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In this world, a person's talent with Qi and cultivation determines a person's status in the world. Shen Wushuang is a very smart boy with loving parents. Although he and his parents are shunned by his clan, they have high aspirations for his cultivation. One day, Shen Tian when he turned 6 years old, he became sick and for 7 years he was barely able to do daily functions like eating and taking a bath much less cultivate. While others might disdain him now for being weak, his talent will tower all others, and Shen Tian will eventually be known as the Chaos Immortal!
Xiao Wuya is the abandoned child of a Ancient God and a Immortal Nine-Tailed Fox. Being found by a powerful alchemist and array master from the Xiao Clan, he starts his journey to find his true cultivation path and to find who and where his parents are. The journey will eventually lead him to a destination he would of never expected.
In the world of the Heavens Wasteland Domain, one small child from a farming family would find a treasure beyond his imagination. Wang Lin will climb the world on the path of god to break the barrier between of the domain to truly become a god!
Perfect_It: Really disappointed. You said something like 'the MC is not going to mess around with girls in the story' etc, however you just introduced an annoying little kid sister maid character already. Cliche's have already started.Celestial Peak · C2
The Supreme Lord Donghuang · C4
aattss: I'm guess that if that was a guy, the MC would have eaten him.Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C15
JosephMcknight: If you dont want to read, then dont read, why the heck are u still here blabbering?Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C11
Camelia_Murphy: To all the rude people who has commented on this story learn how to write a story before being rude to someone who has worked hard on their storyInvincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C8
Azrail93: Relax guys and gals.
I mean the.... is your problem.
It's just the first few chapters.
Don't like, don't read.
No need to bull****.Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C4
Coinsign: Dis novel wuz like rising and shiet, ya know wut im sayin? dragon risin an all dat good shiet, but den damn, took a look at the update, and holla molla sweet baby jesus, update comin slower den jesus's 2nd comng. motherfkn tupac gonna come back sooner dan an update. but stil gr8 novel would r8 high ez !Dragon Rising
Sword Among Us · C13
Karma: Sounds painfulFatal Shot
Mlongue: That was a wonderful decision from this guy. No reason to keep the scroll if he learned it.
Thanks for the chapter.Birth of the Demonic Sword · C29
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C191
BeyondBreaking: I'm just here to join the bandwagon, don't understand the appeal to these types of novels in complete honesty who pretty much devalue women as objects at a whole, which I stopped reading Doomsday MCV because I'm more vanilla even when it comes to grim toned novels if it's just pure carnage or vengeance. But the moment you just basically throw women which you described Beauties just ruined it (but I hope my personal bias does not show when I review your novel at mere face value.) I don't care whether you value male or female, but what they're actually worth in response to ability and talents is where I will say is the best. I also write novels in which I think are subpar, but both of our novels are just wish fulfillment on different shows.
Reading the synopsis showed a lot of grammatical errors and repetitive words thus it is mediocre, though you've conveyed the gist of what your interests of the novel are obviously as a libido-driven character or 'dare' I say writer(emphasis on dare). Well done. 3/5 Stars
Reading from all the times you've uploaded chapters, I would say it's not stable. You had a great start but the continuity of releases became more drawn out and not monotone since this is how I see Stability is. Thus it is a 2/5
The most liked comment and the second pretty much sums up story development. The delusional MC who escaped the reality of where he came from pretty much joins a primitive world that is much more traditional where laws are broken pretty much shows that the MC is a psychopath or just plain crazy. I'm altruistic in my ideals but seeing from my standpoint, the story won't develop much other than him growing in strength and jumping other women. 1/5
Character Design - No complexity in human emotions and just his libido showing in the comments shows just how linear your characters are. They are shallow with no complex line of thought other than strength shows that they all have no brain and guessing from the synopsis (once more) he is probably a psychopath, so you can pretty much mold his personality a lot. 1/5
World Background - You usually reflect some of the world-building in a synopsis since they show the credibility of the author. The fact that you only cared for materialistic desires and wish fulfillment to escape their own reality makes me think you don't care much about your world. World building is akin to imagining what our world would be like in certain scenarios and having the correct attitudes that come along with it, we can imagine the perfect and reflect that ideal in whatever idea is present. 1/5
This review is at face-value of the novel and some of my line of reasoning. Since I have not read the novel at the least, this review has no credibility.
Thus I will read at another date and review once more, copy-pasting this as what I was approaching the novel with. I hope you work out much about your novel just from its presentation and how they can appeal to certain people. To those diehards fan that will read this, this is a review; an opinion. Reviews are there to give precautions of what a novel shows, don't think of it as much as a kind reminder of how bad it is, just a whole general disagreement. This is a novel with a spectrum of haters and diehard fans which shows the certain groups the author is aiming for (which is mostly male) and an estimate of half disagreeing with the novel. A novel that can't appeal to all groups and aim for certain brackets but still manage to get around at most half of the community that disagrees with you shows you the ability as a writer as inflexible and experience of writing.Ancient Dragon Lord
evolvingsquid: LET THE RACISM CONTINUEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!Legend of the Mythological Genes · C182
Warlock Apprentice · C12
Razor_Claws: I like harems !:(Fatal Shot
Doohie: lmao! Now that would be a twist to the harem genre lol!Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C59
TyrantGod: I atleast expected a touching family reunion, but alas the great sage has to traverse his path alone.
Even filler crap like MGA and War Sovereign have MC's that take care of family.Legend of the Mythological Genes · C142
The Favored Son of Heaven · C38
TheDemonicSaint: He better not spare her, if he does then this novel is confirmed trash and i am sure only retards will spend a spirit stones on this stupid novel.The Martial Emperor with Dragon Blood · C48
The Martial Emperor with Dragon Blood · C48
The Martial Emperor with Dragon Blood · C48
Morvian: so earlier he has meal with : 4 sinner guard, 2 sinner young master & 1 young nai-ve rebellious lady that innocent!~All Existence · C15
xTruffles: The content has been blockedLegend of the Mythological Genes · C58
SamStrike: Of course they delete your review if you always post 1 star, you dont give a single clue of why the novel is bad and 1 star doesnt make sense. No matter how bad the novel is, the Updating stability is always 5 stars with 2 chapters a day, and even if you put 1 in all the other is still come off as 2 stars.
You just put 1 star regardless of everything else, providing no clue why you did. And before saying things like "bUt ThEy DoNt DeLeTe OtHeRs 5 sTarS sPam" think about your own review and not the ones of other people, because it's easy giving the fault to other people for your own excuse (the other spam reviews are not at fault for your own review, you are; and if you put 1 star because of others then you are simply a ret*rd).
No offense btw.Fury Towards The Burning Heaven
Positive_Lullaby: The content has been deletedFury Towards The Burning Heaven
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C20
TwilightReverie: So eleven chapters in and we already have a training tower. and still no real exploration of the protagonists' characters or personality. I guess the author's earlier statement that cultivating is a solitary road means no time will be spent on exploring the protagonist's relationships with others.
Did someone start a race to complete a cultivation story in 100 chapters or something? This work is extremely rushed.Legend of the Mythological Genes · C11
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