Zygon

2yr

Commented

Awesome story author, it has great potential and I hope you write more in the future!!

ch 0 1 I'm The Homelander And I Can Do Whatever The--Wait, what?

Multiversal Homelander (Hiatus)

TV · The_Homelander

Zygon

2yr

Commented

i think loki says that in a way that he knows there not blood related but still thinks its funny to say

"Speak of the devil," I say as my sister/lover entered the room.

Zygon

2yr

Replied to BeautifulBastard

i think it meant that loki told him if he didnt learn to contol his lighting it would be the death of him and it nearly did if it wasnt loki in disguise attacking them.

Lightning coursed through my skin and one of my famous uncontrolled element blasts came from my hand towards the spot they were. Loki was right, not learning to control my powers properly would one day be the death of me.

The Tale Of Loki

Movies · DickMcJones

Zygon

2yr

Commented

Great story author hope you write more but dont overwork yourself!

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My Random story ideas and chapters.

TV · Westley86

Zygon

2yr

Commented

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Wanda

Warhammer System in Marvel

Movies · BillNyeThePGGuy

Zygon

2yr

Commented

1

Jean

Warhammer System in Marvel

Movies · BillNyeThePGGuy

Zygon

2yr

Commented

+1

Hela

Warhammer System in Marvel

Movies · BillNyeThePGGuy

Zygon

2yr

Commented

exp

ch 18 hiatus for god knows when

cultivating for exp: a not so original idea

Realistic · meatgrinder

Zygon

2yr

Commented

+1

1. Rewrite this story. If you follow my Marvel's Osmosian story, that story is a lot better than the original since I've gotten a lot more experienced as a writer. A rewrite of this story would give me the chance to flush out character interactions more and develop the story better. I may or may not switch the powerset he gets from the beginning to something that would allow more growth.