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Thanks for the name drop

The story has been good thus far. ...................................... .................................... .................................... .....................................

It’s a nice crossover thus far. I don’t see the need of people to complain so much when the story is just starting up. I find it interesting and look forward to what the author has in store.

This is a fantastic story. The writing is top notch and the setting is great. If you're looking for an awesome read then look no further

I like the story thus far. The plot has not gone anywhere yet it has a solid start. I enjoy reading op characters and this has some real potential.

This novel is really awesome thus far. I love the pacing of the story and the clear mindset of the mc. It’s a calm read and not filled with terrible humor or extreme pervertedness. If this novel has one romantic interest then I think it could be even better but if not still a great read so far.

This novel has all the ingredients and parts to be phenomenal but it feels like they get wasted. I’ve read till chapter 100 and I would say over half of the chapters consist of unnecessary dialogue between side and background characters. They mainly talk about their schemes and own plans so much you forget about the mc because there is little focus on him. You think this is a story that focuses on the mc and card creation but you’d be wrong. It is about background schemes and background characters. I guess some people may enjoy it and consider it to be world building or fleshing out characters but to me it doesn’t add anything since I want to focus on the mc and their journey. He has not even gotten stronger since the first couple chapters. Not to mention the schemes that surround the mc, which he has no idea about. I’m no closer to knowing who this circle is or why everyone is so focused on killing and bankrupting the mc.