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SnowofBlood: Evening, first thing to say, excellent chapter.
For the 3rd person speech I really like that it's 100% Doom. Sage force is also a very good idea, very few use it in fanfic but it as a lot of potential.
With this chapter we saw that even with the sage force ( telekinesis, telepathy ) he wasn't a match for kryptonian, he got kryptonite and I'm sure he will find a good use to it but don't forget magic, kryptonian are vulnerable to it and Doom is a master sorcerer. It will add versatility in his abilities, that could be really interesting but maybe it's too soon.
When he stood face to face with Supergirl and Superman, you really did a good job in showing how powerless and how terrifying he would be for a normal human, when she used her super strength to hold him ... It probably make him extremely furious, I would have been.
For now I hope he keep building his power, becoming better in using the sage force, maybe he will reach a stade when he can disintegrate people, " he who hesitate disintegrate " . And now that he got a motherbox he can make some very powerful thing in the future.
I dont know if he have a higher objective but he could have the project of creating mutant or metahuman in large quantity, for the evolution of mankind, or something big like that. I guess we'll see in the next chapters
Thank you for your work, it's a story worth it. Bye 😈

Brightest Doom · C4
1 day ago
Evening, first thing to say, excellent chapter.
For the 3rd person speech I really like that it's 100% Doom. Sage force is also a very good idea, very few use it in fanfic but it as a lot of potential.
With this chapter we saw that even with the sage force ( telekinesis, telepathy ) he wasn't a match for kryptonian, he got kryptonite and I'm sure he will find a good use to it but don't forget magic, kryptonian are vulnerable to it and Doom is a master sorcerer. It will add versatility in his abilities, that could be really interesting but maybe it's too soon.
When he stood face to face with Supergirl and Superman, you really did a good job in showing how powerless and how terrifying he would be for a normal human, when she used her super strength to hold him ... It probably make him extremely furious, I would have been.
For now I hope he keep building his power, becoming better in using the sage force, maybe he will reach a stade when he can disintegrate people, " he who hesitate disintegrate " . And now that he got a motherbox he can make some very powerful thing in the future.
I dont know if he have a higher objective but he could have the project of creating mutant or metahuman in large quantity, for the evolution of mankind, or something big like that. I guess we'll see in the next chapters
Thank you for your work, it's a story worth it. Bye 😈 View More
Brightest Doom · C4
1 day ago
Asgardian + Celestial = ? Dr Manhattan maybe ;) Hella saw his death because in a sense he die and reborn anew probably something like that at least I hope.
He got too cocky and he paid the price, lesson learned. View More
Nero, the God of the Underworld · C6
2 days ago
Reading Status: C5
Greetings mortals, interesting idea this is the first time I see Shino Aburame Fanfic, but be careful to keep his logical view on life maybe make him even more logical ...
Insects are the ultimate life form and extremely versatile you can make write some very good fight scene but careful if done wrong it will give a bad result.
I applaud the risks you take with this story, don't make the basics mistakes like a mc who fixes everything with the plot. Personally I like mc who use their knowledge to their advantage or when they evolve and act in parallel to the original plot. And I hate fan boy mc, I mean I get it seeing Naruto in real could be fascinating but with his personality, I will probably bash his head and broke his neck. So I certainly wouldn't want to be his friend except for his genetic material for evolving and becoming more powerful.
I'm waiting more chapters to see what this story is really worth, for now it's too soon to say. 🐱 View More
Reincarnated as Shino Aburame in Naruto
3 days ago
I prefer the mc of the precedent story. At least we could have a Lucifer in the place of a Castiel :/ View More
Golden Angel · C2
3 days ago

ZonicZ: Wtaf is this the first book was better

Golden Angel · C2
3 days ago
Gives us more ! Your story is ambrosia for us lowly mortal ! View More
Prince of Death · C11
6 days ago

Ryofu: Thanks for the chapter.
The whole Erza drama isn't to my liking personally.
I don't see Erza just giving up without doing anything, if it was the original time line, yes, but after passing all this time with him and fighting with Mira, there is no way she will let go just like that...
With their rivalry and after witnessing that, she would have been more aggressive due to her spirit of not losing to Mira, not just giving up...

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C16
1 week ago
No just focus on Blackclover, or you could make fairy tail the future of the world of black clover in a thousand years, he have time magic he could technically live indefinitely. View More
The world of black clover · C3
1 week ago
No just focus on Blackclover, or you could make fairy tail the future of the world of black clover in a thousand years, he have time magic he could technically live indefinitely. View More
The world of black clover · C3
1 week ago
Its not the fact that he love her that I find pathetic, it's the fact that nothing ever happened between the two and years have passed, I just don't really get why he is still fixed on that. But maybe I'm functioning too much logically.
All scientists are not innocent, with the time he spent with the government, he had probably contact with some scientists morally shady.
Maybe indifferent is not the right word, I should say cold and calculating, the virus change Alex Mercer like that, the only thing " holding him back " was his sister.
And emotions because he is human ? That's the point he is not human, not anymore ...
Don't take it the wrong way, I respect the time you invest it this story, and I like it's originality, I just find the exchanges of opinion interesting, and the story is still in the early stage, so I judge with what I have :) but I'm eager to see how it will turn. View More

GenericName_3000: I mean, I'm pretty sure I was clear on the fact that he's in love with her, right? If you think loving someone is pathetic...well, you're gonna be a real lonely person in life.

