Webnovel Author: 0_Jordinio_0 - Fanfic Collection

In general, I'm gonna say this is a bad story and don't recommend it. The stability of updates are alright....but everything else is just bad. The writing itself is stunted and monotone with very little description. There's very little gone into of the world itself, literally zero world building and just expects everyone to know everything because it's an established series already. Character design is non existent, again horribly lacking in description of characters. There is zero story development, because despite the fact the main character apparently only knew of up to the fight with the prince and co of the series, he somehow manages to do the exact same crap as Leon All this story does, is follow the same path as Leon, but much more bland. For all the main characters thoughts on Leon having an inferiority complex and wanting girls, he's a massive herbivore that just follows along the same path as Leon without any of his charm. On top of that, he not only has all of Leon's cheats, but an overpowered gamer system on top of that and he's still too afraid to really go against anyone and put them down for their shit like the noble girl looking down on Olivia and shit and full on humiliating her, then attacking him. Same with Jilk, he let that guy get away with trying to kill him. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability Of Updates - 4/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 1/5 Honestly, I'd give Story Development, Character Design and World Background a zero to match the zero in the story if I could, but it doesn't go any lower than one. Either way, total score - 1.8/5. Such a shame, I was excited at first when I saw a decently long story for Mobuseka, I should have known better.