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I think you mixed up Mark and Harrison in this chapter. Harrison was the one that was working as a math teacher, while Mark was doing voice acting and had worked on a project with Ian earlier in the story. But nice reactions regardless.

Wow, what a twist with Invincible death and resurrection. Though it does leave a few plot points open, such as Jean and Phoenix. Also have to wonder with the unveiling of Ironman and the Sentinels and the retreat of Overwatch if it wouldn't have started an arms race between the various countries. Fury and Shield must be having a fit with things sliding into chaos like this. I like the move to Mars and the inviting of Wakanda to inhabit their own continent. Wonder how Wakanda will change/grow now that they no longer have to hide as much from the rest of the world. I would also suggest that maybe an alliance or recruitment of the Inhumans through Quake might be possible as potential settlers of one of the other continents of Mars. Have to wonder how the events of Thor might go in this new world. Don't think that people will be as sanguine about a giant robot showing up and destroying a town as they were in canon. More soon please.

Excellent chapter. I like how Felicia has started to build her own relationship with Norman and Harry. I do think Christmas would be an excellent time for MJ to visit for Harry. Maybe show some tension with MJ and Felicia. Oh nice job with the disabling cell phones during his outing. When thinking about it I could totally understand his hesitancy of exposing MJ to the media/social issues of her acting as mother to Harry. The calls of gold digger and worse would be horrible. Wonder if Gwen will be his date for the awards dinner/ceremony and how that will play in the media. So the attackers, I am thinking it will be Cross or maybe something set up by Stane to knock out the other major shareholder for Stark while he takes care of Tony himself. Glad Norman is letting Tony handle his own issues, let Ironman grow to be a hero. Especially since Norman has derailed Ironman 3 by taking out Killian early. For that matter he could take out Vanko easily at this point as well, though I doubt he will since it doesn't profit him any and letting it play out could set him up for a payday when Hammer crumbles. Can't wait to see who Norman recruits for his organization. Though if I may make the suggestion to not focus only on the trigger pullers. He will also need some dedicated techs and coordinators to manage the operations. I would love to suggest Skye/Daisy from Agents of Shield but can't remember how old she would be at this point in time (it would also continue his pattern of surrounding himself with beautiful and capable women). Also since mutants are in this world maybe Sage or Norman could always go cliche and have/help Forge build an AI, though given some of the things that happened with Forge's creations in comics I don't know if I would trust him with that task. More soon please.

You might want to edit that last bit with Norman, it seemed to me that he had bugged the meeting at Shield as Felicia's first job. I find that very dangerous unlike what Norman was thinking. So Carol, presumably Danvers, is on Earth working with Shield. Do that mean that Maria Hill will be the infiltrator, I can't think of any other elite agents that might get high enough in the company to get near Norman. Maybe Melinda May from Agents of Shield? So the Nobel Prize for Medicine, even if they don't win it is a big deal. Wonder who Norman's +1 will be to the awards dinner? More soon please.

So the little kitty finally let her curiosity get the better of her. It will be interesting to see what Norman comes up with for her. I could see hiring her for security testing, i.e. having her break into various facilities to test their defenses. For that matter it might be interesting to set Walter up as president/CEO of a subsidiary security company. Interested in finding out how Felicia knows MJ and Gwen. Are we going to see Bucky get his new arm or is that going to happen in the background? As far as women, how about Skye/Daisy Johnson from Agents of Shield? More soon please.

Nice update. I liked the sit down with the Stacy's though I do think that Norman came off as treating Gwen a little like a child. I agree she was probably burning her self out and needs some time off but the way he did it was a bit overbearing, maybe make it up to her by spending some of that time off with her. Also is she taking summer classes (probably given how much of an overachiever she is), but even then she should have more time for the job. By the way is she a paid intern or unpaid? Thanks for the mention of the game division and the Cube, I agree they can come up with a better name. I have to wonder what types of games are under development, the standard adventure or something a bit more cerebral. Maybe some things that he knows will spark interest. We see some more tests with limbs being regenerated, but what about internal organs such as Stark's case.

Nice chapter. I like the slice of life interactions with the girls, though you could flesh a few details a bit more. Things such as what is MJ's major in school, acting, fashion, business? Also though hinted at we never confirm MJ's best friend/?roomate? who I think might be Gwen. Also surprised that with the family outing we haven't had a scandal yet with Norman 'dating' MJ in the press. Though it could just be they are more focused on more flamboyant personalities like Tony. Though eventually it might be interesting for Norman to take one of the girls to a social event like a movie premier or fashion/art show. If MJ is going into acting or fashion it could be very good for her career to attend such an event and make some contacts. I like the route you are going with power development, slow and steady wins the race not rushing to become a sorcerer and steal vibranium. I am a little surprised Osborn hasn't tried to look up the Parkers at all, afterall wasn't Peter's parent involved in SS research, maybe prevent their death. I do have to wonder if Osborn has planned to use Conner's formula on Bucky to heal his arm. For that matter depending on how well the formula performs on internal organ's maybe Stark would take a look at it to heal himself. Especially given the palladium poisoning at this point in time. Also hope to see some of the products Osborn entertainment comes out with regarding games that you hinted at. Wonder how an Ironman video game would do or maybe something featuring Captain America. More soon please.