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Havent found a good read in a while and this is definitely top quality.

Honest Review (Read 43 Chapters): It's a story that combines transmigration+system+ pet monster+human strength story with a kid from a poor background who trains and gets stronger. ------- How I feel: The System: Super confusing, not really explained much, there are some details given but it's very rudimentary. I feel like the author likes the concept of a system holder and just added it half-heartedly. Transmigration: Not really much in there, other than the fact that the main character just randomly glosses over the fact that he's a transmigrator. But you don't really feel that way at all. He doesn't talk, act or have the emotions of a transmigrator. Again I feel like the author either like's transmigration/ reincarnation stories and just added it without much thought. Monster: The monsters in the story aren't bad, the author explains the power rankings in a good way. The main problems I found other than the above were also the lack of consistency, in one chapter a character has a name, and in the other, he has a different name. The same goes with the monsters, the character is linked to a "Green-eyed Dragon" but in chapters 42-43 he starts calling the dragon blue-eyed???? Also, he gave the dragon a name, yet never doesn't use it? The book feels like a bad version of Monster Integration and any random system-themed novel.

Finally just would like to point out, im only saying all this since i really think the story concept has HUGE potential. And its sad to see these many problems with it, only writing this so that future works of the author can be better.

After all is said and done, the point im trying to make is that the first impression of Leo is this kid that took over his city at a young age, and is very poor, causing him to mature early on and hunt for a living. But the author along the journey switches it up making Leo into a totally different character. I mean assassins take on jobs for money, not charity, no matter how righteous they are. Yet this super assassin with all these achievements in his organization cant even kill a rabbit, or better yet use that money for his city. I mean he only had 10,000 gold coins saved up from hunting and from his savings of couple years. There are many things that really dont add up. With each chapter an even more unrealistic truth about Leo pops up. Honestly for me this ruins the entire story. Secondly, although this isn’t a major concern of mine, the author introduces this huge planet with different races but only glosses over them and doesn’t develop them in any way. Thirdly, the whole story revolves around magic, yet even-though he’s this smart guy he doesn’t really get it till 100+ chapters in.

First of id like to say that I’ve never really written a review before, solely because i either really enjoyed the book or i don’t and stop reading. However this book caught my attention in the beginning but the development is so sad.