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Gamers of the Underworld · C20
2 months ago
Reading Status: C4
The writing is great and the work ethic of the author is superb. Unfortunately the MC ruined everything. How you can respect the guy when all he do is whine about how ****ty his life is. View More
Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies
2 months ago
Your comment explains precisely why I dropped this after reading chapter 2. I just cant respect the MC. He is a whiny ***** that got lucky and now thinks he is some hot stuff. View More

LockYourHeartTight: Let me start by saying that every other review on this novel is skewed and pathetic. None of them are impactful or meaningful in any way. Most of them are people saying "good novel" "I love it" "it's so good!", no one ever bothers to go into depth about why it's good, and there is a reason for that. It's not good.

When we first start reading the novel, we're introduced to some Immortal/God type character, he's cold-hearted, ruthless and calculating. The type of character you'd expect to find in an action movie flick, kind of like if Jason Bourne met with Bruce Willis. He really had that kind of badass attitude. It saddens me to tell you that we do not get to keep him. The author kills him off in the very stereotypical way with these cultivation trope novels. There is always some form of conflict happening otherwise the plot wouldn't move forward in the beginning. The main character we end up with is a whiny, sniveling, perverted, NTR-magnet with no actual "character". The entire time during our first introduction with this character all we see them do is whine and complain about how crapy their life is. The character moves forward and happens to stumble upon his "plot armor" which is all so very stereotypical of these cultivation novels. I'm not gonna complain about it at this point because, since when did originality matter in writing? The MC then proceeds to basically pat himself on the back by saying how amazingly awesome he is and how this was all preordained or some other nonsense. Words cannot describe my emotions as I'm reading these first 5 chapters. The character is absolute trash. Whines about how bad his life is, finds plot armor he didn't work for, calls it destiny and then proceeds to take credit for said destiny by saying he deserved it all along. Calling it self-delusion isn't enough at this point. This shows lack of effort, lack of creativity, lack of planning or even forethought on the Authors part. However, at this point, I still give the Author the benefit of the doubt, he might be able to pull this utter garbage out somehow if he's a talented enough writer and, the fact that he has over 200 chapters published on an original novel would support that idea. I was utterly wrong. I skipped ahead to the most previous updated chapter which was 255 at the time. What I found was the exact same whiny, perverted, arrogant, antagonistic, trash main character that was at chapter 5. What this tells me is that there was absolutely zero emotional or mental growth from the main character in 250 entire chapters. I think to myself that maybe I missed something, so I decide to look at the comments for the first few chapters and low and behold, I find an entire community uprising in the comment section. Scores of readers are begging the author to rewrite his novel and get rid of the horrible and trash main character that he has. This still isn't enough for me though. So I go back and pick a random chapter out of his novel and read it. What I find is not only the same horrendous main character, but I also find that every single side character in the story acts in the same exact manner as the main character. They all lack a moral compass even for a cultivation genre which is known for its ruthless storylines.

What this all sums up into are a few very obvious facts. The Author does not listen to his readers. The Author does not understand or care enough to learn how to write a character with morals. And this entire novel is basically a 12-year-olds wish-fulfillment fantasy. I am under the assumption that this entire novel is a joke and the author wrote it for the specific reason of seeing exactly how far he could push the envelope.

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies
2 months ago

LockYourHeartTight: Let me start by saying that every other review on this novel is skewed and pathetic. None of them are impactful or meaningful in any way. Most of them are people saying "good novel" "I love it" "it's so good!", no one ever bothers to go into depth about why it's good, and there is a reason for that. It's not good.

