Strawberry_Pancake
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Horror and sci-fi lover. Likes to write things and share with others. Cares about grammar and writing style. Horrible at drawing, but a decent digital artist. Loves indie works of all kind.
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The Phantom School
4.5
Story of a few students of the Chersonese High School, unleashing the horrifying secrets of their school building in a thrilling adventure. Everything has been pretty normal until a group of friends decided to make an extended stay in their school building. Despite all of the precautions taken by their teacher, the protagonists has found themselves in an adventure full of action and mystery. They will have to fight for survival as they uncover the years-old secrets of their school and seek a way out. Soon enough, their mental states will deteriorate, and no one will be able to trust anyone, even their own selves.
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Sol Conflict
The diplomatic relations between People's Republic of Mars and Atlantic-Pacific Federation have soured. The cold war between two major factions is getting hotter as both parties race for rapid mobilization of their space navies. At the calm before the storm, Lieutenant Kagan is called back to service aboard his old warship Lodos, under command of his close friend; Rear Admiral Tachibana. The time runs out, and the declaration of war is imminent. Will they be able to end this terrifying war before it crushes everything they once held dear? Is there right and wrong at the time of war? How do they know they are on the right side? NOTE: This is a hard-science Sci-Fi book that follows the laws of physics to the letter, and is likely to include many scientific terms. But don't worry, I included sources for their definitions, so you will understand the novel.
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The Mountain Temple
A new college student, who recently moved to the small town of Yuvakaya, gets caught in a heavy rain and seeks shelter next a book store. Located at the base of a mountain, an interesting set of events there lead him to discover a hidden world larger than he could ever imagine! However, this grand revelation comes at a heavy cost... The misery of loss awaits him as he prepares to face unimaginable dangers to solve an eons-old mystery. Training himself on a long-forgotten mystical art; will he give in to the fear and darkness, or survive the trial by fire to light up his own path?
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Overlord_Venus: This mountain temple is a story set in a remote village that was situated at the foot of a non-scenic mountain.
Our mc moved over to stay with his aunt in the village as his University was located next to the village. Two weeks passed by normally until the day it began to rain heavily and the MC encountered a kind shopkeeper who ran a book store.
The story begins with a slice of life aspect of the boy as he slowly learns of the mystery surrounding the mountain.
I felt that the way in which the author described the plot to be quite smooth and the transition between the scenes went with the flow.
The way in which the conversation between the characters were portrayed and how the author tried to convey their emotions ( including the ******* related to a few situations) felt more on the *******ish side.
What I liked about the story was how the author paced the flow of events ( it was slow and steady) as he slowly introduced one mystery after another and steadily built up the plot. There was no cultivation cliche that was introduced till now and the characters are painted to be on the realistic side.
The woodwork is slightly *******ish but I found myself getting immersed into the world he created.
Conclusion: This is a fun read. Don't hesitate and just dive into the chaptersThe Mountain Temple
Taichi_Mairi: This story is great,
In every death i love how they're so specific and detailed and that the more you read the more you feel as if you are inside the book actually witnessing everything.....its kinda scary but Awesome!!!😖The Phantom School
vikranta777: Its an amazing story
It gives chill down my spine
totally loved it
The story has the ability to keep the reader's interest and when it is over u will definitely feel the painThe Phantom School
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Chronische: Waiting for the next one. Let me know when it is out!
Sol Conflict · C55
Chronischen: Haha, at least you're honest!
Mars is in some real crap, huh? The disunity efforts of the Federation worked like a charm.Sol Conflict · C45
Qiao_Anhao_2819: Wow! It's just wow, is that only an intro for the whole story? Ahhh so amazing and so interesting😱✨ I love this story already😉❤
The Phantom School · C1
Strawberry_Pancake: Good points, but large space stations can do most of these in a more cost-effective way. Settlements on other, more friendly planets actually caused Luna's civilian population to drop after the initial "Buy a house on the Moon!" hype ended.
Sol Conflict · C43
Chronische: Are there any major lunar settlements? I would imagine there would be before Martian settlements, but I dunno. Might be a no mans land like the Arctic, but used for observation posts and possibly secret weapons platforms.
Sol Conflict · C43
Chronischen: Well, it is also the closest (other than the moon), and most Earth-like, to boot. It has a lot going for it!
