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Dont get why this guy is being so cocky... hes how many centuries old but is using everything he has against a 16 year old, who is even a lower level than him....

Should be ashamed of himself View More
The Desolate Era · C125
10 hours ago
defence is king ? What a joke...you can spout all you want just cause you say it in a 'wise' thought out mannor doesn't make it right..

If you never atk how can you win ? defence isnt king... atk is king lmao. What wins you a game ? Atk. Defending helps but like you mentioned its a supplement. Important yes. But not king.

To me in a football game say, midfield is key because you have to get the ball to the atk first before you can win.

This is to say in a fight atk is most important, then defence cannot be low but it has to be strong. You cant just focus on def or that leads to nowhere View More
The Desolate Era · C14
1 day ago

talyn7: Highly fertile? Then why doesn’t he have a brother or sister?

The Desolate Era · C14
1 day ago
Reading Status: C111
Story for me is way to fcking slow. He faces the army, then he goes onto kill the long fam, kills the dad next girl has magic talisman to save her, disciples come to save her he faces them for like 10 chaps, then he finally kills one, goes to the FINALY kill the girl but she is once again saved by another disciple coming, then mc's backing appears, goes to kill the girl AGAIN but now the master comes.

Can you please fcking stop? Nothing has happened in 100+ chaps and every time progress is about to be made something always pops out the wordwork making it go back to square 1. View More
Sovereign of the Three Realms
1 day ago

elano77: 4 chapters. This has to be a record. It took 4 chapters for this story to get ridiculous. Good ideas, terrible execution. Author, I see what you were trying to do with the qi thing. Introducing a separate energy system that upturns the status quo is clever but only if explained right. How can he run at a speed that is beyond his physical limits??? What is he using to run at that speed then??? His determination??? Because it sounds like his physical legs can't run that fast!!! Ridiculous.

The King of Tricks and Magic · C4
3 days ago

DaoiestPopcorn: I completely agree,and the story being in greek mythology does not justify it.

Lord Of The Blood Emeron · C16
3 days ago

Ky4ler: What you expect lol it’s webnovel(trash harem with weebs)

Playing with other Supernaturals
3 days ago

CestMoi: Yeah that harem really turned me off too. This couldve been better but youve let yourself get influenced by some cherry boys lust fantasy.

Playing with other Supernaturals
3 days ago
Reading Status: C0
Acc dont even bother with this sht novel. Read to chap 274 (on a different site) and all it has been is where the author makes his core weaker than everyones purposely weakening the mc so every comp he is in he can 'shock' everyone. Basically big him up every chance he gets. I mean he has was facing these guy way above his level for like 100 chaps then when it comes to him to get to there level he is to scared of it... No reason it isnt stronger for him or anything. Its just not optimum yet.. Not to mention for what everyone else takes say a month to do it takes our glorious mc 5 years or else he will be to strong.

Honestly there are way too many things its not even funny. It goes on endlessly its like the author is a 7 year old child. He should have cultivated for an extra 15 years but nope he cant do that or he would be way ahead. Best spend his time walking to the comp instead. Its acc so dumb its frustrating to read. saw the titles ahead and he doesnt even brake through soon. The author...

Just dont bother reading this. I waisted my time, dont want you to waste yours.

Not trying to be hateful or anything, iys just im extremely pissed of how I waisted my time and how bad its turned out. Was very invested into it as it had a good story but from the points I put out and many others I just had to put this. View More
Talisman Emperor (符皇)
1 week ago
so glad you added the droids uh oh xD Some of the best/funniest parts come from the droids aha View More

Gray_stone3: I’m the dealer, and now your hooked😁

Reincarnated in Star Wars with The System · C15
1 week ago
Reading Status: C35
Like the story development and the novel has an interesting plot. However for me it is a bit too extreme. When she got to the boss it was a slime I feel it changed and went the extreme path. Like that mimi girl wanting to be slave etc If you get me ?

