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Andylovescandy: Writing Quality: 2 star = The grammar is very messy, it feels like I am reading a novel from lmntl, but its more confusing. Its still understandable to say the least so 2 stars.
Stability of Updates: 5 star = Author keeps releasing a lot of chapters which is nice.
Story development: 1 star = I have read the author works before and I realized that he keeps wanting to push this novel in the same direction as Hitose note, which was way better than this.
The only difference is, some new anime like Detective conan is added and instead of taking Raku's place author went for his brother.
The relationships are awkward, I get that, its the type of novel were MC is great and every girls keeps falling for our MC but this is the same place where the author fails and makes this novel worse than Hitose note or any other novel he wrote before.
The girls keep falling for MC but Author keeps cock blocking himself, even though we all know that he will have s*x with the girl a chapter later on.
Character design: 1 star: Even though the characters are from other animes, author fails to maintain the character's behaviors even though he doesn't have to think about any of them. (I know its hard to write and bla bla bla... but these characters already exist in other works, so its just copying the character's characteristics but author still fails to do so.)
Let's leave the other character's for now, but the author can't decide even on the MC characteristics. Sometimes he is dense, sometimes he is way to clever and flirty, sometimes he is a gentleman but other time is a creepy pervert.
He keeps acting like every girl belongs to him even though sometimes he keeps stopping himself from getting them. Like make your mind, do you want them or not.
And the characters, Every chapter at least 5 new characters are introduced and every one of them sounds and acts like a harem candidate, By the count of it, MC is fu*king every women in his town. I am on chapter 58 right now and I lost count of how many girls there are by the 10th chapter.
World Background: 2 Star = The world is very confusing since a lot of different anime's are cramped into one place. But props to the author for trying but it could be done better.
Conclusion: I am not hating on author or his work like I said, I liked his previous novel before but I am quite disappointed since instead of improving he went downhill from what he created.
If you want to read this novel keep in mind that its not going to be sophisticated in the very least. Its like a very plain ****** novel written by a hyped up author, who wants to make his novel good but it turns out bad. It's not that bad like some novels in this site but its not good either.
If you want to binge read something due to you having a lot of free time, go ahead and read this novel.
I suggest author to focus on making a single chapter perfect than releasing 10 in a day. Quality over Quantity.Start by Becoming a Mangaka
lordjesus: “You want sum fuk?” said the MC. “Yes” said the beautiful lady. And thus, they did the fuk.
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Webzayne: It was stated earlier that only the mc can practice the techniques due to his unique body, but that's thrown out of the window immediately. I don't like this **** where the MC starts throwing out techniques left and right, steadily growing the target in his back. Especially in the Marvel universe where there are a billion secret agencies and aspects/god-like beings watching.Ascending the Heaven's · C5
Better_Name: It’s really bad the main character is too op and every girl seems to just like him because he’s hot or some **** it’s really bad. Then outta nowhere he makes some plot where his wife and god his father in law were kidnapped or something resulting in the mc becoming a half-assed avenger who want strength but doesn’t even do anything he has no personality and just follows the system and then there’s the harem problem with there being so much speech from those extra clutter characters (Natsu grey happy and now jack sparrow) that the chapters look longer then they really are it’s has no substance he has no goals everything is just stupid it’s like watching first graders acting out a play with them getting lines wrongThe Strongest Omni Traveler
Nydre: So that's how you take criticism. Says a lot about the quality of your stories.The Strongest Omni Traveler
Nydre: Why the f.uck do I need to? Just because you can't accept criticism? I'm sorry, but I don't feel like wasting my time further.The Strongest Omni Traveler
Nydre: This is cancer. I knew a rewrite was a bad idea, but how was it ruined this badly. No character is how they are supposed to be and just break out of character to make the mc look amazing. The grammar is barely ok. He just keeps babysitting people. The system says he shouldn't change what's going on yet keeps giving quests to save characters and change the timeline. He made an entirely new empire and keeps doing whatever he wants, what do you mean not change anything. The system points are inconsistent and are poorly used or never used. Before the rewrite he used to have a good personality and k relationship with his wives. Now he gets beaten up for things he can't control yet he doesn't do anything. Natsu shakes in fear because of the mc's aura and jellal literally thinks " I shouldn't have dones this to Erza". Literally the world is moving to make the mc satisfied. His wives are so enraged because Erza cried they fling the angry him away and he doesn't do anything, it even says he was scared. Not only that, they haven't even met erza! Yet they are enraged. He also has a compulsive disorder to show off. This is just stupid.The Strongest Omni Traveler
GGMissFortune: Barely Passable time waster but Meh key point is whoever wrote this is one salty mofo!!!
