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skills... already grandma and he's a beginner and same str View More

Randomlyrandom: This is retarded. He fights secret agents, monsters and all that good ****, but can't even hit an ******* boxer....right .......

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C39
2 days ago
they have same str but not skills... you have str but you don't know how to use it... View More

Darkeorb: I dont get it, why is he worried so much when his str is close to 1.5tonnes cllse to captain americas stregth in one of the marvel comic. Just one punch them man.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C38
2 days ago
noted.. View More

gingertabby: Asshole author.know your place. A 1 year old can't do all that exercise and conversing fluently. Even holding spoon and fork is a big no. Your really a big fool. Edit your work.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C4
2 days ago
well he forgot a skill book though... that's pretty good rewards View More

dukroger: Friend author, your story has great potential, but some things are not going well, this system is really stingy, by the monsters that he mainly killed the krakem he should have won more, in the dota if he constantly wins gold and here he is not having it It would be interesting for him to have a world of his where he summoned heroes and dota characters and built his kingdom, so he could covoncalos to help him in the Marvel world not to mention that heroes could help him with the domination of his powers.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C35
1 month ago
well... i sen worse than my novel.. View More

shypunk: the further into the chap i went the worse it got did you give up on the story as think fuk it and deside to write brashly

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C34
1 month ago
ok... thanks for the review anyways... since its my first timei made this novel i can i accept your criticism View More

Daoist366412: such a nice concept but the story is all over the place, first problem is Grammar and it is a really really big problem, most of the time it's just some minor issues like 'he' or 'she' or something but in this story it's just god awful. There's also the plot which is just jumping from 1 place to the next constantly, no real pacing.
Then the biggest and most cringy mistake a author ever makes, Toddler hero where nobody really questions a toddler talking like an ***** and making ***** decisions.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System
1 month ago
nah... no bro so i just try my best do this novel View More

Generic: I think u should really try and find someone to help u find some mistakes after u write.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C32
2 months ago

Elyon: As a fellow writer, I understand that we have a long way to go if English is not our primary language. However, since I understand this point, this also means that there's plenty of room for improvement. Hey, my grammar is not perfect as well so I'll be frank and try to motivate you to do better as well. So writing quality is 3/5

Stability of Updates
Readers like to read novels that have a stable release date. Make sure to work on that as well. 3/5

Story Development:
To be honest, this is the first time I've seen a one-year-old do all those things and more. So I'll give you props for your imagination and award you with 4/5

Character Design:
It's a bit wild and unorthodox, but it works so why not? 5/5 here for you.

World Background
The world building is nice and the first few chapters are hinting that something big is about to happen. Will look forward to everything once you are able to give stable releases 4/5 for this one.

Overall Score 3;8
This novel is promising. If you can manage to get an editor it would slowly turn into something awesome. So I hope, that you will be able to get an editor for your work. No, make that, I hope that the two of us can find a good editor for our stories. Kudos and more power to you ;)

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System
3 months ago
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The Legendary Baka Warriors
3 months ago
ohh... shameless mc!!! hahaha View More
The Legendary Baka Warriors · C0
3 months ago
wait sure po kayo?if you are really interested talaga pre message/search mo nalang ako sa facebook kenneth porgatorio.... View More

Ventriloquists: Kahit wala sweldo Hahahah. Experience din tsaka gusto kong maenjoy ng iba toh Hahahaha

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C30
3 months ago

zStick21: Thanks for the chapter!

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C30
3 months ago

zStick21: More!!!

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C30
3 months ago

Ventriloquists: Pre, need mo ba editor? Though di naman ako magaling kaya ko tumulong.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C30
3 months ago
sorry pre pero wala akong pang sweldo sayo hahaha...wag nalang hahaha View More

Ventriloquists: Pre, need mo ba editor? Though di naman ako magaling kaya ko tumulong.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C30
3 months ago

Generic: salamat sa chapter.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C29
3 months ago

TrueImmortalDevil: Dude, wanna know something the mc could have said to Melinda when she talked about which his abilities they knew that would be funny?

"... Keep acting mysterious and i wont say a word :P"
Then when his mom walks in.
"Mom shes being mean!"

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C28
3 months ago
hahaha good one!! View More

TrueImmortalDevil: Dude, wanna know something the mc could have said to Melinda when she talked about which his abilities they knew that would be funny?

"... Keep acting mysterious and i wont say a word :P"
Then when his mom walks in.
"Mom shes being mean!"

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C28
3 months ago
haist.... ****ty interview these days... so i got nothing to do... View More
Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C28
3 months ago
evasion=reflexes View More

Lanais: Right. Suddenly marvel villains have magic immunity and physical evasion.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C27
3 months ago

daoistlone: Thanks for the chapter and hardwork,

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C27
3 months ago

undyinginmortall11: Yeaah finally you came back from the grave.
Welcome back to the land of the living.XD
Hoop to see much more in the future

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C27
3 months ago
keep up the good work bruh.. I am same as you also an author of marvel fanfic... so just don't drop the novel... even you update in months just don't f*ckin drop this ok? just up the good work fellow author!! View More
Ben ten in marvel · C1
4 months ago
no prob pre!! View More

Generic: first still need a bit more polishing in the grammar aspect.

salamat sa chapter pre!

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C26
4 months ago
Reading Status: C8
as also an author of fanfic, I can say is that this is a good read for those Marvel fans out there so yeah is pretty enjoyable even it;'s just a few chapters. View More
I am in the Marvel Cinematic Universe?
5 months ago
fine imagine Jericho from (host fighter) View More

Jtubby: 1 year old doing archery

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C11
5 months ago

Shirofroz: Already bought tickets for endgame

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System · C24
5 months ago
hahaha... thanks for the review!! View More

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Living in Marvel World with DOTA System
5 months ago

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Living in Marvel World with DOTA System
5 months ago
come on bro.... if you just spammer use it to comment not like this!!... View More

Elder: Edit this sh_it. Edit this sh_it. Edit this sh_it.
Edit this sh_it. Edit this sh_it. Edit this sh_it.
Edit this sh_it. Edit this sh_it. Edit this sh_it.

Living in Marvel World with DOTA System
5 months ago
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