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ch 147 Chapter 145: Battle ends.

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi

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ch 147 Chapter 145: Battle ends.

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi

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Or instead of sharp, use whatever descriptive word you feel is appropriate, like blunt, quaking, whatever you feel would be best.

Suddenly, a sudden pain blossomed on the sides of my head 'I probably hit my head on a stone or something. Then my head cleared as I started discerning what was going on around me.

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi

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"Suddenly, a sudden pain blossomed". I feel it would be better to say "Suddenly, a sharp pain blossomed". I feel saying the word sudden twice is a bit redundant, to me at least.

Suddenly, a sudden pain blossomed on the sides of my head 'I probably hit my head on a stone or something. Then my head cleared as I started discerning what was going on around me.

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi

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Ah yes, the eternal struggle of immortals with a death wish and the blacksmith's creations that shan't let them die.

The healers continued to bait and mock their charges all the way back to the gates where the immortals moved toward the foundries established just inside where their armour could undergo an emergency refit. No doubt Smithant was already bashing the exhausted soldiers over the head with her hammer, lamenting the damage done to her precious armour. The moniker 'immortals' had run amazingly true over the duration of the siege, only a single member had perished in the fighting so far. The others had been unsure whether to curse or praise their sister for her misfortune, but they had gathered for a solemn vigil as the soldier had been peeled from her armour and laid to rest.

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Seems that way

ch 547 The Siege pt 5

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ch 542 Diplomacy with the damned

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ch 542 Diplomacy with the damned

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