ValentinL - Profile

just finished reading last published chapter up to date : chapter 59.Very good fan fiction, the flow was neither too fast or too slow to my licking, the power level is at the same time the focus of the story and isn't at the same time : the mc doesn't struggle that much while we are not sure exactly how strong he is however it wasn't a problem till now. Little foreshadowing of romance here and there. The writing quality is a tad lacking but that is absolutly more than readable.An enjoyable read overall

Very good fan fiction, honestly I was a bit afraid with the review were saying that he was in Luffy's crew but he would leave, before other saying that finaly he would not. So I decided to elabore mine. Well my review containt some spoil so if you already recided to read it honestly just go read it and don't look anymore it would probably ruin some of your fun for other who need some concret fact before jumping into it, here you go: (for my information it comes until chap 71 as you might guess lasted in my time frame) - For the harem theme, it is specified that it isn't and either it really isn't or it's so slow-paced that those who hate/don't like harem shouldn't have problem with it, but nontheless MC isn't luffy, he likes to flirt with girl particulary Nami whom he had a date with 2-3 times (some may say that it for the charisma stat, I really don't think so, fell free to debate this) but him "earning" affection thought system with Nami AND Robin can make us think that even though harem shouldn't come, polygamy may very well happen (at least that's what the system seems to lead him to do... chap 70~ reflection ) -For his power: Well he is OP and should since Arlong 'arc' be way more powerful than anybody he encounters (except Luffy's family and maybe Ener which it could have been a close call) -Story: he follow Luffy and has a system who give him missionS with rewards in kinda every island, he can level up which give him stat, he has an inventory, masteries management (haki, sword, guns...), failure of some missions mean death, he stick with the Stawhat crew but even though he could do everything alone observe them and let them fight and grow (he still bet the crap out some people but learn them haki at the same time so kinda make it MORE or less even). Character development: he first thought about simply taking Ener fruit with luffy taking care of him then leave for his own adventure, but even after taking Ener's fruit he still stick with them, at chap 70~ he realised that he was afraid of being alone and that he wasn't matured enough yet for his own adventure or really going into a serious relationship after thinking about the marin's death he caused driven by rage. Honestly wasn't excepting that much from a FF, really good job. Didn't give 5 star because of "Stability of Updates" that's all, if you like One piece FF, honestly try it. (sorry if I made some major grammatical error, i'm not used to do review at all and english isn't my strength but this novel kinda moved me.... and obviously there wasn't any more chapter to read)