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It's been a long time since I read this so I dont 100% remember but I think I just meant he should lie to make her feel better. Getting stronger than Arlong wouldn't be too hard so even if he isn't earning money he can just stomp him when he gets back View More

Havoc76: No amount of money will make Arlong go away so he shouldn’t give her anymore false hope

One Piece: God of Lightning · C7
2 months ago

nothinsnew: still have to read the story, he can tell hes from other world, but if he talks about future, then itll be trash

Ultimate Fruit
2 months ago

Gutterstomp: A biiiig plot hole. The joy that a novel brings to a reader is seeing the Mc climb the ladder of power and watch the Mc succeed but after all the hard work of making the Mc a smart and honestly a person that is not retarded the author decides to just ruin that by making him keep a assistant that he KNOWS is going to betray him. Honestly ruins the hype that the readers have for the success of the Mc especially after being told that he WILL lose pretty much everything. I’m not sure why he did that, maybe to keep the story going but I’m pretty sure no one wants to read how the Mc gets back up AGAIN after all that has happened.

The Lustful Dungeon Master (Hiatus)
3 months ago

RockNRage: I have read up to chapter 70 and after seeing only positive reviews I thnk the author needs an honest one. WQuality adn SUpdates is top tier, nothing to say, just some minor mistakes but nothing much. The problem is all the rest:
Despite being an original, this is exactly like all the CN novels in the good and the bad way. The MC is a reincarnator, yet he doesn't feel and earthling. He gets used to kill immediately and the fact that he is from earth is meaningless to the story, only justify his cheat ability. He is described in the early chapters like a normal good for nothing that yet becomes a workaholic with an indomitable willl after being reborn, for no apparent reason. The WB is kosher, like any cultivation novel there is the dantian, the sea of consciousness, etc. Minor variation but nothing original. A lot of faceslapping, arrogant young lords, and as in CN the avarage IQ of all chars is around 20. Even a patriarch orders amount to nothing thanks to the low IQ. If you are okay with an original novel that is identical to a CN where the MC just trains and kills and has almost no inner monologue aside those about killing and training, that just feels like a pair of pants for the reader to fit, than this is the novel for you.
I dropped this after lily's death. Seriously, she was already 1 dimensional, killing her like that is lazy writing to let the protagonist be unchained. Her love didn't affect the MC in the least, he became a cold blooded killer anyway, I don't get why using her in the novel. Could have died from childbirth and no one would notice the difference, not even the MC

Birth of the Demonic Sword
4 months ago
Yeah I misunderstood/misremembered and thought you were referring to the vulturi turning rocky. I thought that turned them weaker as well which apparently it does not. But tbh because the MC is fireproof that removes literally the only physical weakness for vampires and with his boosted firepower being as physically powerful as a newborn isn't really that important IMO. He already only needs to worry about psychic attacks View More

Trek: Yes but in the end, they loose strength and that's important to solve so that mc can remain stronger. Thats what I mean because its wasted potential, once you loose it no way to gain it back.

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago
Newborn vampires are only stronger for a short period of time. It is a one time boost not a consistent weakening as vampires get older. View More

Trek: "Newborn vampires are always stronger than older ones, since their strength derives from the lingering human blood left in their body from their human life."
Look again, more closely this time.

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago
Na mate, I just looked at it and the wiki proved me right. "A vampire may not move at all, if need be, and if they stay immobile for several thousand years, they will start showing the appearance of fragility or petrification, though their physical capabilities will remain unchanged. Aside from Aro's clouded, "milky" eyes, Bella notes that his skin—as well as that of his brothers, Marcus and Caius—looks like paper. However, though they feel closer to shale than granite, they are no more fragile than those remaining active." View More

Trek: Na mate, look at the wiki to refresh your memory.

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago
I'm actually really glad he wasnt able to block the vampires powers at all with only 2 years of training. But a human blocking vampire reinforced mind powers is literally the main plot of the entire first Twilight book. View More

tetlay: how do you now a human mind can defend against vampire reinforced powers?

Becoming Immortal · C9
5 months ago

tetlay: how do you now a human mind can defend against vampire reinforced powers?

Becoming Immortal · C9
5 months ago
Tbh as cool as the twilight vampire powers are, they basically turn people into edgy blood powered marble statues filled with poison. The MC shouldnt go that route because living a life with a muted sense of touch, everything but blood tasting like ass, and never being able to sleep sounds like a horrible eternal life to live. I hope the fires burning away the poison in his blood is foreshadowing for purifying or burning away the vamp poison to make him a psuedo hybrid comparable to Bella's super baby.
Just please please no wuxia powers and tropes. Twilight vampires are invincible to regular humans, but there really isn't room for constant power ups and breaking limits.
Also this story is awesome and I'm excited for more. View More
Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago
I havent read the books since I was a kid but I'm pretty sure the older vampires only got weaker because they intentionally stayed still. That might be from something else but I'm 70% sure it was twilight. View More

Trek: Plus mc needs to fix the problem of older vampires getting weaker that happens in twilight if he truly wants to be strong.

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago

ErozothDraeor: really? he is looking for vampires and his "mind played tricks on him"?

