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Theo_Syafutra

2yr

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sigh , i don't care about aang but it's definitely unnecessary to be best friend to him all of sudden , and don't forget the MC in your story is always zan , not aang not sokka and definitely not zuko . Fanfic is to re-make the orignal to make your story unique not follow the original ,so yeah dissapointed

ch 16 Team Girl Power + Zan 7

A Blazing Fist (Gamer Insert - Starting in Avatar The Last Airbender)

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Theo_Syafutra

2yr

Commented

Hu liena , all villain heroines

ch 0 -1 Lucifer's Harem

In Dauluo Dalu as Lucifer dropped

Anime & Comics · Amon_rroe

Theo_Syafutra

3yr

Commented

you did a good job author ,not great . characters development always welcome but you should do more conversation than this ,it's getting boring just with thought and explanation . the only decent conversation is between mc and the monkey . anyway your fanfic isn't that bad .

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[Re written] Read Douluo Dalu: The Sovereign of Technology

Anime & Comics · Aeolius

Theo_Syafutra

3yr

Commented

ch 0 8 Chapter 8 : One-Tails energy

Walk around Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

Anime & Comics · Madara_Uchiha_68

Theo_Syafutra

3yr

Commented

well i dunno which i want to vote , Naruto Universe already have many good chara , some OC enemies might be nice but don't make them outshine the cannon one i think ? so male/female OC is good i think .

ch 23 The Tiger or the Goat?

Naruto: Reborn With Useless Skills?

Anime & Comics · LuminouShadow

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