When we first start reading the novel, we're introduced to some Immortal/God type character, he's cold-hearted, ruthless and calculating. The type of character you'd expect to find in an action movie flick, kind of like if Jason Bourne met with Bruce Willis. He really had that kind of badass attitude. It saddens me to tell you that we do not get to keep him. The author kills him off in the very stereotypical way with these cultivation trope novels. There is always some form of conflict happening otherwise the plot wouldn't move forward in the beginning. The main character we end up with is a whiny, sniveling, perverted, NTR-magnet with no actual "character". The entire time during our first introduction with this character all we see them do is whine and complain about how crapy their life is. The character moves forward and happens to stumble upon his "plot armor" which is all so very stereotypical of these cultivation novels. I'm not gonna complain about it at this point because, since when did originality matter in writing? The MC then proceeds to basically pat himself on the back by saying how amazingly awesome he is and how this was all preordained or some other nonsense. Words cannot describe my emotions as I'm reading these first 5 chapters. The character is absolute trash. Whines about how bad his life is, finds plot armor he didn't work for, calls it destiny and then proceeds to take credit for said destiny by saying he deserved it all along. Calling it self-delusion isn't enough at this point. This shows lack of effort, lack of creativity, lack of planning or even forethought on the Authors part. However, at this point, I still give the Author the benefit of the doubt, he might be able to pull this utter garbage out somehow if he's a talented enough writer and, the fact that he has over 200 chapters published on an original novel would support that idea. I was utterly wrong. I skipped ahead to the most previous updated chapter which was 255 at the time. What I found was the exact same whiny, perverted, arrogant, antagonistic, trash main character that was at chapter 5. What this tells me is that there was absolutely zero emotional or mental growth from the main character in 250 entire chapters. I think to myself that maybe I missed something, so I decide to look at the comments for the first few chapters and low and behold, I find an entire community uprising in the comment section. Scores of readers are begging the author to rewrite his novel and get rid of the horrible and trash main character that he has. This still isn't enough for me though. So I go back and pick a random chapter out of his novel and read it. What I find is not only the same horrendous main character, but I also find that every single side character in the story acts in the same exact manner as the main character. They all lack a moral compass even for a cultivation genre which is known for its ruthless storylines.

What this all sums up into are a few very obvious facts. The Author does not listen to his readers. The Author does not understand or care enough to learn how to write a character with morals. And this entire novel is basically a 12-year-olds wish-fulfillment fantasy. I am under the assumption that this entire novel is a joke and the author wrote it for the specific reason of seeing exactly how far he could push the envelope.

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies
2 months ago

Ddack: Notice he was willing to die for his aunts panties.

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies · C2
2 months ago

Dragon_Reader_Lord: The mc is a loser, guys, can we hit 100 likes?

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies · C2
2 months ago

Elochrist1: I'll give him 20-30 chapters. If he gonna be useless trash even then it's not worth it I guess

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies · C2
2 months ago

Licorice: retard author

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies · C2
2 months ago

vkg313: It doesn’t feel like there was a point to the previous chapter then. Unless you have some way to resolve Ezekiel’s past or that he is still alive.

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies · C2
2 months ago

Archena: legendary trash to be more appropriate. Such a wimpy mc will only be liked wimpy idiot readers.

Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies · C2
2 months ago

OnePun: Superman : Martha.

Batman : Martha

Kyon: Martha.

Everything will be my way! · C2
2 months ago
female martial empress? the female is reduntant. We already know that its about a girl given that its about an empress View More

Plot_Armors_Clone: shouldn't it be female martial empress? just asking. don't mind me.

Anyway, Wang Xie... err i mean, Wang xiu is reincarnated as a female to become the world's most powerful emperor err... empress.... THe yiao dao is strong with this one.

i had just read chapter one and it was intriguing. the character is on his way to great development... err, what else do i say?

uhm... goodluck dodging marriage proposals?

anyway, huge support coming from the clone sect WOOT WOOT

Martial Empress!
2 months ago

Fulcon: Eh, I'm going to assume that your lack of actually pointing OUT any idiodic mistakes is less him being stupid and more you just disagreeing with his decisions.

SHINOBI: The RPG
2 months ago

TheTrueGilgamesh: I don't want him hanging out with that idiot MC from cannon i hope it doesn't happen cuz it will be suck.

Tower Of God: Blast · C0
2 months ago
Please do. If you could make a serious TDG fanfic it would be great. I believe you are one of the few writers interested that can do that. Also thanks for replying. I do love your work but it gets boring after a while View More

AbyssalVoidLord: Indeed, this was just me working with 'How op can I make MC' to the point I never worked on the shaping of his personality and improving the weird world of TDG. I might make another TDG fanfic in the future.

