Madcalamity

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Those chapter were published into a book. You can still read them on Patreon or you can purchase the book.

Madcalamity

7mth

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This bounty section does not make sense to me. I am definitely taking this too seriously and this your story after all, but maybe you can answer are what I believe are plot holes. -One: Vergo is the type to report all significant decisions that could expose his traitor status to Doflomingo first. Dofi would definitely not risk his high valued spy for a mink. I believe Dofi would still setup the slave traders through his connections, but pay some corrupt expendable marines to report the bounty. -Two: Alyssia ship is unique with her “Explorer” labeled on it, and the ship’s shape mathching Kuja pirates. These characteristics would be marked down if docked officially at a marine base. Which can be easily back tracked to Kano. -Three:Yes the temptation of what the G5 base could offer Alyssia is excellent, but she should know better than getting close the a observation haki expert who is tied to doflomingo. Then expect to get a away scot free, when messing with Dofi’s plans of eternal wars to sell more weapons in the west blue. She should of know that minimum risk for these skills was getting a bounty. But, blissful ignorance and trust in her strength can make her think otherwise I guess. Lastly, fighting skill are excellent in to improve your fighting capabilities against similar or slightly stronger individuals. I might if missed in your story that has explained why, but it make no sense not to attempt to train armentment haki or observation haki by now since unlocking conquers. Isn’t her goal is to become the strongest right? Yes, it would make Alyssia too OP at this point in the story making it hard to write an interesting story. In the end, Alyssia should know that the strongest in the world are relying on broken devil fruit abilities and/or who’s will is stronger. Otherwise, CP9 should have taken down Luffy and his crew with their superior fighting skills.

ch 93 Bounty #4

Kan-Gar-Chu! (One Piece fanfic)

Anime & Comics · dancematdan

Madcalamity

8mth

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Other than resources and an elven teacher, why doesn’t Diana just leave the Augustride family? She obviously dislikes her teacher and mother, and it seems like she can train herself at this point. So, what’s the point of the dealing the trouble.

ch 325 Small Talk

Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer

Madcalamity

9mth

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I am surprised Jiraiya would still support fourth hokage Ryan after killing his teacher who Jiraiya staunchly supported. Slept with tsunade, and starting wars with neighbors which Jiraiya would venomously argue against doing. Promoting world peace is his dream after all.

ch 43 Chapter 43 Domination

Madcalamity

1yr

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Wonder what happened with midoriya izuku career. Other than slandering the mc.

ch 78 Final chap

Crocodiles hero academia. {complete}

Fantasy · Smithsonian86_

Madcalamity

1yr

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Is the fates controlling Apollo’s current actions? He already destroyed the timeline. I don’t see how admending it now will bring much benefit other than delaying the confrontation with Zues. As for Promeatheus, he only tried to stop Pandora. He didn’t even succeed. How is that worth the punishment equilivent to stealing fire to give to the humans?

He stated. "You have betrayed and blasphemed the gods, Prometheus, and you will face trial and punishment in Olympus under my father, Zeus."

Madcalamity

1yr

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Where is mother earth on this list?

Humanity was created by Apollo, Artemis, Athena, Aphrodite, and Prometheus. The news of this event immediately spread far and wide throughout the mortal world and the divine realms.

Madcalamity

1yr

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Does shade truely believe he can pull through against Voldemort alone? Might as well hog tie himself and offer himself at voldemort’s door step. Tom is preparing himself for dumbledore to come through the door, and now he can use shade to make dumbledore offer himself without a fight. It’s like shade got more delusional as he grew older. The only reasons he succeeded so far was foreknowledge. How shade cannot see that he needs help with this is painful to read.

"If you'll forgive me later, which I hope you will," I spoke to the Stupefied Dumbledore, "Then I'm sure you'll understand this was the best course of action." I exhaled, and then left the Headmaster's office.

Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw

Book&Literature · OmnipresenceBeing

Madcalamity

1yr

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This makes me think that a rival family to the Prince family made a contract using Eileen’s blood. Making her fall in love with a muggle. Probably dumbledore was the culprit.

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Madcalamity

1yr

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“Three persons” I think person is always meant for single individual, and can’t be pluralized. People, is meant for more than one person. “Three people” or “three humans” would work instead, but the former sound more sane.

