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Reading Status: C6
It’s literally a down-graded version of Nanomancer Reborn - I’ve become a Snowgirl?

I stopped at chap. 6 because it was too much for me.

I mean, you could at least try to make your own plot a little.. but it is exactly the same thing but more rushed and with some little change here and there.

It doesn’t even feel realistic because it is so much rushed ..

Well, I understand the fact that you wanted to re-create a version of Nanomancer of your own, but atleast quote the Novel, and put a little more efforts in to it ..

No offence ! Cya. View More
Rebirth of The Elemental Goddess
1 week ago
Man you are fking delusional.

There are grammatical / lexical errors every chapters.

You ‘start’ the plot then cut his flow with a fking flashback for many chapters already.

The side characters are cringe as ****, the 2 males are fking beta-males, the girls are mentally retarded, I mean one of them keep hugging a girl she just met for not even 1 day, maybe in our world it would be possible, but in a world where there is death and people killing each other for some EXP or loot, that is not fking realistic to trust and get close to a girl you don’t even know about.

The MC is supposed to be a male, but he is acting like some pu*sy ****. He is stupid, naive, and weak mentally.

And finally, you switch your novel picture every 2 hours, I don’t know if you are masturbating on them or what, but this is cringe. It’s like you are having wet dream about your own MC, this is so weird. And one of the picture you put was a woman with black hair, how the fu*k does she have black hair now ??

Your novel is definitely over-rated, this is better than most novel, but really not deserving to be in the top 3, or even top 10.

Now with your childish act of threatening your own readers, well just go fu*k yourself and your ‘novel’. View More
Nero, My Existence is Perfect · C0
1 week ago
It’s fucking fine man, the pace is all good !!

I was close to drop this novel because there was too much cringe things, and I didn’t really like Shiro personnality. But he is slowly becoming something I do really like :)

Please, I know it’s your story and all, but I just hope you will not focus too much on the harem side of the story but more on the action/adventure side ..

Anyway, it’s a really good novel, even if the early chapters were a bit annoying ..

Thank for your hard work ! :) View More
The Rise of the Strongest Vampire Prince of Darkness ( WB-JPN ) · C29
1 week ago
Wtf happened to the grammar ?? View More
The sage(Naruto Fan-Fic)(Long live the Hokage) · C14
1 week ago
Please try to not switch the point of view randomly .. sometimes it’s « I » ( first person ) then « He » or « the young magician » ( third person ), it’s very confusing ..
oh also it’s good to not always say « he » to describe the character, but i feel like you are over-doing it a bit ( « the young magician » multiple times is a bit forced and annoying ^^ )

Anyway I appreciate the effort you are making with your grammar, and your story is pretty nice so far, so don’t drop :) View More
Between World's · C5
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C1
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4 weeks ago
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exp~? · C1
4 weeks ago
Joyeux anniversaire ^^ View More
《Infinite Stamina》 · C13
1 month ago
Ye it would be nice to see a bit of Ancient Wars..

I hope Hades doesn’t stay so « warm » to mortals.
I mean he is the god of death, or things related to it, and seeing him giving food and healing everyone is kinda weird..

I get it that he needs a strong base of worshippers, but maybe there are other ways to get a lot of them that would be better than giving free stuff around ..

I know you are only rewriting what the previous author did so I dont blame you or anything like that, but it is just to let you re think about Hades Domain and what impact it should have on his personality / view of the mortals and how they view him !

I will be waiting for your handwritten chapters, see you :) View More
A God in Percy Jackson Redux · C3
1 month ago
Aha you are one lazy motherfuc*er xD

I like you man, have a nice life :) View More
A God in Percy Jackson · C8
1 month ago
Ahaha I knew it, when I read the previous chapters I was like « hum wait he can already destroy everything, what the author is gonna write ? »

I hoped for a big surprise but ye, I feel you man, it’s nearly impossible to write anything action related after these chapters xD

Well I hope you will release a new novel with a slower strength gain than this one. It was well written anyway so thank you :)

See you ! View More
DC: God of Evolution (Dropped) · C0
1 month ago

JakeElliott: I know. He'll meet the group much earlier don't worry

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C1
1 month ago
Please the whole point of a fanfiction is to actually INTERACT with the fanfiction’s character and world.

