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Or it's easier to see elsewhere as there is no actual need to hide these things yet. Such needs do exist for Free society. The easiest to spot in 1st World would be prostitution rings. View More
The Mech Touch · C784
19 hours ago
If Miranda was not purring, that Zara girl would be in danger. Even as a bishop, Jonya would tap that. View More
Dragonborn Saga · C454
19 hours ago
Humanoids on top of an exobeast... where have we seen that already? Don't answer as I already know. It's still pretty normal that peoples wil come up with the same ideas on differents continent or in this case planets, at about the same time. View More
The Mech Touch · C784
20 hours ago
I think it's easy to forget that not all society work with the same level of right and liberty. The encounter with the Swordmaidens and the explanations about the mech market on the frontier, I see that as equal to visiting some 3rd world nation and being shocked that slavery is present, sexism in full force, people sold for debt, etc.

We do not like to have our heads shoved into **** or a puddle of nasty. We would love to believe that higher standard of living triumph everytime. So I do understand these chapters and why they might have been less pleasant for the readers.

I guess I'll see later where the story goes after the Flagrant Vandals. View More

BattleLord: The storyline seems to revolve around Ves becoming a Mech Designer, to that end he goes on life/death quests (arc's) to accomplish this goal. At first he attended the Leemar Institute Mech Designer Competition story arc. Then the Groening story arc. The Grazer/Crystal civilization story arc. The Glowing Planet story arc. The Mech Corps war with the Mech Legion. Now the Starlight Megalodon story arc. I think I covered the major ones.

Until the Flagrant Vandals joined up with the Swordmaidens I was very satisfied with the novel. Then around June of this year, the quality of the writing dropped dramatically. Long ramblings trying to explain how Brainwashed Technicians was the norm for half the Pirate Clans. Established businesses suppressed new business startups by hiring Mech Mercenaries to wipe them out. Hackers that literally went out of their way to even hack chips in children's heads for no real benefit. While cosmetic surgery and artificial wombs eliminates sexual stereotyping, if you were an Expert Pilot, the Swordmaidens would turn you away because of your birth sexual equipment.

Even the idea of spending time and resources to build a stealth shuttle as a life saving device without determining how it would return Ves to civilization was a waste of effort. As with previous designs the author explained the goal, plan, theory in great detail so that the readers understand the concept. Who would set out to build an invisible life raft? The entire concept of a life raft is to be found. If Ves stated his intention to build a stealth shuttle was because he suspected the Swordmaidens were planning to ambush the Flagrant Vandals and despite all his efforts to warn Major Verle he had no other choice but worry about his own safety, I could embrace that reasoning.

This was not good Sci-Fi which utilizes science to extrapolates the what ifs and build a fictional story around it. It was a weird social/economic tangent that took up chapters and added nothing to advancing the story. How any of that helps Ves become a better Mech Designer is beyond my understanding. I attribute it to rushing to write chapters to meet the Premium "money grab"!

Now that the rushed chapters have passed, the author is back to writing excellent Sci-Fi again. The mosaic of Seven is stupendous. It is like the first pages of the novel all over again. After reading this far, I would at least complete reading to they reach the Starlight Megalodon. Exlor has demonstrated in the previous story arcs that writing good Sci-Fi is what the author does best. Regardless if it is about a mechanical cat, or a mysterious high tech communication device, a well written story is worth reading.

The Mech Touch · C784
20 hours ago
Uncle Sheo might have narrowed it down for Jon. At the very least identify which Daedric was active within the region. View More
Dragonborn Saga · C453
1 day ago
Yeah, Jon tone was very erotic saying that. Something about the overflow of inner fluffness. View More

ImmortalBoomstick: inner fluff huh and mirren you became a female in jons eyes the gay scene is just around the corner.

Dragonborn Saga · C453
1 day ago
At the very least MC got to work for success, it doesn't come without hurdles. View More

logan222: This author writes better cultivation arcs than most. Plus he is a lot more descriptive than most.. You at least get a feeling that his worlds are solid with concrete rules and concepts..

The Great Ruler · C390
3 days ago
Expectations are high toward Mu Chen from every students of that Northern Academy. He's delivering the good stuff. View More
The Great Ruler · C390
3 days ago
Nice chapter, finally we confirmed that Benji's really going for a Jack-of-all-trade caracter. Also he might get a job as an Omni something just like Eisen. The kid got game. View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C288
3 days ago
There might be an achievement for that. Than Stahl would lose it by looking at the notification instead of concentrating on the girl. It's definitively the Path of Yang... View More

Oneesan: Ever tried actually singing a song and kissing at the same time? 😂

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C288
3 days ago
Always fattening Ugly Duckling... View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C182
4 days ago
Time for Ves to shine bright like a diamond. View More
The Mech Touch · C774
4 days ago
Evalia and Stahl a little reckless there. Players could easily attempt to appraise them. Still an awesome lesson for player in general. I am curious to know what effect that fight would have on Benji's skills.

