Webnovel Author: DragonRiderOfHell

DragonRiderOfHell

6mth

Posted

So i just read all three chapters(as far as the book goes currently)I'm enjoying myself a lot so far, a new world filled with the unknown, and the author is really showing that off.It is a really good book, so please do not stop writing it at all. I'll keep reading at my own pace, and once the novel has got around 40 or so chapters I'll review again.See you soon!

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DragonRiderOfHell

11mth

Commented

Wow its my birthday

July 5, 2275.

Videogame: Charge Ten Billion On Day One And Got A SSS-grade Talent

Games · Windhunter

DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

in an "instant"

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Her Devil Prince

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

a great chapter

ch 20 Stupid Riddles

Her Devil Prince

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

'why don't you just tell me' you missed the you

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Her Devil Prince

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

made me smile. Acting like someone far older suddenly

Laughing at the childish behaviour of Lin Qin Chao Xing replied, "This is not a game, girl."

Her Devil Prince

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

check the wording here especially around the laid down part.

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Her Devil Prince

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

i can feel the drama building..what a chapter

ch 18 First Riddle

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Posted

It is a good novel so far, yes it is on the darker side. But i am just loving it as well as loving how the author is portraying the world so far. I am a huge fan already, so I definitely would recommend this novel 10/10

Her Devil Prince

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

any, not anu

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

empress is the spelling... i did not see before, but it'll be best to check the spelling of the word in past uses of it.

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

re read this chapter, and make sure the words flow. Eg 'The Empress wanted to...'

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

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Space between words is missing.

She gave her a sly smile which clearly showed that she won and Chao Xing lost. She was finally getting rid of her forever. Chao Xing gritted her teeth looking at her, she got up from the floor and went near her.

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DragonRiderOfHell

1yr

Commented

I can not say what yet, if anything the chapter seems to say the same thing, or well a similar thing in to many ways. Confusing me as i read.

Some tears appeared in her eyes as she remembered her parents. Wiping her tears by herself she got up a little and then sat on the bed with her knees hugging her chest, her arms around her legs. She put her head on her knees as she asked her,"Would I ever be able to find a peaceful life?"