Webnovel Author: Aeternabilis - Fanfic Collection

It gets to a point it doesn’t make sense. There is this thing called heart of the realm and if it gets absorbed the realm is destroyed. Mc won’t take it away and protect it cause he is afraid of his peaceful life being ruined…. But then if it is absorbed his peaceful life will be over cause the realm he is in is destroyed. He always says he has no strength but then as soon as his disciples need help he instantly kills the enemy. Its like he suddenly becomes self aware then instantly forgets it after. Picking and choosing

So the story seemed to have a lot of promise and I’m ngl only got to chapter 7 so take this with a pinch of salt. What has turned me off and made me stop reading this book is the following. The mc is genius not seen since aincent times. He is spending ages on his cultivation elevating it all to the max at each level. By creating scriptures etc and giving these seeds out that upgrades spirit roots. Like cool stuff, plus love that he has wood root. Seems like a good direction. But… this random arse girl from the central continent is leaching off of the mc via enlightenment taking his ideas and strength and spreading it around making her already powerful sect even stronger. No ryme no reason. Essentialy the mc has lost what makes him unique and all his secrets and power is being used for some random characters benifit and of course this character is a world destroying beauty…. Complete turn off for me. Gl to the author but not for me

So the story of you like football is awful. It’s not football. It’s more like a fighting novel with football added as an afterthought. I mean you can atk other players and kill them… I went into this with the mindset from the description that it would be something like inazuma eleven. Where they have special shots, dribbles etc I though this would be so cool, however I was taken aback by how it’s essentialy who can kill the other team with a football. I think this is why I’m so turned off by the story, my exepectations are fcked and yeah. Some may like it but if you have the same thoughts as me going into this then you won’t like it. Good luck to the author but yeah peace out ✌🏼