Why would he kill innocent people aka scientists? He's only killed soldiers who've tried to kill him so far. If some scientists try to kill him, then sure, he'll absorb/consume them. If they don't? He'll just have to look for villains with scientific knowledge. Though I doubt he'd have to do any of that. He could just go and learn about it. He does have genius-level learning abilities after all.

Indifferent MCs are the most boring MCs, in my humble opinion, so don't think I'll be writing one. Indifference is all about letting stuff happen and not caring about it. An indifferent MC wouldn't even bother to evolve either, they'd just go through life lacking interest and concern for anything. Aka boring as hell.

Again, he wanted to see the girl he loved one last time before he went on a crusade against the US Government. Sorry the MC has human emotion, I guess.

Thanks for reading anyway.

DC: PROTOTYPE · C3
1 week ago

SnowofBlood: Or imagine this, he absorb someone with the knowledge that he is in a alternative universe like the new 52 or others, and he absorb all living life's in this universe, he could after that, travel to the main universe.
After all is primary goal ( unconsciously ) is to evolve to the peak.
I'm not saying to make him into a villain but with time and so much experience ( when he consume someone ) he should become more pragmatic and detached from everything.
There is not good or bad, only power and those too weak too seak it. 😈

DC: PROTOTYPE · C4
1 week ago

SnowofBlood: Better, I had doubt but this chapter was really good, I agree with Kilaske absorbing a spy or a criminal mastermind is an advantage for him especially with enemy like Amanda.
I'm wondering how much he will evolve in dc universe with the aliens etc...

DC: PROTOTYPE · C4
1 week ago
Or imagine this, he absorb someone with the knowledge that he is in a alternative universe like the new 52 or others, and he absorb all living life's in this universe, he could after that, travel to the main universe.
After all is primary goal ( unconsciously ) is to evolve to the peak.
I'm not saying to make him into a villain but with time and so much experience ( when he consume someone ) he should become more pragmatic and detached from everything.
There is not good or bad, only power and those too weak too seak it. 😈 View More

SnowofBlood: Better, I had doubt but this chapter was really good, I agree with Kilaske absorbing a spy or a criminal mastermind is an advantage for him especially with enemy like Amanda.
I'm wondering how much he will evolve in dc universe with the aliens etc...

DC: PROTOTYPE · C4
1 week ago
Better, I had doubt but this chapter was really good, I agree with Kilaske absorbing a spy or a criminal mastermind is an advantage for him especially with enemy like Amanda.
I'm wondering how much he will evolve in dc universe with the aliens etc... View More
DC: PROTOTYPE · C4
1 week ago
Stop the obsession with Barbara it's kinda pathetic, he should focus on evolving by consuming scientists to have more knowledge, he didn't even stay low key for a moment after the incident, he just go to Gotham in the open arm of the worst kind of superhero ^^ I would prefer a more indifferent mc.
It's just my opinion, you can ignore it I will still continue to read the story. Thanks for the chapter ;) View More
DC: PROTOTYPE · C3
1 week ago
Nice chapter, it's the perfect opportunity to learn human magic ( ancient one ) it will add more flexibility to his fighting style and give him more knowledge in magic. Don't make him join the avenger, he can help them or give them information sometime but personally I don't want a Superhero Loki, I think a neutral who help when the situation his apocalyptic is better ( like a Gabriel from SPN if you know the show ). We want a real God of lies and mischief :)
Thanks for the chapter, I hope you don't drop it ... View More
Marvel: Loki · C6
2 weeks ago

SnowofBlood: Greetings mortals, honestly it's a very good story, the blending of Lord Of mysteries and Release that witch is very interesting and original.
Maybe a little bit slow on the development of the story but with 1-2 chapter per week it's not surprising, but I'm patient and the way you build the foundation of your story is not boring at all.
For the characters, it's too soon to judge them with don't know theirs past in details etc... Personally I didn't read Release that witch so I won't say anything about this part, but the lord of mysteries is a really good choice, the power system ( potions and sequence ) is particularly fascinating, the abilities given to a beyonder are very useful and flexible, so we should get beautiful combat scene or battles of mind and cunning.
In the end if you look for an original Fanfic that try to do something different this if for you.
Thank you for your hard work author and I hope you don't drop it. : )

