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The Mech Touch · C784
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The Mech Touch · C784
BattleLord: The storyline seems to revolve around Ves becoming a Mech Designer, to that end he goes on life/death quests (arc's) to accomplish this goal. At first he attended the Leemar Institute Mech Designer Competition story arc. Then the Groening story arc. The Grazer/Crystal civilization story arc. The Glowing Planet story arc. The Mech Corps war with the Mech Legion. Now the Starlight Megalodon story arc. I think I covered the major ones.
Until the Flagrant Vandals joined up with the Swordmaidens I was very satisfied with the novel. Then around June of this year, the quality of the writing dropped dramatically. Long ramblings trying to explain how Brainwashed Technicians was the norm for half the Pirate Clans. Established businesses suppressed new business startups by hiring Mech Mercenaries to wipe them out. Hackers that literally went out of their way to even hack chips in children's heads for no real benefit. While cosmetic surgery and artificial wombs eliminates sexual stereotyping, if you were an Expert Pilot, the Swordmaidens would turn you away because of your birth sexual equipment.
Even the idea of spending time and resources to build a stealth shuttle as a life saving device without determining how it would return Ves to civilization was a waste of effort. As with previous designs the author explained the goal, plan, theory in great detail so that the readers understand the concept. Who would set out to build an invisible life raft? The entire concept of a life raft is to be found. If Ves stated his intention to build a stealth shuttle was because he suspected the Swordmaidens were planning to ambush the Flagrant Vandals and despite all his efforts to warn Major Verle he had no other choice but worry about his own safety, I could embrace that reasoning.
This was not good Sci-Fi which utilizes science to extrapolates the what ifs and build a fictional story around it. It was a weird social/economic tangent that took up chapters and added nothing to advancing the story. How any of that helps Ves become a better Mech Designer is beyond my understanding. I attribute it to rushing to write chapters to meet the Premium "money grab"!
Now that the rushed chapters have passed, the author is back to writing excellent Sci-Fi again. The mosaic of Seven is stupendous. It is like the first pages of the novel all over again. After reading this far, I would at least complete reading to they reach the Starlight Megalodon. Exlor has demonstrated in the previous story arcs that writing good Sci-Fi is what the author does best. Regardless if it is about a mechanical cat, or a mysterious high tech communication device, a well written story is worth reading.The Mech Touch · C784
Dragonborn Saga · C453
ImmortalBoomstick: inner fluff huh and mirren you became a female in jons eyes the gay scene is just around the corner.Dragonborn Saga · C453
logan222: This author writes better cultivation arcs than most. Plus he is a lot more descriptive than most.. You at least get a feeling that his worlds are solid with concrete rules and concepts..The Great Ruler · C390
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Oneesan: Ever tried actually singing a song and kissing at the same time? 😂Spending My Retirement In A Game · C288
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melikachan: And it's actually a GriffinA Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C181
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The Mech Touch · C771
Thornier: The secret here that caught my eye was the remains of the sandman admiral. If they make great AI cores, could it be that the reason for the special effects of lucky's gems is that each gem has a low-level AI?The Mech Touch · C771
OverlordXanth: Please spell Stahl like the story does. It's absolutely triggering some intense OCD in me.Spending My Retirement In A Game · C281
Hassan_Hadi: when I read the date and realize that its not too long until the start of the game and Jon trolling every one about how he told them dragons will returnDragonborn Saga · C450
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nintendo248: He's going to need a bunch of containers.Spending My Retirement In A Game · C281
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C281
Silram: Poor expert, I hoped he could work for ves in the end but don't see it happening in the future.
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The Mech Touch · C766
Esoril: I see hope in the distorted space time. It would be good if the entire war has finished due to distorted time by the time Ves leaves this system and we can finally see the end of war arc.The Mech Touch · C766
The Mech Touch · C764
BattleLord: My impression of the C22 Earth Ant is a concept similar to the Mitchellan Man mascot, a series of round surfaces. Add Inspector Gadget AI voice commands and Ves is ready for action, "go... go... targeting system, go... go... jammer, go... go... stealth knife, go... go... to the bathroom, seriously guys help me out of this thing, I really have to go. Why didn't I include a fully functioning codpiece!?"
This chapter has definitely earned 5 stars for the author thinking up so many details dealing with a high G environment.
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