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Nebula18457

2yr

Posted

Overall the stories there. But the author needs to work on their grammar. But well reading, the good parts of the novel outweigh the bad. Like the author's descriptions and the way that they describe the characters.

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Fantasy · El_dorado

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to NotSubaru

hehehehe. I know. I told you.

Kere felt a sense of relief wash over him seeing Tina on her bed. "I told you not to leave your room." Keres takes a seat at the end of her bed.

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to Nebula18457

Just copy and paste the link into a tab.

ch 10 Tina

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Commented

https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-girl-named-sin_20691917905796805

ch 10 Tina

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to Dxvil

That's what I was going for.

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Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to NotSubaru

What do you mean by that?

"Ethereal children? What a cringy ass name." Dominic interrupts with a sour expression; It seems we were both thinking the same thing.

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to NotSubaru

Well, I'd hope my Novel's interesting.

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Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to NotSubaru

Same, I loved the hunger games.

"So you came here to make me into some sort of campaign pitch or revolutionary leader like the chick from the hunger games."

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to NotSubaru

Keres is not the main villain's real name. The name Keres was given to him cause he was blessed by the female dark spirit of old. But I'll get into that in his back story. His real name does start with a K tho.

In seconds, Keres grabs Clarissa by her jaw, staring her right in the eyes. "Don't test me. My patience has been wearing very thin; As of late," He says menacingly before throwing her to the ground. "Now tell me, What were you up to in that little town Helgrey."

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Posted

The novel was amazing, the storyline flowed well, the plot made sense, and the character design was good too. But the grammar wasn't up to scratch. There's a lot of work that needs to be done when it comes to this aspect of things. That said, keep going author, you're doing an amazing job so far.

The Ultimate Harem System

Fantasy · Nebula_lord2402

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to NotSubaru

Thank you for telling me I'll fix it

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Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Posted

Overall, the novel was amazing. One thing I loved from the novel most was the raw emotions shown between the characters. But I think the author could've added some more descriptive language in some places.

Fantasy Air

LGBT+ · FLYO

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to Nwodo_Tony

sorry for keeping you waiting :3

ch 0 6 Markus's Hunt

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Posted

The novel's too slow-paced, the world-building is too messy, and the is non-existent. Not to mention, the first 20 chaps are all just filler. Lastly, the author seems to enjoy abusing the mc a little too much.

The Star Sovereign (1st Pov)

Eastern · Simp_Chaos

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to scifiistheway

I shall take this as a neutral way of you saying you enjoyed the prologue.

ch 0 1 Prologue

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Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to Vedika_Garg

your welcome (bow)

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to TheValidSource

you'll have to read to find out

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Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Posted

It was honestly speaking a great read, I really enjoyed it. What I loved most about it was the heartwarming and humourous relationship between the friends. But there were just quite a few grammar mistakes here and there. I feel like the author could be a bit more descriptive in places as well. but overall good job author.

Fallin' (You are my soulmate)

Fantasy · Vedika_Garg

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to doomedtl

That's exactly what I was going for. And of course, I know my writing could be more polished, but I am still learning. I'm only 16, and have a long way to go.

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

Nebula18457

2yr

Replied to eyaggelia146

I fixed up some of the things you mentioned so go check it out.

Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

Teen · Nebula18457

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