Like said before good plot but too extreme for me. Gl to author thou ! View More
Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy
1 week ago

Domn: This girl is sooo annoying. If i was in mc's place i will kill her

Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy · C33
1 week ago
Cant wait for him to use crash magic and vectors thou will be sick once he does View More

Ryofu: Make him appear on the throne of Vimana : "A king don't need to stand to deal with an Ant" xD

DXD: Golden King of Lucifer · C48
1 week ago

Ryofu: Make him appear on the throne of Vimana : "A king don't need to stand to deal with an Ant" xD

DXD: Golden King of Lucifer · C48
1 week ago

Vanessa_Penuliar: a***.....break my heart....

"Last Dying Wish"; Transcending Soulmates · C3
2 weeks ago
It may not be deserving to you however this is my opinion. Also im pretty sure this is the only 1 star review I have given. You say its baseless ??? Im sry but have you not read the story? I have pointed out MANY things that are copies. So no theyre not baseless.

So your saying its okay to copies someone else's work aslong as they change it slightly so it has a different ending ? sry once again that isnt how copyright works. How would you like it if someone put there heart and soul into something, someone comes along changes parts and passes it off as there own ? Thats okay to you I see. Not for me thou.. so yeah enough said.

Looking at my previous comments ahh the amount of times I someone says that to me.. first of all ive read some bad line up of books recently so that plays a part. Another is every review I do is because I had a problem with it. Ill discuss in comments if I like it however its mainly stones I use if I like it. So its only natural none of them are like that.

Most of them are constructive anyway, why else would I type out a long ass review. Authors have once again come and thanked me for leaving constructive reviews and not hate. Most of the ones that are deleted are because the author cannot stand criticism and delete every bad review.

Finally getting back to the story, all I was saying and the main point was that it was not giving credit where credit is due. Even if he says its inspired by them and gives them credit for that. However the author didnt and passed it off as his own. This was my main problem and why I left a bad review. Clearly you havent read it cause I mean its obvious af, then I even pointed some of them out, leaving many more not mentioned. View More

cosh: Ok. So first off, let's look at the synopsis. Obviously the author intends to spend ALOT of time on this novel. I can easily say that he cares about this novel deeply. Second, your comment on plagiarism is baseless. Simply because ideas from another story is incorporated into the story does not make the story deserving of a 1 star. EVERY story on this platform or wherever incorporates ideas. That is how stories in general improve. It is only when the idea is so blatantly copied that you can easily assume how it will develop is when there is a problem. Now third, I've also seen some of your comments on other stories (around 4-5) and the trend seems to be either you getting your comment deleted or starting an arguement with authors or other readers due to how the story progresses. You need to learn that this is not YOUR story. It is the author's. Just because you dont like how the author made a scene doesn't mean you get to bash his writing skills. Finally fourth, I'm not sure if you have it against the author or something but you came of really harshly to someone simply trying to improve his writing. There are many ways to get your point across without trashing everything the author worked hard for after reading 15 chapters. As I said before, you have a trend of arguing for nothing and I suggest you point all that poison towards something worth getting angry about. Like the 45th president. Either that or don't comment just to hurt someone feeling.

ELECTUS - A tale of Peaceful Demons.
2 weeks ago

Hayato_Shinohara: I agree with the whole cursing aspect with nobles. Also, seeing how honest of a reader you are, do check my work out if you like. It won't have the cringe tropes that you've been complaining on from the other fantasies you've been through.

Rise of House Black · C6
3 weeks ago
oh yeah another thing his two generals and him should be tier 1 humans thats three. so why does only two of them upgrade ? once again changing what you previously wrote to suit a plot further along...

one of the greatest things that the lords empire did really well was show the reactions of everyone when mc did something. When he became tier 1 you explained why yes but then when his general's upgraded, then would have been a perfect chance. View More

lsoma: okay not to sound harsh but this is a **** version of the lords empire (when it was good)

first of all you said he is reincarnated yes ? he may be in a different region and all but this still doesnt make an excuse for the mc being so fcking stupid.

his decisions frankly piss me off. He doesnt take over a village ? why.. cause he wants to let it grow ? huh ? why not take it and grow it himself ? potentially leaving an enemy to grow.

