Webnovel Author: richonisy - Fanfic Collection

richonisy

25d

Posted

This is a really solid Harry Potter story. The world is more expanded upon than most other fanfics, and there is an actual world outside of the protagonist. The only real critique I have as of chapter 25 is that dialog between characters and their thoughts feel unnatural. Oftentimes, the same phrases will be repeated the same way. e.g, when Harry talks to the administrators who will decide his future education, they all say the exact same phrases when talking about him. Ramble Underneath I don't really care if authors use AI to help them write, but it can sometimes lead to a limited vocabulary(it might not be AI, and the author could just struggle with convincing dialog). A lot of AI stories use a higher level of vocabulary but don't apply it correctly and ends up making dialog too rigid

richonisy

2mth

Commented

so the author in the story made a clone of btth

However, in the past ten years, he has hardly made any progress. At the age of sixteen, he is still stuck at the first level of martial artist. He has become a laughingstock of everyone in Tiannan City and is also the target of everyone's bullying in the family.

I Became the Villain's Ancestor

Anime & Comics · Nizeara_Osaiyol

richonisy

3mth

Commented

Why lie and say he just now gained these abilities? He really doesn't need to. If you are going to have an op mc, it's better for him to show his strength and not have to tip toe around revealing it.

"I don't know how to describe it, I just sorta knew how to do things I couldn't before, like this." I said before causing the room to fall below freezing temperature for a few seconds before going back to regular.

A Blind Man In Twilight

Movies · outsidr

richonisy

3mth

Commented

1. I think it would be weird to have more partners. you explained that he and raven have a "connection". will he also have this connection to other girls? if not then it is kind of unfair to them.

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richonisy

4mth

Commented

thanks for the chappie

ch 30 Chaptere 28: First Task

(HP X MCU) Multiversal Adventure : World Outside Hogwarts

Movies · suffix0

richonisy

4mth

Posted

where do I even begin. Everything is amazing. The characters are convincing and engaging. The storyline keeps me hooked and the wait between each chapter is so worth it. This is one of the best fanfics to ever be created.

Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

Anime & Comics · EvansKannon

richonisy

4mth

Commented

batman is talking like an mcu character

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I Am Energy In Dc

Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours

richonisy

4mth

Commented

thanks for the chapter. this is a really cool novel and I love your writing style.

ch 28 Chapter 26: no more unfinished business

(HP X MCU) Multiversal Adventure : World Outside Hogwarts

Movies · suffix0

richonisy

6mth

Commented

take your time

ch 0 6 Schedule

Transmigrated as Nevillie Longbottom

Book&Literature · Prometheus96

richonisy

7mth

Commented

thank you. I also really like the story so far your writing is pretty good.

ch 45 Chapter 43: Weird Names.

Rebirth in the Divine Realms

Anime & Comics · LordHornZ

richonisy

7mth

Commented

I swear I saw one fanfic use the word enigmatic a couple months ago. Now everybody is overusing it

The enigmatic hero had been responsible for the technological marvels that stood as bastions of defense across the city.

Venturing in the multiverse

Anime & Comics · Enyru

richonisy

7mth

Commented

Rigel, knowing that the attacker was actually Voldemort, had been most worried about the killing curse, and while it could be blocked by transfiguration and physical barriers, there wasn't a lot he could do, being unable to move and bend trees with any great speed. Instead, he'd entered the forest carrying a pouch of sand in his pocket, having spent the last week learning the sand-to-glass spell, which, while fragile, he theorised might deflect the spell somewhat, giving him the chance to dodge. A whip of fire swiped through the darkness, slicing towards him, and Rigel dived to the ground in panic. "There you are," came a disgusting, hissing voice. Rigel readied the sand, picturing a shield, ready for the green curse, unable to protect against the bright red streak that flowed instead.

Born of a Star (HP FanFic)

Movies · Ravven2769

richonisy

7mth

Posted

This feels like it was written by an ai. No shade, but this writing style seems too familiar

Venturing in the multiverse

Anime & Comics · Enyru

richonisy

8mth

Commented

don't worry too much about it. write wehenever you have good ideas, we can wait.

Sorry guys and short chapter today. I'm having a severe case of writer's block. I want to write chapters, but my mind seems to blank out when I'm on my keyboard. I know I said I would spurn out more chapters, but I'm blank. Therefore the release rate will slow down for a bit. I will write more chapters, but it won't be frequent. It will pick when I organize what I want to write and how the story will go from now on.