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Cyttorak

male LV 4

always tired

2019-04-03 Joined United States

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it'd be Hiruzen's office right now
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thank you for clarifying, I was also worried it was heading that direction

"I'll go," Dan gave his Wife a smile as he moved toward the door. "You might have been right, Revan's real goal was always the destruction of the hidden Sith Empire… even if we return all her memories now, she'll likely listen to reason if we show her what we can do."

Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story

Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story

Anime & Comics · VendakSoth

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yeah, it shouldn't even be around yet at this point
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Kazekage*

Gaara was also having fun, he didn't have many friends and since he was going to become the next Hokage people acted with way too much respect toward him so it was like a breath of fresh air to be around Naruto, who didn't care who you were or what position you held.

Naruto: the gamer system

Naruto: the gamer system

Anime & Comics · Washuru

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no
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slower but better translations 100%

[Vote here if you want a good Translation but the updating process was slow]

MHA: Devil Fruit System

MHA: Devil Fruit System

Anime & Comics · Lazy_Ryuu

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naruto
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thank you for not doing a harem
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I like that he does whatever he wants but I wouldn't be opposed to him being evil either.

Q6: I have two separate plot lines planned out. One where the MC starts getting corrupted and becomes an evil being at the same level as Sukuna, and one where he does whatever the fuck he wants whether it be f*cking the plot or killing characters. Additionally, if you guys want, I can make him like Itadori Yuuji. Which one do you guys like?

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa

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I've enjoyed it so far.

Q5: Is my writing style good? I feel like I put too much effort into either dialogue or thoughts but not into actions or the world. What do you guys think I should improve or stop doing?

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa

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sounded fine to me

Q4: Is the info I wrote about curses, sorcerers, techniques, etc. fine? I did alter the world a bit because I couldn't think of a good way to give the MC stuff. For example, I added the clan library, but it also seemed like a logical idea.

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa

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