Another thing is his upgrade was done so sht it purely just doesnt make sense. He waited for like what a week to upgrade. He wanted to upgrade in a city so he doesnt grab attention. Fine. So why does when he goes to the city he doesnt upgrade ? he upgrades in a middle of a war and does completely the opposite of what he wanted.

Then his attack on the two villages also is so stupid. He uses a spell beyond his own limits and it doesnt even work ? EVERYONE knows not to put all your eggs in one basket in case it fails. This is a war not a game. He should know plenty of that as he is reincarnated. He then goes and duels the enemy commanders himself after exhausting himself from using his magic and then is surprised atked by the enemy. Once again making me in awe of how stupid the mc is.


Bottomline is the author is practically forcing the story along, leaving it unrefined af. Im acc in disbelief on how bad the chapters after chap 30 are. Before that I could deal with it, taking it as a worse lords empire/world building novel than most. Other than the annoying forceful writing at times I could still cope. Its just the author takes it to the extreme after this.

My advice is the mc is reincarnated, he NEEDS to be more smart. You say he is from a different region yes. but he still has all that experience from when he was in that world. Also a MUST is the flow, you cant force the story like you are as frankly its sht to read.

Gl with the work.

Tale of the Legendary Emperor
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C37
okay not to sound harsh but this is a **** version of the lords empire (when it was good)

first of all you said he is reincarnated yes ? he may be in a different region and all but this still doesnt make an excuse for the mc being so fcking stupid.

his decisions frankly piss me off. He doesnt take over a village ? why.. cause he wants to let it grow ? huh ? why not take it and grow it himself ? potentially leaving an enemy to grow.

Another thing is his upgrade was done so sht it purely just doesnt make sense. He waited for like what a week to upgrade. He wanted to upgrade in a city so he doesnt grab attention. Fine. So why does when he goes to the city he doesnt upgrade ? he upgrades in a middle of a war and does completely the opposite of what he wanted.

Then his attack on the two villages also is so stupid. He uses a spell beyond his own limits and it doesnt even work ? EVERYONE knows not to put all your eggs in one basket in case it fails. This is a war not a game. He should know plenty of that as he is reincarnated. He then goes and duels the enemy commanders himself after exhausting himself from using his magic and then is surprised atked by the enemy. Once again making me in awe of how stupid the mc is.


Bottomline is the author is practically forcing the story along, leaving it unrefined af. Im acc in disbelief on how bad the chapters after chap 30 are. Before that I could deal with it, taking it as a worse lords empire/world building novel than most. Other than the annoying forceful writing at times I could still cope. Its just the author takes it to the extreme after this.

My advice is the mc is reincarnated, he NEEDS to be more smart. You say he is from a different region yes. but he still has all that experience from when he was in that world. Also a MUST is the flow, you cant force the story like you are as frankly its sht to read.

Gl with the work. View More
Tale of the Legendary Emperor
3 weeks ago
Okay but why didnt he upgrade in the city like he said he would? View More
Tale of the Legendary Emperor · C32
3 weeks ago
where have you been ? well ive won this from battling a dragon. This from an immortal. Oh this is the one I got for saving the world etc xD View More

OrangeShotgun: I see it as more of a collection like "this is a sword I got by defeating an immortal, I got this one from the tail of a drake"

Elder Blood Witcher · C64
3 weeks ago
xD this made me think when he goes back to his world and meets everyone again and starts showing off to them aha View More

OrangeShotgun: I see it as more of a collection like "this is a sword I got by defeating an immortal, I got this one from the tail of a drake"

Elder Blood Witcher · C64
3 weeks ago

OrangeShotgun: I see it as more of a collection like "this is a sword I got by defeating an immortal, I got this one from the tail of a drake"

Elder Blood Witcher · C64
3 weeks ago

Niggross: He's currently In the mindset of "If it's there I might as well take it" I'm sure If anyone else found themselves able to collect magical weapons and artifacts they would. Plus the folded space is his own creation, perhaps when he gets better at magic he can add various additions ;)

Elder Blood Witcher · C64
3 weeks ago

rolas: Writing quality: It is quite good. No mtl translation from another language here. Still, the author is no Shakespeare so 3 stars. well done.

