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  • NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE

    NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE

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    Story of a super naruto fan named Tan Hishaki who is reincarnated into naruto world . This story shows how he uses his knowledge to become a great sage in this world. Warning: I do not own this franchise. All characters belong to the respective owner. Readers must have knowledge of naruto , naruto shippuden . The cover image does not belong to me

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well i kind of dropped this novel but since you want me to continue so i will and the next chapter will be out probably till tomorrow. View More

BoyWonder369: Love it. Please continue

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C38
1 week ago

Extant: I like this, but the quick switching of the other characters is unnecessary and more disruptive. It would be better to do a third person perspective for all the other characters when a chapter is dedicated to a specific character.

There also needs to be more details on what the other characters are doing.

Such as:
"Asuma bit down on his cigarette in shock as his eyes roamed over the crater for a few moments, taking in the destruction, before shifting his gaze to the boy lying in the center of the crater that caused this destruction. He had only a single thought in his head as he gazed down at the boy, (What kind of monster is this kid!?)"

My example is not the best, but it gives you a small number of details that you can improve on.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE
3 weeks ago

tomaz: Good job.

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

frangky: I think this fan fiction have a potential, and please don't drop it. Also I think he should slowly combine the chakra and control it to the maximum so he can control and do it more efficient

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE
3 weeks ago

aiyra84: this novel keeps on getting better and better and even the character development is very good .. overall very nice rest is filler bdfuzbczfbbudf

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

PuffyFluppy: interesting

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3 weeks ago

xenotron40: One word to describe this novel will be AWESOME!!.....even though the novel is a bit slow pace it’s enjoyable and the slow pace can be completely ignored with a little bit of patience but to find out why I’m rating it so high you gonna have to read this jolly novel😊

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3 weeks ago

SusanoKilla: The novel is good, i keep checking every day for a new chapter !!!
Can't wait till the real action starts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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3 weeks ago

MohamedRost: The novel is good, i keep checking every day for a new chapter !!!
Can't wait till the real action starts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

The_Inheritor: Ty for the chapter!~

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3 weeks ago
thnx for the nice idea and i was also thinking things like this View More

Illusory_Reality: During this chunin exam , Tan should split clones from his body to get one-tailed chakra from gaara and nine-tailed chakra from the fourth hokage minato who was revived by orochimaru , he should also kill danzo or something

Also , make tan learn taijutso and eight inner gates technique from gai
Make him learn kenjutso in the land of iron by fighting the samurais there
Make him learn fuuinjutsu from jiraya as jiraya had learned some seals of uzumaki from kushina
Make him learn genjutsu from kurenai yuhi and the kurama clan
Make him get a summoner's scroll to dragons or womething that noone has ever got and learn the sage mode of the dragons that allows moving while gathering natural energy , also learn their sage martial arts.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C38
3 weeks ago

Illusory_Reality: During this chunin exam , Tan should split clones from his body to get one-tailed chakra from gaara and nine-tailed chakra from the fourth hokage minato who was revived by orochimaru , he should also kill danzo or something

Also , make tan learn taijutso and eight inner gates technique from gai
Make him learn kenjutso in the land of iron by fighting the samurais there
Make him learn fuuinjutsu from jiraya as jiraya had learned some seals of uzumaki from kushina
Make him learn genjutsu from kurenai yuhi and the kurama clan
Make him get a summoner's scroll to dragons or womething that noone has ever got and learn the sage mode of the dragons that allows moving while gathering natural energy , also learn their sage martial arts.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C38
3 weeks ago

RiskyA: Ty for the chap

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C35
1 month ago

jasss22: Thanks for the chapter.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C35
1 month ago

KuroMasoku: Thanks for the chapter

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C35
1 month ago

drake: Thanks for the chapter
And here's a power stone
Keep up the good work👍👌💯

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C35
1 month ago
i have planned that tan will take the nine tails chakra during chunin exam and as for danzo i have a very special thing for him View More

Gamer2800: Plz make saito take ninetails chakra which is being wasted by naruto..and plz make it that when tan reaches konoha and danzo make a move kill danzo....
And thnkz for the chapter

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C34
1 month ago

KuroMasoku: Thanks for the chapter

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C32
1 month ago
thnx for ur advice and yes i will show tan's strength by fighting kisame and zabuza View More

The_Inheritor: But, I guess it doesn't hurt to say a little bit;

I found the interaction between zabusa and Kisame to be pretty entertaining and I like how you are introducing combination jutsus now. Even though I myself don't like the idea of teaching everyone lots of jutsus, it seems to be a pretty good way to strengthen the characters in moderation without pulling some BS plot device out of your ass.

If anything, I feel like you are changing Naruto's character quite a bit, for better or worse, and making all of the konoha characters stronger may backfire a bit if you don't have original arcs or OC's planned, but it is otherwise a better alternative to just intentionally leaving everything the same as canon.

One other thing I keep finding myself thinking about is how strong Tan actually is. I mean, it has been stated or implied a while ago, but he is constantly getting stronger and more versatile with his jutsus, so I wonder if Kisame is going to be used as a marker to show his growth/ current strength, or just as a setback for the MCs character growth.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C34
1 month ago

The_Inheritor: But, I guess it doesn't hurt to say a little bit;

I found the interaction between zabusa and Kisame to be pretty entertaining and I like how you are introducing combination jutsus now. Even though I myself don't like the idea of teaching everyone lots of jutsus, it seems to be a pretty good way to strengthen the characters in moderation without pulling some BS plot device out of your ass.

If anything, I feel like you are changing Naruto's character quite a bit, for better or worse, and making all of the konoha characters stronger may backfire a bit if you don't have original arcs or OC's planned, but it is otherwise a better alternative to just intentionally leaving everything the same as canon.

One other thing I keep finding myself thinking about is how strong Tan actually is. I mean, it has been stated or implied a while ago, but he is constantly getting stronger and more versatile with his jutsus, so I wonder if Kisame is going to be used as a marker to show his growth/ current strength, or just as a setback for the MCs character growth.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C34
1 month ago

jasss22: Thanks for the chapter.

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C34
1 month ago

Rakokus69: Nice one.. Winter is coming.. Mooaaarrreeee fighting Plz..

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C34
1 month ago

zero2307: Thanks for the chapter

NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE · C34
1 month ago

yas81: 😀

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1 month ago

yas81: 😀

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1 month ago
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