Webnovel Author: RadicalHuman02

RadicalHuman02

23h

Commented

This is around where I'm gone, good luck author

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RadicalHuman02

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Replied to Dao_of_laziness420

That's exactly what I'm on about, don't worry even with movie knowledge you can clearly smell the bs happening

Peter stood, his gaze sweeping the council members. "I know some of you are disappointed in me, and I'm prepared to accept any punishment. But saving Nebula was the right thing to do. If that means I jeopardized a mission, that was already doomed to fail from the beginning, then so be it. I believe in doing what's right, even when it's hard. If that's not what being a true Jedi is about, then maybe it's the council's vision that needs reevaluation, not my actions."

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

RadicalHuman02

4d

Posted

So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

RadicalHuman02

4d

Commented

Why does the MC get to be bold to other characters without realistic repercussions for doing so? reminds me of the spiderman fanfic

Peter stood, his gaze sweeping the council members. "I know some of you are disappointed in me, and I'm prepared to accept any punishment. But saving Nebula was the right thing to do. If that means I jeopardized a mission, that was already doomed to fail from the beginning, then so be it. I believe in doing what's right, even when it's hard. If that's not what being a true Jedi is about, then maybe it's the council's vision that needs reevaluation, not my actions."

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

RadicalHuman02

5d

Commented

The author just casually spoiling future plot? Gotta be actually tweaking.

**Second, to the people who are commenting that Peter is grooming/manipulating Aayla, he is not, full stop. They have a sibling relationship. There has been zero romance. The reason that I've even begun to focus on Aayla in the story is to build up her character, as she will later join the Guardians of the Galaxy. Anyway, enjoy the chapters :)

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

RadicalHuman02

5d

Commented

The dark side when I simply say "I don't really wanna be evil, thanks."

'What is that…?'

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

RadicalHuman02

7d

Replied to The_Pedantic_Troll

Yeah well welcome to the world of writing. not everyone is gonna like what you write, so whatever he described would have been disliked by someone but at least it wouldn't feel like a Mary Sue moment.

When I swung back to check on her progress, Livewire had all the juicy details I needed to give Waller a little nudge. Let's just say, after a bit of persuasive conversation, Waller was suddenly very keen on including me in the mission and backing off from Livewire's case.

DC: System Shock

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

RadicalHuman02

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Replied to JaxWolf4

Easily

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Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

RadicalHuman02

7d

Replied to Genesis_YT

No he calls them that

"Just keep doing what you've been doing... and as for me, I'll grease the wheels to ensure any reformed baddies get a second chance," he concluded, his resolve shining through in his words.

DC: System Shock

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

RadicalHuman02

7d

Replied to Deejay309

Dude this just ain't the case, even I didn't act like this at 17 this is getting repetitive. I get what you're saying but it can't be applied to the mc

This has to be illegal, I don't care what kind of Superpowered Mercenary Village I'm at, this shit's got to be illegal!

Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto

Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes

RadicalHuman02

7d

Commented

Yeah you're practically her bully so makes sense

I raise my head to take a look at Sakura moving away with Sasuke, without helping me...

Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto

Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes

RadicalHuman02

7d

Commented

I feel like I read him bringing up the fact that the Shinobi world uses child soldiers for the 50th time in one way or another.

That's a literal trump card! Damn... How didn't I think of that? Actually... This allows for more options... Poisonous and noxious gas containers, a gas mask in my storage as well, only pulling it when I use it so they don't expect an attack like that.