If you just wanna create OCs and kill zombies, just create another Apocalyptic World, but dont mislead us into thinking it is The Walking Dead..

You’re writing is pretty good, and the status chap thing is a great idea too, so I hope your Mc will now interact a bit more with the fantastic world of Walking Dead !

I am not saying your Mc should join Rick group etc.. but at least they should meet and interact with each other, that is all I wanna say.

You are a good writer and even with my rant, I appreciate your Fanfic :) Cya ! View More
The Walking Dead's Gamer · C1
1 month ago

Suzuha_Yuu: put some space between character talking and information and add the name of who is talking

The Death Mage who doesn´t want a fourth time: Rise of the Demon Knight · C1
1 month ago
I tried to do what a grammar nazi would do.

But I don’t think you need it, it just seems you didn’t re-read what you wrote, so there are a lot of weird errors.

Anyway, pretty good story so far.. View More
The Death Mage who doesn´t want a fourth time: Rise of the Demon Knight · C1
1 month ago
Dear Author,

I hope you are doing well,
I appreciate the fact that you cameback after 1 month of missing,
I would just appreciate if you could tell us what is happening ? ( not on a personnal level, just if you are going to upload soon or not ? )
You’re story so far was amazing, you seem like a cool guy IRL, and I hope you will continue.
But if you really have to quit, because you dont feel motivated or for personnal reason, just tell us.
Some will understand some will not, and get mad, but whatever.
Dont force yourself to write, live your life, and cya :) View More
A New Wolf in Twilight · C30
2 months ago

Democratis: I personally like the loner MC, and your writing is awesome, so thanks for the chapter!!! Looking forward to reading more!!

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C34
2 months ago
Well, the MC basically try to stay Low-key.. so maybe that’s why he doesn’t try to interact very much with other characters, at least not when he is still not strong enough.
He doesn’t want to attract attention on him, if he begin an amical relationship with an important character, he will enter in the light, and may attract unwanted attention / interest.
( Sorry if it’s not clear, I am not very good at english :c ) View More

LIX: I feel like there needs to be slightly more interaction between characters and MC. It feels like the whole world revolves solely around the MC right now.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C34
2 months ago

LIX: I feel like there needs to be slightly more interaction between characters and MC. It feels like the whole world revolves solely around the MC right now.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C34
2 months ago
Maybe try to show what does the MC feels ? He spend all his time without anyone to talk to, he should feel lonely, or if he doesn’t feel lonely, explain why ?

Anyway, I really like your story, it’s really nice :) View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C34
2 months ago
I am the first ~~ ... after the last. View More
A New Wolf in Twilight · C30
2 months ago

CalmBerserker: Even after so long, I'm still first~

A New Wolf in Twilight · C29
2 months ago

MagMods: I Love You DrugDealer~Sama

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago
Man just look at the comment on your 29th chapter, you’ll see all the REAL readers who actually enjoy your story and wants you to comeback !
( i have been waiting for 1 month for you :c ) View More
A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago

starconqueror: Continue

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago

schristian302: Keep going it’s a good novel and it was just getting really good

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago

starconqueror: Is it illegal to vote twice
Cause i would really like to
read your story

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago

Jetstorm: Continue. I thought you'd OD'd. I mean the last time you posted, you said that you were hung over after getting back from a party. Also, don't deny it, we know you do drugs.
Now use the power of those drugs to boost yourself and write us a mass release as an apology.

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago

FBI_B1TCH: Bro wdym, this was a new story and already at the top of the rankings, plenty of people want it to continue

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago

voidless: Please continue.

A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
2 months ago
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