Sol Conflict · C43
Chronischen: Well, it is more land in the case of overcrowding, a potential prison world, like Austrlia but moreso, a fine strategic position against other nations on Earth but also against potential future invasion from outside (like right now!), and... lusury resorts. Lot of reasons to have, at least, significant habitation domes, if not full scale terraforming!
Sol Conflict · C43
Chronischen: Seems odd to skip a major lunar terraforming and go straight to Mars unless there was a treaty blocking it for military reasons. It is much closer, if nothing else, so shipping supplies and labor over would be far easier!
Sol Conflict · C43
Chronischen: Seems odd to skip a major lunar terraforming and go straight to Mars unless there was a treaty blocking it for military reasons. It is much closer, if nothing else, so shipping supplies and labor over would be far easier!
Sol Conflict · C43
Chronische: Are there any major lunar settlements? I would imagine there would be before Martian settlements, but I dunno. Might be a no mans land like the Arctic, but used for observation posts and possibly secret weapons platforms.
Sol Conflict · C43
Sol Conflict · C42
Chronische: Good picks! I would recommend Heinlin and Larry Niven as well as Phillip Jose Farmer. Maybe someday your name will be among them!
Sol Conflict · C39
Chronische: It's a Heinlin classic. Which sci fi authors are your favorite?
Sol Conflict · C39
Chronische: Have you read The Moon is a Harsh Mistress? Similar intrigue and asymetrical warfare situation.
Sol Conflict · C39
yaoyueyi: Renowned author DemotivatedSloth returns with an incredible work of deep symbolism and meaning. His most recent work-- or better put, his newest piece of sacred artwork descended from the holy muses of writing-- "While others cultivate, I use RPG leveling system to cultivate their girlfriends", creates a lasting impact on the reader from the very first word in the novel, "get". Every single word in DemotivatedSloth's writing brings deep, hidden messages along with it, with the themes being so complex that even the most skilled readers or critics would be unable to decipher all of its value.
The artwork centers on a character with the name of "Bart". As described in the writing, he was a "classical" American teenager until reincarnating into a completely different world through a god who took pity on his tragic death. From this premise, DemotivatedSloth picks up an unique idea that no author has ever attempted before. As the story continues on, more and more unexpected events occur, each event symbolic of deeper messages. Quite frankly, as the reader attempts to absorb this immense and powerful language of DemotivatedSloth, they will find that it's quite difficult to truly comprehend the beauty and value of his work. In fact, the concepts and motifs that DemotivatedSloth represents within his novel proves that only one who has ascended to the level of a pure literary genius would be able to comprehend the absolute depth of his work.
Most particularly, the reader receives quite a deep emotional blow after reading about the "babies" in Chapter Two. DemotivatedSloth presents the first challenge to the main character with the symbolic babies which absolutely represent certain values such as the cycle of life and human incapability or weakness. By introducing said babies, the value of the work raises to a whole other level of new insight. These babies could be considered as the most incredible part of the novel so far.
Overall, the stunning "While others cultivate, I use RPG leveling system to cultivate their girlfriends" sets a whole new standard in the literary field and industry. It would be belittling to give this artwork a full five stars, almost. In the future, this novel will be the work that every young writer looks up to, earning its place as an incredibly unique classic in the history of Webnovels.While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
Strawberry_Pancake: An incredible work of art. The story got me hooked in the first chapter. I love the plot.
The bad part is that it doesn't contain a legendary sword that can shoot ultraviolet beams.While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
MotivatedSloth: It will
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
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While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C1
Devil's Word magic in Fairy Tail · C6
Chronische: Very important additional reading!
V-Neural, v-neu, or just VN (veen) got a bit more kick to the names, but who am I to judge the marketing of THE FUTURE!!!Sol Conflict · C36
Lin_XiaoLong: For the writing quality, I would like to suggest to the author to do another look over at least once before uploading the chapters for any errors. "You're" and "Your" are two different things. Also, punctuations and sometimes, capitalization problems.
Please don't let this review put you down. There is still room for improvements as long as you are willing to improve! Keep writing what you like and learn from mistakes! I also have a few mistakes of my own sometimes that I miss even after the first edit.The Darkness In Your Mind
daniel_4: Es ist eine gute Geschichte ...,.................... .. . '
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