Webnovel Author: Allen_Clay012 - Novel&Fanfic Collection

The story has a good start, its not boring. It had a good pace and the characters were relatable. I can tell they had distinct personalities as well... For the writing, the grammar was okay. I havent seen any mistakes so far. The dialogues and prose is easy to read and understand. I bet the MC theres a lot of surprise we see on the way. However, I got a feeling that a potential love story is starting already. I am going to follow this story for more. Keep on writing, you started the story good. It captivated me with the world building as well. I am interested to know how witches relate to the story. Thank you for introducing me this work. Do your best!

There’s a lot of good stories recently, I say this book is one of them. I can see the potential, and this book would soon become popular. This work is also easy to read and understand. The main character has his own persona which positively drives the story. I recommend this book, this is well written. Sincerely, Allen_Clay012

Hello, this is the author. Let's ignore the ratings and move on to what I have to say. To those who read as far as the locked chapters, I would like to thank you guys! Your interest and support inspired me to continue writing this story. That's all that I wanted to say, to the readers of this story. Don't worry, I'll continue writing until I finish this story. I will do my best not to drop this story. Thank you for reading and good day!

Thank you, very much for your support! Don't worry, I will make sure to deliver the best content I could.

Interesting and complex story. For now, the MC doesn't stand out that much but the author shouldn't need to worry. A underwhelming MC can be fixed with character growth in the later chapters. Overall I don't find the story confusing but rather an ingenuine attempt of creativity and originality. Here is how the story goes so far: MC had issues with family and school. He suddenly met a god whom he mocked and forced the MC to transmigrate to different bodies of characters from different stories. I will add this story to my library. This story has potential.

The chapters are long enough and are written well. There's no confusion with the transition or the pacing. It goes well with the narrative. The author has made a good story. I will keep this story in my library to see how this story go. I am excited to see the next chapters. Thank you for introducing this wonderful work. Wish you best in your writing!

Reading at chapter 10, the story is intriguing as you follow Marlene's journey in a cyberpunk world. Here are what I have observed, the chapters seemed short . Despite being short it is descriptive enough to describe the scenes. Its not a bad thing for me but other readers may find it lacking. The story is very engaging, it has a good flow and you can clearly picture out the scenes precisely. There was no dragging chapters, just pure action. I enjoyed this story very much. I am giving this story 5/5 rating because this story depicts Cyberpunk action and the author faithfully described the setting and the characters very well. Thank you for inviting me to review your novel. I wish you the best!

The formatting is good which enables readers to differentiate from each scenes. The style is effective but I believe the separation of the scenes could be done with one or three spaces. Other than that I have no issues with the writing style. I find the story easy to read and understand. It is interesting to see the future events as the plot unfolds. I will not try to spoil readers, all I can say that the story has a good charm into it. I am rating the story 5/5 for its good storytelling. The issue I pointed out earlier was nothing serious. for a traditional reader they may find it different to the format they used to read. Grammar wise thus story has no problems with it. Thank you for introducing me your work. I appreciate it.

I'm going to give this story a 5/5 rating. No bias toward the work of my countryman but I find the narrative, grammar, and concept as perfect. The story unfolds about a man who witnessed a strange phenomenon that unlocks his latent potential. Due to this, he was dragged into a world of magic. The story has good pacing and as well as references to Harry Potter style magic. This book is a good read and I recommend it to everyone! Thank you author for introducing your work to me!

Thank you for your feedback. I am still editing most of the chapters. Don't worry I will have those issues you mentioned fixed. I appreciate your words, thank you!