Webnovel Author: Rittzy - Novel Collection

Great story as always, feels like a true another world with how detailed it is. Great job!

Bro nuwa has apologized like 3 times already in the story about not telling something that is both vital and life saving for him. She is acc useless except for being a guide. Just tell him whatever he needs to survive, be it now or in the future, cuz she’s lucky he ain’t angry she ALMOST KILLED HIM:D

My guy has the ultimate ability, a built in friendzoner, that works without being friendzoned😂

Bro this guy is me foreal??? Love the novel so far, great job :D

When this novel ends, the post-book depression will hit hard I already know it. Im too invested in this piece. Especially if my man Han actually ends up with a son or daughter. I swear the pain is going to be unreal.

Great piece of work from the author. As long as he/she keeps chapters consistent, high quality, and bring more of himself and his character/views on this book, not only will those with provilage stay, but both the readers and the authour will never have a day when the book isnt good.😁

Guys hes Rewriting rn, on a hiatus kinda. I feel the story was fine though lol. Anyways, gl on the rewrite, hope u come back soon! :)

Hoping for his cruel penalties to all end😭 if he was able to defeat even the top bosses in this dimension, imagine him back at hIs prime state

Chill out bruh my fast passes are breezing away 😂 I give u my power stones everyday but i cant if i cant read it lmaooo

No problem brother! We all deserve some rest nowadays, including you. You dont have to apologize for something that you should obviously care for. Take care of yourself always :)

Too much transmigration or typical xiania influence my guy or girl. It seems very blatant as the style continues, and you should continue the way you were writing before as it doesnt fit in to a marvel storyline, even more so in a modern day suoerhero fanfiction. Kill him? Sorry but this is not the cultivation world with bo morals or rules. Why would SHEILD willingly let thier agnets die, as even the lowest level ones are usefull? One other thing that strikes out is the way they are talking. Way too formal, and not fitting with the scenes of comics and movies. It just sounds weird if read out load. Also, one final thing. Promise to remember not to turn this into some type of CEO of money, and super in depth finacial story. In the end, others came her for the action, excitement, mystery, and noglastia of Marvel and its heroes/villians, not some suoer intricate company boss who would get thier buildings and corporations blown up by every other event in this world, as remember, it is not modern, rather dangerous and unique in its own way. This is a rant, and i truly hope you can take some pointers from me to obvioudly improve the story, and attract more Marvel or superhero lovers like me. Thanks

Widom over speed. Speed can be gained easily, but ultimately wisdom is more usefull foe an agent in his circumstanses, to not make foolish mistakes. For example, assuming Clint didnt have a way to find if he was taking advantage of him through his weird behaviour or even facial expressions.