Webnovel Author: Khaled_Sellami - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I like the start already

write into a paper all the wishes he wants and make a wish that everything written comes true , it's technically one wish so it's doable

and tbh I'm here for the harem XD hinata and samui and ino XD did you see those ahm ahm they got

it's going good so far , I read a similar one before and I think it was dropped I forgot it's name , hopefully this one will continue

tobirama hated uchiha clan , monkey and cave rat ( if you don't get it means you aren't naruto fan ) destroyed senju clan and lots of other geniuses, konoha had lots of kages at the start and it was truly the strongest but the moment hiruzan took charge they started disappearing , clans dying , geniuses getting framed or killed the rat kills anybody that could threaten him in getting hokage seat for himself then he says everything he does for konoha the uchiha case they had one of the most overpowered eyes but the idiots never thought of using illusion on the kids to awaken them , they never train unless to shoot the I'm gonna miss my target fire ball jutsu while ignoring everything else , they were suppressed and framed but instead of winning the public approval they became more autistic and arrogant , and the little shit itachi he had so many options , heck he could take his family and leave konoha or kill the root of all evil danzo but no he in all his wisdom decided that killing all uchiha is the best choice for konoha while keeping his annoying lil brat alive to annoy us with his brooding

its really interesting to read but he doesn't sound that intelligent to me he can remember everything that happen/ed but still doesn't take advantage of it he could've spent his time in the library reading about different stuff to get smarter but that didn't happen . he should've been more mature bcz of his memory but he seemed stupid tbh especially after taking the abuse silently ( he could've told the police about them ) and idk about your next chapters but if he's half smart as he's been portrayed he'll go back to diagon ally to buy more and ask about his money ( as to why they had his key while he didn't even know about it ) while generally its an interesting novel and a promising one , I really hope you'll continue writing it **: don't get mad over what I said its just my opinion and I don't mean to ridicule you bcz I know that writing novels is a truly hard thing to do

its really different from the previous one and it looks interesting and please don't let her abandon him if I understood correctly she probably made James sign everything he has to her and her child so let her vanish and raise him till Hogwarts time Nevil is always a good backup for the plot XD