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The cursed shall bring deaths, and from death will it arise — Excerpt from Adivnar dominion ‘Book of Presage’ Bai Yunhe was your ordinary young boy with no extraordinary gifts or lineage. Living in a world where heroic stories and legendary exploits were abundant, how far could an ordinary boy like him managed to reach with hard works alone? In spite of that, even the dream that he had always harbored was nothing out of ordinary; no notions about reaching the apex of cultivation, or becoming a slayer of legendary demons and beasts. Surviving in such a dangerous ridden world, being self aware of your own capabilities might be a kind of strength of its own. He was content and not ashamed of his ordinary life. That is until he was forced to abandon everything that he knew up to now... ….
Dark Dragon King · C1
looFehT: yes but from what I have read there is no proper evidence so basically this assumption of zhengli means more to him than his trust as a friend with yuanhe or am I wrong somewhereThe Last Crowned Immortal · C1
looFehT: nice novel btw., but how is it going to proceed? It would be nice to have a very rational (first chapters already show that), ruthless, smart and dedicated mc (e.g. like in Birth of the demonic sword) cuz thats something not too mainstream even though people enjoy it (e.g. WMW). Would be great if you improved on those stories, basically by adding more twists than in WMW and speeding up the story, though I am noone to tell you how you should write your story, I am just saying what I would love to read. Good luck and have fun writingThe Last Crowned Immortal · C1
looFehT: why zhengli be so irrational duhThe Last Crowned Immortal · C1
Grimm_Dragonslayer: Followed your advice. Let me know if you think it helosOutcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
FruitPeeler: I'm honestly not good at giving review at all but here goes:
The premise of the story itself is interesting and not many novel had a beast cultivator as an MC so it definitely a reason in itself for people to have to give it a read.
I've only read a little chapter so i can't say much about story and character but world background is good.
the only thing that i don't quite like was the format of the text itself which had nothing to do with the story.
Please put spacing between paragraphs. reading huge block of text might not be attractive for some people.
lastly, please don't stop writing. i'm sure many will grow to like your novelOutcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
Grimm_Dragonslayer: Thanks let me know what you think about the story flow. I know I got some punctuation and grammar errors I gotta fixThe Last Crowned Immortal
Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
Grimm_Dragonslayer: So far pretty good. It's not overly cliche and the writing flows smoothly. Please keep it up I enjoy MCs that aren't given cheats. Hard work and Determination MCs are the strongest!The Last Crowned Immortal
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