Lord of the Witches
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C19
Greetings mortals, honestly it's a very good story, the blending of Lord Of mysteries and Release that witch is very interesting and original.
Maybe a little bit slow on the development of the story but with 1-2 chapter per week it's not surprising, but I'm patient and the way you build the foundation of your story is not boring at all.
For the characters, it's too soon to judge them with don't know theirs past in details etc... Personally I didn't read Release that witch so I won't say anything about this part, but the lord of mysteries is a really good choice, the power system ( potions and sequence ) is particularly fascinating, the abilities given to a beyonder are very useful and flexible, so we should get beautiful combat scene or battles of mind and cunning.
In the end if you look for an original Fanfic that try to do something different this if for you.
Thank you for your hard work author and I hope you don't drop it. : ) View More
Lord of the Witches
2 weeks ago
Don't give him Kotoa or something like that, I'm all up for manipulation but not pure brainwashing it take away all the pleasure of seeing watching the mc chose his words carefully and influence others. Telepathy if you really want mind powers,if you do something like senbanzakura then make it realistic like the ms give him almost perfect chakra control what I mean is that it must be logical and explainable with the Naruto verse power system rules .
Thank you for your work and update more for us greedy mortals.😈 View More
Naruto: Road To Godhood · C6
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C45
First I want to say I really like that story and I recommend it. Thanks to you author for your work and I respect the time you spends on it.
For the story the idea of the skyrim system is good, I'm not particularly fond of the system plot but you didn't give me the feeling the MC was been manipulated and that the system was pulling the strings with Quests etc...
I'm an atypical person, I prefer the calculating, logical, in control of his emotions type of MC, I tend to act only when I feel it's perfectly logical and will benefit me, so suppose I look for similarities between me and the MC of a story. Yes I known I'm flawed ^^.
Now the juicy part.Some part of the story is rush, what did he do to escape the clutch of Dumbledore and co. ? He goes from a level of magic of a student of 6-7 years to be capable of killing a dragon. Maybe it will be explore in flashback ... The MC is clearly lacking substance, he follow the trio a good time and don't do anything else apart of training. He has no complexity, what I mean by that, no fetish or secret pleasure ( I don't mean it in a sexual way, I'm talking about something like he can't help himself but love pushing others to commit crimes , or he love psychology and want to understand the human mind, or something simpler like wanting so much powers he could warp reality with a snap of his fingers , going on that path he would be pushing the limit of science and you can't do that without some really interesting things to see ) I know, it's all dark examples, feel free to do something more happy.
I'm going stop here because if not, I'm going to spend hours writing everything that's inside my mind. The book is not finished so all of this is about the 40-45 chapters already present, so I reserve my final judgement when it end.

Be careful ¿ View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World
1 month ago
Isabel is not ready for the supernatural world. View More

DragonShen: Can they go to the Supernatural world next pls

My Name Is Lucifer · C24
1 month ago
Marvel ! View More
My Name Is Lucifer · C21
1 month ago
Sae-Chan ( the teacher ) for pairing, this girl and him doesn't fit at all. There's is the girl with the umbrella she's better if you don't want to make a teacher-student relationship. View More
Felix's Classroom of the Elite · C18
1 month ago
Please stop right now this emotional trip, Felix manipulating others and be calculating is much better than the " I should enjoy my life and experience the full spectrum of emotions and become a stupid boy with jealousy and anger issues ".
If you want to make a pairing then Sae-Chan is perfect but make a complex relationship, constantly pushing the button of the other ...
Thank you for your work ;) View More
Felix's Classroom of the Elite · C14
1 month ago
Don't make her to much involved with Elena , for now she should try to get rid of her weakness to stake and werewolves bite if not even if she is strong she will die easily she doesn't have the 3000 years of experience in scheming and planning, but she know the future and a lot of way to gain powers.
Quickly mastering her sense should be a priority too, getting caught by surprise by an intrigered wolf is kinda lame when you have the body of 3000 old vampire. View More
Noxeyy · C0
1 month ago
Excellent ! Your Lucifer is perfect, his cold, calculating humour .
Don't change him in a whimped to his sister or a Good Lucifer.
Supernatural would be very interesting but maybe a little dangerous for now, there is Dxd with the it have lore it could be good if you don't focus on all the ecchi and fan service. View More
My Name Is Lucifer · C17
1 month ago

Travo: It really has been fun while it lasted...but alas all good things must end. Balanced as all things should be. I don't even know who you are. I AM INEVITABLE. But this... does put a smile on my face. Dread it. Run from it. Destiny arrives all the same.

I don't even know what this is anymore XD. But I hope we celebrate it's life rather than mourn over it's death.

Marvel's Agent Belova · C13
2 months ago
Well for now he is way too far in the past, so you don't see how it's related yet. Personally I find it very interesting and I hope the author don't make a time jump directly to 21 century. View More

Daoist698436: Good, but where is anything related to marvel or harry potter? 😭

God made a mistake · C3
3 months ago
His childrens should be on Franklin Richards power scale. View More
The Chronicles of Elijah · C41
3 months ago
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