Stability of update: It is regular and consistent so far. Considering that the novel started 9 days ago you get 3 stars. Well done.

Story development: It is a clear copy of two well-known novels. No matter how much the author wants to deny it. it is more a fanfiction than an original. so one star. not so well done.

Character design: Well we have one character with a little flesh. the mc. the other characters are basically just names doing what their designated jobs demand of them. so basically one mc and a bunch of npcs. MC is somewhat stupid for having reincarnated. it would have been better if you didn't go with the whole reborn thingy. if you go with that, you need to have an mc who is at least a little capable. not well done.

World Background: Same as story development. It is basically a copy of two other novels with some quickly thrown in addons. You know the type EA does? Not really working. (The fact that you can just throw war prisoners into your main city for them to gain that eternal loyal trait is just a major flaw.)

Conclusion: It is a rather well-written fanfiction (no matter what the author says, it is a fanfiction in my eyes.) with the normal problems you expect from an ******* author. there are many things to do better and many things to stop doing. But the author published a story and tries his best so well done. I just can't give you a high rating. I mean, i could give you 5 stars like everyone else but what rating would i then give a professional, truly well written story?

Tale of the Legendary Emperor
3 weeks ago
was gonna read this... xD cbf to read something the same as world online and lords empire. Grew tired of endless fillers and bs in them. What parts are similar to it ? Is it just a pure copy ? or? View More

rolas: Writing quality: It is quite good. No mtl translation from another language here. Still, the author is no Shakespeare so 3 stars. well done.

Stability of update: It is regular and consistent so far. Considering that the novel started 9 days ago you get 3 stars. Well done.

Story development: It is a clear copy of two well-known novels. No matter how much the author wants to deny it. it is more a fanfiction than an original. so one star. not so well done.

Character design: Well we have one character with a little flesh. the mc. the other characters are basically just names doing what their designated jobs demand of them. so basically one mc and a bunch of npcs. MC is somewhat stupid for having reincarnated. it would have been better if you didn't go with the whole reborn thingy. if you go with that, you need to have an mc who is at least a little capable. not well done.

World Background: Same as story development. It is basically a copy of two other novels with some quickly thrown in addons. You know the type EA does? Not really working. (The fact that you can just throw war prisoners into your main city for them to gain that eternal loyal trait is just a major flaw.)

Conclusion: It is a rather well-written fanfiction (no matter what the author says, it is a fanfiction in my eyes.) with the normal problems you expect from an ******* author. there are many things to do better and many things to stop doing. But the author published a story and tries his best so well done. I just can't give you a high rating. I mean, i could give you 5 stars like everyone else but what rating would i then give a professional, truly well written story?

Tale of the Legendary Emperor
3 weeks ago
With all the weapons the mc is collecting, will he have two main ones (silver sword and arcell) and all the others for specific situations ?

I mean could be cool if he uses his folded space like Gilgamesh ?

Seems rather pointless if he just gets tons of swords and never uses them. Dont need tons thou ? I mean itll be a pain to remember like 100 swords xD View More
Elder Blood Witcher · C64
3 weeks ago
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Ryumi Pirates Adventures
3 weeks ago
you didnt say kind of you said was useless.. again were gonna argue so lets just leave it. Like I said before ffs

if I cannot ? Its YOU who isnt acting mature lmao your sure I am younger than you ? not so sure with your comments xD View More

Nickelaos_Nogaro: ohh i am sure that you are younger than me ;) and don't ask me to act mature if you cannot as well

i only told you what you did was kind of useless if you just look at the cover and synopsis than to make a real review about the novel itself.,, it's you get mad at my remark!

Ryumi Pirates Adventures
3 weeks ago
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