I would have loved to see him finish with a : "So the result was Kill, let us satisfy your viewers." View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C286
4 days ago
Isn't it an Ugly Duckling ? Well it looks like a kitten of dubious origins right now. View More

melikachan: And it's actually a Griffin

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C181
4 days ago
I am fully expecting a citizen to ask Mag permission to study the bike and copy it. It would be such a lost if nobody did. The metal frame is not tha hard to produce, I am guessing the hardest thing to get might be the tires or the brakes. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C180
5 days ago
Ves does have some background with Alien and crystals. View More
The Mech Touch · C771
5 days ago
I was linking that Crystal ability to the Alien Crystal Ves found and used in his mech already. He may or may not understand more than he thinks about the CFA objective there. View More

Thornier: The secret here that caught my eye was the remains of the sandman admiral. If they make great AI cores, could it be that the reason for the special effects of lucky's gems is that each gem has a low-level AI?

The Mech Touch · C771
5 days ago
I'll try and remember, I was always switching while writing it anyhow. So Stahl it is then... Stahl... no inner reflex would make me go with l first *sigh* Stahl... Stahl... ok maybe Stahl... ohh well Benji it's. View More

OverlordXanth: Please spell Stahl like the story does. It's absolutely triggering some intense OCD in me.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C281
6 days ago
Major Verle got no right to whine about this. View More
The Mech Touch · C770
6 days ago
Feline are dragons, dragons are everywhere mouhahaha View More

Hassan_Hadi: when I read the date and realize that its not too long until the start of the game and Jon trolling every one about how he told them dragons will return

Dragonborn Saga · C450
6 days ago
They are about to learn the importance of faction. View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C699
1 week ago
Stalh will be stuck with the messiest inventory in the history of game. View More

nintendo248: He's going to need a bunch of containers.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C281
1 week ago
I see 2 ways things will go down for Stalh mana : 1. He'll get some kind of rainbow mana, a mix of mumbo-jumbo of any and all things. 2. He'll forever be stuck with a colorless, flavorless type of mana, pure mana, nothing else. View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C281
1 week ago
Yeah Ves pretty much already decided on the guy death. Trust being a rare commodity, Merle might end up as Ves first expert if he advance. View More

Silram: Poor expert, I hoped he could work for ves in the end but don't see it happening in the future.

Maybe ves will rescue him and undo the programming....then he could gain an expert pilot

The Mech Touch · C768
1 week ago
The Venerable already acting out. I am guessing that the telemetrie data Ves will get from this will be helpful to unlock future expert pilots among his own crew. View More
The Mech Touch · C768
1 week ago
It's good to see Isha on a path of healing. Jon gained another daedric artifact he didn't ask for. At some point, the Princes whose weapons are in Jon hands will want them back, maybe it will be them Princes whom weapons are not owned by Jon who will feel insulted by the fact he's not going after their artifacts. I could see Don making a Daedra frustrated by Jon not going for their stuff, thinking he's saying they are not worthy of his attention. View More
Dragonborn Saga · C449
1 week ago
Time manipulation does have the potential for major screw up. It's rather impressive that they only lost one ship. View More
The Mech Touch · C766
1 week ago
Seems to me as if the lost ship is in a different time frame rendering finding it impossible in the Flagrant Swordsmaiden present. View More

Esoril: I see hope in the distorted space time. It would be good if the entire war has finished due to distorted time by the time Ves leaves this system and we can finally see the end of war arc.

The Mech Touch · C766
1 week ago
Ketis is less and less of a brat. She'll sorrowly miss Ves once they are appart. View More
The Mech Touch · C764
1 week ago
It would fit better for a heavy armor. The C22 being a light one it's probably long and thin with some roundness to it a Mitchellan Man after a severe diet. View More

BattleLord: My impression of the C22 Earth Ant is a concept similar to the Mitchellan Man mascot, a series of round surfaces. Add Inspector Gadget AI voice commands and Ves is ready for action, "go... go... targeting system, go... go... jammer, go... go... stealth knife, go... go... to the bathroom, seriously guys help me out of this thing, I really have to go. Why didn't I include a fully functioning codpiece!?"

This chapter has definitely earned 5 stars for the author thinking up so many details dealing with a high G environment.
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The Mech Touch · C764
1 week ago
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