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  • The Last Crowned Immortal

    The Last Crowned Immortal

    Fantasy Action Adventure Romance Fantasy Weak to Strong

    The cursed shall bring deaths, and from death will it arise — Excerpt from Adivnar dominion ‘Book of Presage’ Bai Yunhe was your ordinary young boy with no extraordinary gifts or lineage. Living in a world where heroic stories and legendary exploits were abundant, how far could an ordinary boy like him managed to reach with hard works alone? In spite of that, even the dream that he had always harbored was nothing out of ordinary; no notions about reaching the apex of cultivation, or becoming a slayer of legendary demons and beasts. Surviving in such a dangerous ridden world, being self aware of your own capabilities might be a kind of strength of its own. He was content and not ashamed of his ordinary life. That is until he was forced to abandon everything that he knew up to now... ….

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this is really great... definitely would love to read more View More
Dark Dragon King · C1
1 month ago
as the matter with Zhengli:
there are actually a few survivors from the said Calamity that testified about it. Though they never give the full story to Yunhe.

i can't further elaborate on the reason unless spoiler, but i would like to also explain that in the MC's world; some people regards honor and duty more so than anything. View More

looFehT: yes but from what I have read there is no proper evidence so basically this assumption of zhengli means more to him than his trust as a friend with yuanhe or am I wrong somewhere

The Last Crowned Immortal · C1
1 month ago
thanks... it is actually my first ever attempt at writing a story so i had planned on starting simple for the early part of it, while then gradually expanding the world and plot as i progress and accumulate more exp.

I also like rational ruthless smart MC, so i had those traits in my mind when i made my MC as well.

not at all. I am more than happy to hear your thought about it. I actually already had the story at my mind but of course i will still make some changes as i go along. View More

looFehT: nice novel btw., but how is it going to proceed? It would be nice to have a very rational (first chapters already show that), ruthless, smart and dedicated mc (e.g. like in Birth of the demonic sword) cuz thats something not too mainstream even though people enjoy it (e.g. WMW). Would be great if you improved on those stories, basically by adding more twists than in WMW and speeding up the story, though I am noone to tell you how you should write your story, I am just saying what I would love to read. Good luck and have fun writing

The Last Crowned Immortal · C1
1 month ago
Thank you for being the first to give a comment on my story.

There's another reason that will be explained later on but for now the answer would be; because he thinks Bai Yunhe's father as a personal guard had abandoned his vow to protect his grandfather the former patriarch and left the later to die. View More

looFehT: why zhengli be so irrational duh

The Last Crowned Immortal · C1
1 month ago

Grimm_Dragonslayer: Followed your advice. Let me know if you think it helos

Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
1 month ago
definitely looks better and more pleasing to the eyes for me personally.
thank you View More

FruitPeeler: I'm honestly not good at giving review at all but here goes:

The premise of the story itself is interesting and not many novel had a beast cultivator as an MC so it definitely a reason in itself for people to have to give it a read.

I've only read a little chapter so i can't say much about story and character but world background is good.

the only thing that i don't quite like was the format of the text itself which had nothing to do with the story.
Please put spacing between paragraphs. reading huge block of text might not be attractive for some people.

lastly, please don't stop writing. i'm sure many will grow to like your novel

Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
1 month ago
i'm actually not a native speaker, so... i don't think i could give you any suggestions on those things.
but i'll try to when i find any that disturb the story View More

Grimm_Dragonslayer: Thanks let me know what you think about the story flow. I know I got some punctuation and grammar errors I gotta fix

The Last Crowned Immortal
1 month ago
Reading Status: C2
I'm honestly not good at giving review at all but here goes:

The premise of the story itself is interesting and not many novel had a beast cultivator as an MC so it definitely a reason in itself for people to have to give it a read.

I've only read a little chapter so i can't say much about story and character but world background is good.

the only thing that i don't quite like was the format of the text itself which had nothing to do with the story.
Please put spacing between paragraphs. reading huge block of text might not be attractive for some people.

lastly, please don't stop writing. i'm sure many will grow to like your novel View More
Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
1 month ago
Thanks for the review.
I noticed that you're also writing your own original story, will def check them out View More

Grimm_Dragonslayer: So far pretty good. It's not overly cliche and the writing flows smoothly. Please keep it up I enjoy MCs that aren't given cheats. Hard work and Determination MCs are the strongest!

The Last Crowned Immortal
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