An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic
2 months ago

AbyssalVoidLord: Indeed, this was just me working with 'How op can I make MC' to the point I never worked on the shaping of his personality and improving the weird world of TDG. I might make another TDG fanfic in the future.

An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic
2 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Trashy wish fulfillment of mediocre man child. Right from the start the author stand in was given ultimate power without cost by some "god". Like that kind of being will give some child that kind of power. View More
DXD Fanfic: Rise of the Phenex
4 months ago
They are administrators of the world. Essential gods or the equivalent on the type of system in their multiverse View More

Finding_Master: You mean to tell me the Shen sisters live in modern world but have advanced knowledge and they also have a teleportation system inside their home?

My Master Disconnected Yet Again · C278
4 months ago
Fucking called it. I new it that before she even game into that different world, she already has power View More
My Master Disconnected Yet Again · C278
4 months ago
Reading Status: C3
Completely pointless wank pic without any ounce of creativity.

Do not bother reading this if you value your time. There are better TDG fanfics to read. View More
Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
4 months ago
You did not choose to be miserable? Nope, you did. Being gay is not a choice and it's an entirely different matter from happiness. You can be gay or not and you can either be happy or unhappy. View More
I Was Reincarnated Into A Harem Game As A Villain, Please Stay Away I'm Gay! · C1
4 months ago
God this is good. actually character development from a xianxia protagonist View More
Dual Cultivation · C64
4 months ago
I agree with you about the dislike with OP protagonist. But its not compare Shen Ying to the typical protagonist that is handed power out of nowhere. If you read behind the line, you will realize that Shen Ying already have power even before the transmigration. The system think she is a high dimension being. Think the GodFiend unexpectedly summoned a being from the forth or higher dimension View More

Daoist_Jie: A comedic novel that you would read only for the laughs. I generally do not like this kind of story where the female protagonist becomes OP out of nowhere but has no redeeming personal qualities. Female protagonist randomly becomes a super cultivator but is extremely lazy, selfish, irresponsible (not trying to learn about the world she is in and irresponsibly taking on a disciple), and dismissive of others(simply using them and not even bothering to remember their names). But the writing style is really funny and it is a good read for times when you just want to chill and destress.

My Master Disconnected Yet Again
4 months ago
Reading Status: C65
Mediocre Fanfic of TDG.

As a character, I dislike Nie Li but at least he has a goal. The MC here is just exploring the world and curb stomping **** using whatever the author pulls out from their ass.

Its a wankfic that rehashes canon with a even bigger wanker.

If you like TDG even though the protagonist sucks, like me, our options our reality limited. And this is one of the few TDG fanfics we could read. Try it but if you have read canon, its going to bore you after a while.

At Least the author does not like harems like every other horny sexless then here. Also he/she has the discipline to write a lot and consistently. He/she has a future as a writer if he/she can learn how to properly structure a story and plot View More
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic
4 months ago
Hhahha. You are so freaking right. Really stupid of the author to think that. A person who live "billions" of years does not have the same morals as us mere mortals View More

Nydre: Breaking news! Few hundred million years old cultivator loses his cool because of a pedophile when his fiance is 13 years old!

An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic · C62
4 months ago

Nydre: Breaking news! Few hundred million years old cultivator loses his cool because of a pedophile when his fiance is 13 years old!

An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic · C62
4 months ago
Its getting boring. You could have skipped this part of something. Its just a rehash of canon View More
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic · C39
4 months ago
boring chapter. with a few changes, its still like canon View More
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic · C27
4 months ago
Keep fighting. Don't let the these people bully you to make a harem. Shen Tian is clearly a man of character with great ambitions, he has no time for more than 1 woman View More
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic · C7
4 months ago
This would have been much better without the a system and ROB. You could have made the god the sage emperor View More
The Shaman King in TDG · C1
4 months ago
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