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago

SnowLove: Hey man I don’t he would be that dumb to just write off something he sees as imagination, this is especially dumb because he has express the ability to understand that he’s living in a supernatural world, but then write something so easy to see it’s supernatural as nothing, that’s just dumb, unless that girl had a power that hides her so she goes unnoticed but even then if you notice her once then she should be present already, or another power that erases her ever appearing within someones mind but then what if the she can’t control it so no one ever remember her, ten how was she able to survive as a baby or did her power manifest later in life, but it also looks like she could be immortal/vampire, but yeah I’m just annoyed that the main characters being a dumb-buttocks when the super natural exist.

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago

leylinn: sigh, lol the good old 'only my imagination' while in a setting where there are supernatural powers...

Becoming Immortal · C8
5 months ago
This whole chapter felt a bit rushed to me. We didnt learn anything new about the fight with Soi Fon and just got more harem antics with Orihime. I feel like referencing the anime outside of Itsuki's POV felt a bit odd. Making the flashback be something Yoroichi is actually experiencing instead of just a narrative change felt wierd too. View More
Rebirth in Bleach · C71
6 months ago
I think you should show other POVs and also show Itsuki's interactions in more detail. Usually multiple POV is one of the things I dont like if it is constant and cuts into the story. But Itsuki just isn't very expressive so he needs someone else as a contrast to make the world feel more alive. Even if you dont want to focus too much on romance, showing Gin or Hinamori or a tertiary characters perspective would really help to show how big a difference someone as strong and competent as Itsuki would make in the world.
The only thing I really see Itsuki putting any effort into is getting stronger. It makes sense that gaining strength is his #1 priority because he knows the future. But I still want to see more of his thoughts and preferences with other things like friendships, romances, and his leadership as a captain. Those are just examples but he has lived there for over 100 years and his lifespan is alot longer, just living to gain strength would be pretty boring. View More
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
6 months ago
Damn it kind of sucks he turned out to be such a coward. If he wont even try to help out his third brother that he is closest to what is the point of becoming strong? I cant wait until someone strong threatens his family or lovers so he can slip away and promise revenge for later. He could have gone to Beruit to ask for help or something, that way he could at least lie to himself and say he did everything he could.
I think his cowardice bugs me so much because in all xianxia stories, including CD, risking your life for your dreams and your loved ones is always a really important part of your willpower. And who would want to live an eternity having to live with the fact that you didnt even try to save the people you cared about. I guess Reynolds being a coward does kind of fit with his personality so far, its till kind of a bummer though to read about. View More
The Burning Fiend · C59
6 months ago

Whitecomet: MC's behavior is not any form of friendship. We all hate MC running to their deaths and I understand you tried to show practicality and pragmatism but all it came out as coldness and indifference. In fact, it has been a while since these kind of feeling has been passed on by the MC. This is a completely dark turn around for MC and it is pure excuse and selfishness/egotistical for MC to think he would revenge for Linley "later".

The Burning Fiend · C59
6 months ago
Why would a Godeater rat care if someone else is eating souls? View More

ErozothDraeor: Maybe he doesn't like the way the MC is. Author writes it in a way to lighten the situation but the MC just performed a genocide by eating the SOULS of a lot of creatures, there is a reason why he is concerned in the real world people won't take kindly to it. Can't really go more evil than a devil cultivator that eats souls.

The Burning Fiend · C46
6 months ago

jai_97: Beirut is a soverign. Introducing new enemies for linley and bebe without a sait noticing should be far too easy for him. He doesn't really need to lessen the rewards obtained by MC.

The Burning Fiend · C46
6 months ago
I'm pretty sure Linley having the shape of a sword was supposed to be something super rare. Even though it was a red herring and they didnt do anything useful with it. View More
The Burning Fiend · C35
6 months ago

Slesk: MC Saint breakthrough was anticlimatic as all hell....

The Burning Fiend · C32
6 months ago
I'm pretty sure him talking to his parents like that would be totally ****ed up in the CD world. Filial piety is incredibly important in that culture. He could have just said no in a way more courteous way instead of implying he would rather kill his whole family and die with them. His personality is totally all over the place View More
The Burning Fiend · C30
6 months ago

Whitecomet: Nope you can fly as soon as you hit Saint level regardless of your level of insight into laws.

The Burning Fiend · C27
6 months ago

ErozothDraeor: This story is close to being great, the "slave" part feels forced just to make sure he is not too "good".

The Burning Fiend · C22
6 months ago

LMaltez: Indeed... Not really necessary a second maid... He already has one which is becoming stronger... Why one more...

The Burning Fiend · C22
6 months ago
To be honest I was getting kind of annoyed with everything sticking to canon even though there were more than enough changes for it to be different. But Soi Fon being pissed that Yoroichi popped his cherry is so funny to me I got over it. I'm still hoping to see a mommas boy Ichigo though.
You could also show some flashbacks to show the differences between this story and canon interactions. So that even though it looks similar from Itsuki's point of view, there are still changes that we didnt see. Right now it feels more like a summary while only concentrating on the big fights. View More
Rebirth in Bleach · C67
6 months ago

WillSmith: He should have told Nami he was leaving to earn some more money for Arlong or something. Because right now hes kinda just leaving her alone on one of the worst days of her life just so he can go train

One Piece: God of Lightning · C7
6 months ago
Nice. I like this outcome best View More
Uchiha Madara : Reborn as Cao Cao · C8
6 months ago

RealmSeeker: I hope it’s the second theory that way he’ll obtain Madaras knowledge and experience and learn from them without being shackled by his past. I’ve grown a bit attached to Cao Cao (madara2) and want to see him do his own thing and live his own life.

Uchiha Madara : Reborn as Cao Cao · C7
6 months ago
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