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Can't the mc use his 30% shareholder authority to stop the discrimination against heteromorph players?

You should delete the poster thing. It is very much unbelievable in a medieval society like this one.

Yes to harem. Yes to training. Yes to including Dr. Doom.

It is in chapter 1 and among the 4 comments of that chapter.

Author-san, I would really appreciate it if you reply to my comment in the first chapter.

1. That gork dude seemed reasonable. Why kill him. This clashes with Vision's established character. 2. And Wanda I can understand but has Pietro killed before? 3. Why would they need such a expensive ship for just 4 people doing a scouting mission. Even capital ships wouldn't be so expensive. Or else to build or buy and maintain a capital ship a civilisation had have how many highly resourceful planet and solar systems under its control? And I think any sovereign player in the galactic and universal scale would have a couple of capital ships. This looks highly unrealistic and illogical. Also I don't think Sif would have that amount of money on hand or in her account. Apart from these, thanks for the chapter.

Don't people's domain depend on their characters?

I don't understand what you mean by Xandar's outskirts? How can a planet have a outskirts? A town or city or village or other such things have outskirts. Not a planet. After reading further I think you mean outskirts of the Nova Empire. If so then shouldn't you specify the planet's name and the place of landing? Been waiting for 10d for this. Are you in any problem or solved it. Wish you luck.

Author-san, can you explain the last paragraph?

1. First you introduced Olly as a middle aged man and then have Jorah call him a boy. 2. Shouldn't those 3 trading ships have 1 or 2 security escort ships?

1. Shouldn't the mc, Jorah mention that coal was this cheap because of war. And once prize normalizes it might cause problems cause it was the main point of the alliance. 2. I don't think you can go from bear island( from its castle to be specific ) to Deepwood Motte, the seat of house Glover in just half a day. Did medieval era have that much faster travel technology?

1. Having only 500 new people is an explosive population growth? Just how small is the population of bear island? The Mormonts are one of the major houses of the north. When it was said that they only contributed more than 100 soilders I had suspicion. But thought the si kept the bulk of his force on the bear island. Realistic, at the minimum bear island should have sent 2,000 soilders. 2. Unless you skipped a timeskip, you changed 3 months into 6 months in the ships returning part.

1. I think you changed the places of walrus tribe and antler tribe with each other and this made it very confusing to understand that part. 2. How can and will a follower of a deity or pantheon test that deity or pantheon? 3. I think the northerners, especially the wildlings just address their gods as gods. Only the followers of other god or gods like ironborn, andals, rhoynors might call those gods as "old gods". Most notably the andals and the newly converted seven worshippers first started using the terms old gods and new gods. They call the gods of first men as old gods and their own gods as new gods.

I don't think the asoiaf world has pen. So instead of saying swords and pens you should say swords and quills.

A "grave" mistake: you had the maester call Jorah grace instead of lord sometimes.

1. The First Men are not the true inhabitants of Westeros. That would be the Children of the Forest, the Giants and other species. And the First Men started to cut the weirwood trees and later waged war against them that greatly reduced their population. 2. The Andals didn't came with bronze weapons. That was the First Men. The Andals came with steel. 3. When did that skinchanger talked about beyond the wall?

1. Don't all of Maege Mormont's children in both the books and the shows have the Mormont name? And thus they came from a legal union cause I don't think the crown will accept the so many legitimization request from the same unimportant house from so far and Ned Stark will repeatedly request or support those requests. Plus even if he does, the socio-political situation won't allow it. 2. Iron Islands having 2,000 longships is a very big au. At most they will have about 200.

Of Odin's pl is 50,000+, then Thor's should be 45,000-50,000 in ragnarok movie. And Hulk's should be 45,000+. Also the difference between various asgardians pl is very big. It shouldn't be so big. If Odin as a peak asgardian is 50,000+ then an average asgardian civilian should have 5,000 pl. Also a average asgardian should be at least 5x or at most 10x powerful than a average human . Meaning if Odin has 50,000+ pl and an average asgardian has 5,000 pl than an average human and peak human should have at maximum 1000 pl and 10000 pl and at minimum 500 pl and 5000 pl. Though I think this rough pl comparison is only usable in terms of physical power not energy power. Author-san, you should use this 10x difference rule in calculating the pl of an average character and peak character of a species unless they have different castes or clans with different biology.

Yasaka and Rossweisse .

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