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This review is current up to chapter 135, and unfortunately this is one I have to drop at this point. The first 80 or so chapters actually start out pretty good. The world has a lot to discover, there are plenty of mysteries keeping us wondering, the MC is OP, character interactions make sense, and the grammar only has small mistakes here and there, but is easy to follow and get immersed in. Overall, it starts out as a pretty good novel to read. **SPOILERS START HERE** The problem with this novel is after about chapter 80-100, the story and character interactions progressively get worse from here on. Every single chapter from this point forward is 70% a particular woman’s inner monologue about how hot the MC is as well as how they want to please/seduce him and 30% actual story progression. It gets even worse in the tournament arc where a team essentially forfeits their match against the MC in exchange for the MC to visit some random woman’s mansion so she can flirt with him. All women in this novel at this point are being completely illogical just to flirt with the MC, which clashes with the world setting that has been built up. Lastly, and this is just a personal pet peeve, the MC is as dense as a brick when it comes to women, sex, and flirting despite his age and the memories present in 2 lives. If you like every woman in the universe fawning over the MC, nonstop sexual tension, multiple rated R chapters, can overlook the lack of logic the women portray in this novel for the MC, and an extremely high likelihood for a harem, then this is for you. Otherwise, I don’t recommend it.

This review is current up to chapter 200. I will also do my best to not spoil anything but only provide hints. I want to start with the negative. Thus far, the only problem I have with this story is the MC is a bit too lax. The MC joins a new school who do some…questionable things for recruitment. After something quite traumatic, he is essentially perfectly okay with being someone’s experiment. I don’t have a problem with how it played out as it played out well, but I wish the MC was more hesitant, questioning, and that more inner monologue was shown after he was recruited to the school to show more depth to how he was feeling and justify a bit more why he agreed to do some of the things he did. Now for the positive, I love how the world is being built. We are 200 chapters in and the setting for the world has been established but there is still a huge amount of mystery surrounding everything. The school the MC is attending also actually has some depth to it and doesnt feel just randomly thrown together. As for the MC himself, he isnt necessarily a pushover but he won’t seek out trouble either. As stated before, he is a bit too “go with the flow” but he does have a bit of decisive ruthlessness in him. The side characters have some personality to them but they haven’t been explored in extreme depth as of yet. Finally, for those wondering about romance, there’s nothing yet. There are a couple of potential partners but nothing concrete. One of my own pet peeves is I despise when romance is forced into a story through some unfathomable coincidense and it just magically works out. So far, there’s signs there are going to be romance but it doesn’t appear as if it’s just going to be thrown into the story randomly, which is a huge plus point in my book. Overall, I highly recommend it. It’s been a fun story so far.