Webnovel Author: Kiikuro_Shichigo - Novel&Fanfic Collection

The racism stuff was just a joke, dud...

So, I saw you request a review in the Forums. Since I'm bored, I'm here to write a review on a novel with a single chapter of 2k words. Anyway, I'm half-asleep when I read CH.1, so please bear with me. Bout' the writing quality - top tier! Yeah, I haven't seen someone write good Engrishu on this site for a while. There's no criticism for the wording, but... except Edward... I wasn't given a name. So I was confused reading through his and hers without signs who was who. But still, kinda' like a prologue maybe, so there aren't any names yet, or at least that's what I observed after reading it a single time. Oof, minus points! I was confused! That's a sign of bad writing. JK! Story... I didn't understand shit! Is the author Mexican? Spanish? There were some words I didn't understand. I think they are there as intended, but maybe they're from another language or something... Well, I think the story was good, if I was able to understand it better. As I said, I was half asleep. Hmm... There's nothing to criticize really... There are many to be praised. But this is still a single chptr'd novel, I'll update if it gets updated a little bit more too. One question tho: Is this book for some kind of meme or something? A thug gorilla person? Eren's shirt? You mean Eren from AOT? Cap positioned sideways - and the beastman who wore it was apparently as a gorilla? Is this racism from the author? No, of course, it's not. I was just skeptical. Now, there's my review. Wouldn't add anything. Short but I think I explained my view clearly. Will update later, if it gets 1k chapters or something. Yeah. Humble my ass. Great book: 9/11 - will read again,

Is this legit? This book is crap, you know???

Is that so? I always make sure to write a word correctly to be sure it's not spelled wrong. My grammar sometimes has its faults; I'll never deny it, but I think it's still okay as long as it's readable, after all, I do not make these stories professionally. I'm still learning and my writing sure has many wrongs and faults. I guess I just never had anyone tell me before how bad it really was. You said you like these kind of stories, so I'm sure you do not have any problems with it, except of course, the way I write and such. If I have time, I'll make sure to learn. I only experienced English with games and online interactions, so I don't really think I have the skills to write professionally, which I guess you expect to see from a writer here in this site. Nonetheless, I'm happy to see this criticism. I'm happy to learn from it. I always wanted to know what readers actually think of my writing skills(not just the stories), so I'm actually trilled. I'll make sure to improve. I just wanted to defend myself and say that the reason to this problem is actually my lack of experience. As of now, I only write these stories as a hobby. I like to share it to the others and myself as well. I'm sure I'm also constantly improving, so soon, I want to be more confident with the way I write.