Brilliant start to the book. The grammar is good, the plot is a popular trope (revenge) but it's well written. The update is good so far though it's a new novel. The characters so far are interesting especially the main protagonist. Brilliant book.
Nice start. It reminds me of the tomb raiders with a twist. So good. Keep up the good work. Love it. Love it.Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.
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ch 0 1 An Unbound Soul
The God of Mortals
Fantasy · Blazing_Sun