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SaishoMysteriarch

SaishoMysteriarch

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I like reading and have been doing it for a long time, I also enjoy doing a bit of writing mostly fictional and just to help pass the time.

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some paragraphs are repeated.

"Ice Emperor, are you sure this hole goes straight down?" Shui Wuya confirmed again.

Douluo: Helping my ancestors ascend to godhood

Douluo: Helping my ancestors ascend to godhood

Anime & Comics · Un1que

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this one is a lot more useful in the dungeon.
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this sentence could use some tweaking, adding something like "it's like" or "not because" would have made it easier to understand on it's own without the need for the second sentence. otherwise it just reads "he didn't achieve it because he was lazy" in meaning.

Today was the seventh day of his training, and he was just one step away from completing the bone marrow refinement. And he didn't achieve it because he was lazy, but his sword training and wind art demanded a time that he had to share.

One Piece: Hunter God

One Piece: Hunter God

Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing

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people complain about that? the only reason I have to dislike it is that it means I get less chapters of a good story when I find one.

That's it for the introductory chapter. I will be adding 14k words for early rankings entry and will delete any reviews which complain about it- it's not an unfair advantage, it's a loophole, one I intend to use one hundred per cent.

Prius Scribere Loqui (HP)

Prius Scribere Loqui (HP)

Book&Literature · STEVIOL_GLY

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bro doesn't learn.

Peter narrowed his eyes, his hand still throbbing even though it was healed again. "Yeah? So what now?" he demanded, his voice tinged with defiance. "You gonna throw me into another trial? Is this supposed to be some sick form of entertainment for you?"

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

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well he isn't the only one with an uncomfortable feeling on his chest.

I got comfortable in my seat again, leaning against the inner wall of the carriage. I closed my eyes and meditated to get the wrong feeling off my chest.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

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I'm guessing you mean "the tables turned"

After it seemed like the war would take many years, the turns ... tabled. 

Humanity Unchained

Humanity Unchained

Book&Literature · Vincent_0580

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The comments on the paragraph above are wild 😂.

Tigress also seemed to hold Tai Lung in high regard, which was only natural as he is possibly the strongest Kung Fu master in all of China.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

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he believed once and we all know how that turned out.

"You just have to belive Shifu." Oogway said right before his body turned into pink petals and he left the mortal world.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

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that's nice and all but maybe you start building a fixed plotline at some point. like what he will do in one piece. you can still use the multiple povs just without the time skips.

There will be a time skip next chapter. I can see that the readers finally want to see us reach the 20th century and that's what we'll do. We'll just have to find out what the Emperor did from different sources. 

Humanity Unchained

Humanity Unchained

Book&Literature · Vincent_0580

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