chaosinacup - Profile

Short chapters with only a small amount of progress in the story so far but what is uploaded is a very interesting beginning. The story is so far well written and engaging. My one criticism is that it is written in third person but the MC's name is replaced with Y/N (your name) that jars you as you read and breaks immersion. I hope for the future that the author takes the time to really cement an inticing sub/DOM relationship in order to keep the story as enjoyable as it is now.