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I'm liking where this is going. You've managed to so far do the hardest thing superhero fan fiction writers have trouble with; Making the mc not be a edgelord. Typically I tend to be against grey leaning superheroes, but Invincible's source material isn't like other superhero comics. So having Mark be a bit colder will not be too alien from the source material. I still would like to see him prioritize saving a life over taking one, but I can understand why he would in this. I partially wished you had saved the guardians, but I'm okay with their deaths too. Please keep up the good work.

I kind of wish you didn't go down this route. I will stick around for a few more chapters but a killer Flash is one thing, but a "I am fear" one is too edgelord for me.

How to fight eh? I can dig it, so long as you don't pull the same shenanigans as that whole world does. Im enjoying the novel so far.

Uh.... did I miss where professor X could use telekinesis?

I hope you have the Black Cat make an appearance. Train is one of my all time favorite manga characters.

To that extent how could Ron understand that, that particular set of hisses Harry made in his sleep was open and not say, "Please don't eat me." It was a plot issue in the actual series so its not on you, it just set a standard that if a human is exposed to enough parceltongue they will be able to speak a magical language through imitation.

I like it, but I don't know how you'll explain Ron learning it from a sleeping Harry, as he did in canon. I mean Harry should instinctively remember the word "open".

So is he 17? I have spent the past 3 or 4 chapters wondering about his age, I almost assumed he was 13 or 14 with the way everyone babies him.