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Madcalamity

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She didn’t say anything bad about a Ron Weasley. That is a surprise.

"Hmm, there's Mr. Malfoy who likes to tease his Hufflepuff classmates in class, and Mr. Corner who seems to spend more time staring at Mr. Night and Mr. Goldstein than paying attention in class... .But other than those two, I don't have any other students who are drawing negative attention," Professor McGonagall replied, ignoring the smug part of her mind at seeing the annoyed look on Professor Snape's face when she spoke of one of her Slytherins.

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Se7en

Madcalamity

1yr

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Does Leo not realize the last item of making her dream come true is basically a slave contract to him? Her dream could be extremely detailed and constantly change, and he has to fulfill it. She could say that my dream is living in the captian’s cabin why on the adventure, while having all crew members wait on my beck and call.

"But, you will not gain much from this and will lose a priceless item for it, and that's a complete unfair deal," Leo asked again with a helpless expression on his face,

One Piece: Adventure of Leo

Anime & Comics · Hit30

Madcalamity

1yr

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This paragraph needs some grammarly help. Some things to take note of: -Try not starting a sentence with ”but”. -Research sentence structure for independent and dependent clauses. Specifically: •What makes them independent and dependent. • How many independent and dependent clauses can join together. •How to join two independent clauses or join one independent to dependent clause. Here an edited version of this paragraph with some modifications from above rules. Nerva dodges the attack by rolling and starts preparing to attack again. Leo expected this and counters with a hard kick to Nerva’s head. He flinched from the kick, which Leo took advantage of by slicing at Nerva’s neck. Unable to dodge, Nerva looks on with helplessness and anger as his neck is cleaved. After a few moments of relentless bleeding, Nerva keels over dead.

But Nerva dodges the attack by rolling and starts preparing to attack again, but Leo expected it and attacks Nerva with a hard kick on the head which flinched, and Leo takings advantage of that attacks him on the neck with his sword and Nerva tries to dodge it but failed and starts to bleed out from his neck and died with a look of helplessness and anger,

One Piece: Adventure of Leo

Anime & Comics · Hit30

Madcalamity

1yr

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What’s wrong with the truth? I angered some rich bozo, and I have purchase a new house at J. Let’s move for our safety.

" M SICK OF LIVING IN SUCH A LOCALITY WHERE WE CANT EVEN FEEL SAFE DAD , SOO WHAT WE CAME FROM COMMON BACKGROUND AND SUCCEEDED WILL THEY ALL DRAG US BACK DOWN AGAIN? "

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

Madcalamity

1yr

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You said she was one year old in the beginning of this chapter. Now she is eight years old?

Even Carina and Nami, who is more cautious and already mixed with the pirate group for a living at the age of eight, can't stand El's gentle and sincere offense, what's more, this little girl without any experience, it is only a matter of time before she completely sticks to El.

Strongest Swordsman In One Piece

Anime & Comics · DreamStolen

Madcalamity

1yr

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I didn’t know Wang had foals. He probably should set some goals to raise the foals well.

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Xianxia: Why am I here?

Eastern · Aurora_Ryan

Madcalamity

1yr

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Farther down talks about the fruit giving the user more capability to gain physical strength faster. So, it allows the joined people access to more strength to use the devil fruits. I am just prestigious against this fruit.

"Three heads and six arms" You have to practice more in the future, you must cultivate a tacit understanding between the three of you in this state, because this trick will be the final card of the three of you. "

Strongest Swordsman In One Piece

Anime & Comics · DreamStolen

Madcalamity

1yr

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I just don’t see how that this would make them significantly more powerful. Yes, carina would get amazing swordsmanship and the ability to use the flame fruit. Other than having carina amazing brain to control the abilities, nami and kuina will be just as strong separately and not limited to one body. This just gives the ability allow carina defend herself if nami and kuina is willing go through this unnecessary process when they can defet the enemies themselves. There is way better devil fruits out there like the logia thunder fruit if it hasn’t been eaten yet.

"Three heads and six arms" You have to practice more in the future, you must cultivate a tacit understanding between the three of you in this state, because this trick will be the final card of the three of you. "