Hashii: I wrote this story so please leave a review and tell me what you think. Xoxoxoxoxoxoo
I don’t mind if it’s any negative criticism btw.////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////A God in Percy Jackson
Lucas_Victor: if you make him participate in the holy grail war. . steal gilgamesh kkk's treasureFate/Heroes · C53
Saneklinez: Also batgirl cause redheads or poison ivy just redheads all of them. Great story by the wayFate/Heroes · C50
AvidReader962: I don’t really have any questions myself, as I don’t know much about young justice or the fate stay night series, I’m just along for the ride to enjoy the story, so all I want to say was thanks for putting the work in for a really fun story.Fate/Heroes · C50
GedonistOver: I like your story and really hope that you will add more girls to 'harem'. It will be more interesting if they have different personalities, it could be amazing to read about interactions of Diana and Casie if they both fall in live with MC. Batgirl and Aquagirl are must have in harem too, Zatanna is also okay. About suggestions, you have a habit to mention something and forget about this in the later chapters. For example my question - did Grey slept with that woman from a party? Who is she? Will we see her later? Too many characters is a bad thing if you don't mention them in the future. Also, servants mostly have different personalities and a lot of them are villains and just bad guys, but they all agree, for example to teach that trash Super Boy. It's impossible. They had rather suggest to kill or forget about him than give any advice. I really hope you will fix these shortcomingsFate/Heroes · C50
Endless Plunder in High School DxD
asinbsfgh: Good idea when he becomes strong enough in the story I would think about it.High school dxd legendary super saiyan · C7
Dream to immortality · C33
Endless Adventure · C48
Raiseraph: Please add the tail.Legendary Super Saiyai has no set limit on multiplier and the base power is abnormal.If we go by the Broly Movie,his base power is around super saiyan 3.Don't degrade the Mc too much cause that will trigger the saiyan fans.
Fyi:Super saiyan 1 could blow up the world.Legendary maybe could destroy the solar system or Universe.High school dxd legendary super saiyan · C7
mihaita98: 1. Give him space-time magic so he can travel later in other worlds and use the gravity from his space affinity
2. Eternal youth
3. Hiper regeneration (so he doesn't need any drugs or magic to heal. Like Pikolo's where only be completely destroying his body, will he truly die.
4. Make him be born in a family with martial arts.
If you really want a sacred gear, make him an Ozaru one. With it, he can transform into an Ozaru without the need of a full moon.High school dxd legendary super saiyan · C7
High school dxd legendary super saiyan · C7
esa123: cant believe he did that he was just getting started tooA God in Percy Jackson · C7
esa123: if you are super lazy then dont put a story out there period. We get too much disappointment cuz of authors like thatA God in Percy Jackson · C7
A God in Percy Jackson · C7
fearlessj2008: first. you know i didn't think about it when i read about her having a vision of the kids and stuff but now that i do. she probably had a hard time figuring who the baby daddy was unless they looked exactly like father or she only had one man at a time. that is why leyla should just be with her brother plus it would probably power them up lol.One Piece System In One Piece · C135
Falenor: In my opinion I prefer that he stay with a relationship with Sona, since Rias does not seem very interesting to me and it is very silly the only game that can bring him in the future only his tits would be, instead Sona with his intelligence can help him give advice the future even in other worlds to develop betterHigh school dxd legendary super saiyan · C6
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