. leading him to be friends with harry etc... from his char he shouldnt care unless they do something. From what you have shown of it anyway View More

CrossArk: Wisdom comes from experience I believe

Harry Potter and the Lord of Darkness · C10
6 days ago
okay so sry but just finding this slow pace rly boring. kina want him to move on now View More
Journey Towards Greatness · C345
6 days ago
huh???? already read this chap no ? did you delete them and re post ? View More
Genius’s Game in Naruto · C11
6 days ago
Think it would be cool if the crows can reverse summon but have never found anyone worthy so just said they couldn't. Maybe in the past the first person ever to be asked was itachi but didnt learn any of the main things as he was dying anyway. Now the mc could be the one worthy and it could be one of pillar skills in the future. View More
Naruto: Road To Godhood · C14
1 week ago
Great, ill continue reading it then xD kinda glad cause its the first marvel fic ive seen with reed View More

Primal_2309: It does not. I got the criticism, and made up a reason for it. They're not usually like that and an external factor is messing with them

A Fantastic Four Story: The Rubber God's Legacy · C7
1 week ago
ayee he shouldnt get it too fast but its not rly that op compered to the marvel verse. Maybe this early it is but later like you said he should get it. I mean he is a genius so it should take him long to figure out the moves but maybe it just takes awhile to practice and acc use it ? View More

Primal_2309: He does uses some of Luffy's moves, but gear 2 and beyond is just too overpowered for now. He needs actual battle experience. I think if I ever give it to him it'll be around the events of Ultron. (If that happens at all...)

A Fantastic Four Story: The Rubber God's Legacy · C7
1 week ago

Primal_2309: He does uses some of Luffy's moves, but gear 2 and beyond is just too overpowered for now. He needs actual battle experience. I think if I ever give it to him it'll be around the events of Ultron. (If that happens at all...)

A Fantastic Four Story: The Rubber God's Legacy · C7
1 week ago

Primal_2309: It does not. I got the criticism, and made up a reason for it. They're not usually like that and an external factor is messing with them

A Fantastic Four Story: The Rubber God's Legacy · C7
1 week ago
lol 2 fem pokemon ?? View More
Reincarnated as the Chosen One · C0
1 week ago

NoobMastar69: This is not a harem fic.

I personally don’t like them much.

Naruto: Road To Godhood · C13
1 week ago
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