Jasonenrick
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In Marvel with an Op System
not anymore ;)
Moments
At first the husband of hers already died and secound they only married years later ....so it's is okay and also it is in the middle age where things are much more different ... View More
amaturewriter: oh..****.....well then...otherwise its dope....only problem was the fact that the MC went after a mom...dont do NTR..........also build the romance if you add it and dont separate the lovers..otherwise I enjoyed it....it was quite fun.......also a suggestion: maybe Make MC go to fairy tail 400 yrs in the past...and OR go to one piece as an SI say as Doffy or an OC celestial dragon or as crocodile???
Overpowered Fantasy System · C3
SykoNex: Mixture of adrenalin and being in a world where mutants aren't very uncommon.
Morningstar of Sin · C22
Lazy_dude: Wow this type of mc in mcu is so rare hope you can makes more chapters more oftan......you have the quality but need quantities! GOOD LUCK!!!!!!
AGENT SAKURA (MCU FanFic)
Thanks for the chapter! View More
Morningstar of Sin · C22
Ryan_Colman: Oh my god 98 chapters a week and rank 3 as of this moment I am a literal god lol the chapters I'm pushing out per day are just insane whoscompetin
My Multiverse Trip
Extra_Toxic: Ah yes! A fitting name indeed.
Thanks for the chapter and I can't wait for the many chapters coming this week!
Understandable for the no update, can't make lady albedo wait after all. lolThe Immortal Mutant Teen · C64
Supreme Lord Shapeshifter · C70
MC_Darwin: Your Story needs a rewrite and a lot of proof reading.
Don’t get me wrong, It has some definite potential and I like the concept you’re going for, however that can only keep my attention for so long.
The ungodly amount of grammar errors made it extremely difficult to follow, and quite frankly had left me extremely frustrated after every chapter. An example of this would be in Chapter 12.
“After checking her state for a wield, he took the drive sit and flew the jet.”
Yea...I too was blown away at the lack of proof reading, if any. At this point
I would like to point out that other than grammar the story itself has major pacing issues. I feel the author is writing less for plot and more to imagine himself in his MC’s shoes.
In my own words this is a “hey bro ya know what would be cool” kind of story where you are just saying what you would do with no detail on the effort or practical ways of going about doing it.
Overall if this was rewritten I would maybe continue but for now I have to take a step back from this novel.
This is in no way meant to disrespect or hate, but to offer constructive feedback!
— M.C_DarwinReborn in DC (anti-hero)
I mean if you think rational , you have the ability of creation and the Body of a Legendary Super Sajian....then this would be the Perfect Mc .
But of course there has to be Gina who needs 3 chapters rampaging because she is a Legendary Super Sajian ............#NOFRONT but i would give u all my power stones and a 5-star raiting if Gina wouldn't be here !My Opinion!
But i am not reading this anymore ....... View More
Suicidal_Fool: their are many problems with this fanfic one of the most important being the fact that the story honestly doesn't even need Gina if anything she gets in the way of the mc completely harnessing the capabilities having a brain like tony stark I mean he literally made time travel possible and that is not even in the list of top 20 things hes done with his incredibly powerful brain.
Reborn in DC (anti-hero)
Suicidal_Fool: their are many problems with this fanfic one of the most important being the fact that the story honestly doesn't even need Gina if anything she gets in the way of the mc completely harnessing the capabilities having a brain like tony stark I mean he literally made time travel possible and that is not even in the list of top 20 things hes done with his incredibly powerful brain.
Reborn in DC (anti-hero)
Please let her be white ....i love white cats ...they are so CUTEEEEE! View More
Kol Mikaelson - Journey To The Multiverse. · C7
MC could fix that ( maybe with some experimenting ,) but he won't ...i think he doesn't wants any Children now . ..maybe in a thousand years . View More
kelpshake: I hope he doesn’t have children so early on
Kol Mikaelson - Journey To The Multiverse. · C7
Santaroxx: An immortal dude controlling the world in the shadow, classic.
Kol Mikaelson - Journey To The Multiverse. · C7
Santaroxx: An immortal dude controlling the world in the shadow, classic.
Kol Mikaelson - Journey To The Multiverse. · C7
Thank you so much for the chapter , it was amazing ! View More
Kol Mikaelson - Journey To The Multiverse. · C7
Vampiric Beast in Teen Wolf~ · C51
KnightShade420: Sigh! I am honestly at a loss right now. The writing quality and stability of updates are great and the character design is ok as well but what does your story have to do with DXD at all. The story is cluttered with too much. The actual world she is reborn in has dungeons and monsters and people who awaken with powers but the world is not even explored at all. In fact the mc's awakening is not even mentioned other than as a throwaway comment while playing a game that is equivalent to her game status. There are characters that oddly resemble other anime characters with their names and powers and weaponry in-game and out of it. Sigh! And then she is transported to another world which I think is based on some other story about an mc dressed as a teddy. It's too much. Author san God speed too ya but I give up.
DxD World RE
The Immortal Mutant Teen · C64
Marvel: Weary Wolf · C5
He can create his own loyal Krypotonian Army who would do everything for him .
He can basically make himself the God of the Kryptonians.... View More
Kol Mikaelson - Journey To The Multiverse. · C6
Pagmaswordsmanship: Honestly dont like her charecter but she is Hot as **** maybe **** around
DXD: Golden King of Lucifer · C0
Pagmaswordsmanship: Honestly dont like her charecter but she is Hot as **** maybe **** around
DXD: Golden King of Lucifer · C0
But I still love this Novel...... View More
Md_Omr_Alpha: To be honest I think the only reason some people aren't liking your novel is because you didn't include Rias in Sparda's harem and also because you have never showed him using Vector Manipulation. The first one is the main reason. But personally I really like your novel. We, your fans appreciate your hard work. So please do one thing for me, who s one of your many fans, PLEASE INCLUDE RIAS IN SPARDA'S HAREM!!!! I beg you!
DXD: Golden King of Lucifer · C66