Barely Passable time waster but Meh key point is whoever wrote this is one salty mofo!!!
Barely Passable time waster but Meh key point is whoever wrote this is one salty mofo!!!The Strongest Omni Traveler
Banana_Bomb: seriously, someone offered him to teach how to cultivate, but he piss all over that offer.
one day his over reliant of the system will bite him, probably die because his dependency.The Strongest Omni Traveler · C149
LordAinzSama: Author cannot take criticism and deletes post once the facts are laid before his eyes~
Also terrible story writing about a guy who chooses a goddess over his wife and family.The Strongest Omni Traveler
LazyTiany: I would love it if the MC goes to Stunning Edge World next. Since the MC there is a female, it would be great if they ended up together.How I traveled the Omniverse · C0
Chryseum: Out of character Ehit. He likes playing games with mortals, not wiping them out personally for a mistake that wasn't theirs. Even if he loses another body, he can just wait another couple hundred years to find a new one.A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C37
nagatoch: Can you make Mc became more mutual personality Mc right now is like a kid having a strength and not know how to use it and if the strength is gone he going to get bully because of he prideful personality and childish mind he not even thinking about the future at all and he forgot that there are people who are stronger than he himselfPeerless Being from a Higher Plane · C6
Battoth: Wish Tatsuya snatches Jasmine. And maybe helps heal Yun Che in exchange for his treasues. Would make Yun Che a regular bloke and we wouldnt have two protagonists cause that just don't work. Wanna see Jasmine and Tatsuya interactions. Kickass stuff 😃The Irregular In ATG · C19
Bruhnoe: Sigh, comments like that are stupid.
1) I do not care about the novel being Harem or not. Of course I most prefer Harem in Fan-fics. But the reason for this is that if the author puts more than one woman liking the MC I hope that they all stay with him.
I do not understand why you have a Harem with 1000 women. Even if he gave 24 hours to each, it would still take him 3 years for him to cycle back to the first woman. And in the end, only a few would appear and import into the novel.
2) I understand the MC pick up the treasures of Yun Che, but I see no reason for him to get the Evil God drop of blood permanently. He can simply analyze with the Elemental Sight ability and that's it. And it would be even better if he used the drop of blood to create not only Profound Veins more powerful, but also a stronger body. Thus being able to use the power of Evil God completely.
3) And if it were someone who had read the original about the world of ATG and reincarnated with what Tatsuya can do in this novel. I would prefer that he not take the opportunity of Yun Che to cultivate. If it were me, I would cultivate to the peak of power in this world, take Yun Che back to his family, along with his grandfather, and deliver Su Ling'er to Yun Che along with his master. Okay, he'll stay out of the way and the story. You do not have to be an asshole with the guy.The Irregular In ATG · C13
Kali_Grapy: Am I the only one that feel that this fanfic is becoming less and less enjoyable to read? I guess I just don't like these past chapters or something. And I have no idea why and I don't want to reread those to know why. This is just my opinion anyway.Illimitable Fantasy Works · C49
After_Wing: Sure author.. not totally convinced since you becoming like those HIATUS writers. *Sigh* another hidden gem, a beautiful shiny carved starlight gem has fallen.A Knight's Will. · C58
Lazyy: Uchiha is the best pick? Pfft, yeah right. Half-Demon from Devil May Cry would have come with no weaknesses and he'd be incredibly physically strong as well. Even the Dragon Bloodline would have been a better pick than an Uchiha Bloodline. Like damn, just say he likes the Uchiha Bloodline because he's a narufag instead of sprouting bullsh*t reasons about it being the best pick for a beginner. It's really not, I could think of a few different bloodlines that completely stomp on a low-level Uchiha Bloodline like the one he currently has.
It's just disappointing that another fanfic has been infiltrated by Naruto sh*t.Life in Anime World with System! · C5
Reapers: Also people say chap coming out soon but when is the soon cause you can just wait a month and post a chap so please inform us.Devils Testament: Rebirth · C3
Apinity_ExMachina: The cliffhanger at the end is not really funny anymore. Its starting to get annoying when you finish a chapter with your resolution being “cliff hanger”A New Chance · C68
Adelasorra: No harem please! There are soo many already on this website, it is getting boring and repetitive. Your character is already a monster, no need to turn him into a hormonal one too.In Marvel as a Slime (MU) · C10
SuperHippo: please, no harem... It'd be a different story if this is a BTTH fanfic or some other xianxia, but this is Marvel right??In Marvel as a Slime (MU) · C10
YoungPrimordial: did you forget that slimes are genderless? there shouldnt be romance at all lmao.In Marvel as a Slime (MU) · C8
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