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Cien did not want to sell his items at a low price. He knew the value of each item he had. Moreover, his creations, the Fire Glove and Bluminous, were already like treasures to him. He did not want to sell them cheaply just because of a mission from his phone.

Shop Owner in the Death Valley

Fantasy · hatentea

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1yr

Commented

how does he know about "adrenaline" ?

"No. We can't withdraw. That's what Amenheratf wants. If we withdraw now, the battle will end today. Our soldiers are too exhausted and once they return to camp the adrenaline will run out and exhaustion will settle in. By tomorrow the Adhanian will have built forts and just wait for the main army. So we need to win now. And we need the mobile cavalry to do it. Now go and take charge of the Sycanians, cavalry commander or not." Agapios commanded in an absolute voice.

Herald of Steel

War · FerriticMatrix

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1yr

Commented

like him

As much as James wanted to help her, he doesn't have the time to try and use actors with unproven success. As much as he had cheats, he has no way to turn a nobody into a star. He had enough trouble using PROVEN actors to make a good movie, much less unreliable ones.

The Editor Gets A Second Chance!!

Fantasy · TMHisOurSavior

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1yr

Replied to AuthorsDread

why heram? is it relevant to the story?

Rubik’s Man: I’m Rich & You’re Dead

Action · AuthorsDread

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1yr

Replied to Ryukurou

I really like that, everything you wrote has their reason and is tied to something. Great stuff. It will be great, if mc can unearth someone to fight beside him and become his best buddy. Who is not by the way in the book "hero has returned". To show some wasted talent the earth has and how far can they go.With the right friend beside can make a monster. A story line connected to the main plot, but outside the academy and its students, will probably give us a new and fresh perspective of the outside world with new dynamic characters. it's just a suggestion. I am liking this so far.

Now onto the important part. Since, the next arc will explain a lot about world building and the characters, I want you guys to give your opinions and suggestions for the story ^^

The Extra's Odyssey

Fantasy · Ryukurou

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1yr

Commented

This novel has a unique taste. keep this up author.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Son of the Ravenmoon V

I Became the Villain

Fantasy · GeneralAverage

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1yr

Commented

father's a chad

ch 13 Plot

Restart:Untalented Man

Fantasy · Spartzan

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Commented

300 m a lot

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Restart:Untalented Man

Fantasy · Spartzan

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1yr

Replied to Rivalty

same here

I found that I was slowly leaning towards becoming a ninja, especially when I thought about what a shame it would be if I didn't. I mean, I had so much future knowledge, not just about the plot, but the characters, techniques, and events that would transpire. This opportunity was unique to me and me alone, which boosted my motivation in wanting to be a ninja. Overall, a ninja seemed to be the path I was heading towards.

The Senju Shinobi

Anime & Comics · Bob_Kizmet_5542

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1yr

Commented

let's begin the counterattack

ch 15 Chapter 15. New Start

The Slytherin Magus

Book&Literature · _Ink_

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1yr

Commented

i like this little obstacle

ch 10 Chapter 10. Nimbus 2001

The Slytherin Magus

Book&Literature · _Ink_

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i like it...i think the slave system is something that MC has to overcome. It creates a good obstacle for MC which makes the story interesting. Will be interesting to see how quickly he can overcome this predicament.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2. Audric Albeline

The Slytherin Magus

Book&Literature · _Ink_

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Replied to KingJoker

I like having mystery and adventure....discovering new island that canon never goes to. I think most fun being a pirate should be discover buried treasure , discovering something new and exciting. Explore the unknown. You pick up crew by torture or saving them. That is good but I think to build up trust they have to go through something unknown, unpredictable and scary......why rush....[img=recommend]

ch 31 Slave Messiah

One Piece: Jacket King

Anime & Comics · KingJoker

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2yr

Commented

this is how it should be good job author

"Ok! Enough! Ophil, I want your brother from the Institute in here tomorrow, to teach this goddamn inquisitive boy. If this keeps on I won't have a hair left on my head. " Tam yelled out, thinking Ophil was still in the next room.