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Lexi_Roberson

Lexi_Roberson

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Just a young amateur writer

2019-05-24 Joined United States

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I can make out a list of questions that could help you if you want? Just let me know if you want me to.

There once was a girl named Leah. She had long red hair and emerald green eyes. She lived in the outskirts of London with her mom, dad, and older brother. It was nearing her 16th birthday. she was eager to see all her friends and to talk with them. She arranged for her friends to come to her house at 12:00 pm. She got up early in the morning of her birthday. She got her birthday dress ready the night before. She put it on, it was blue and came below her knees. She went down stairs to see the presents, balloons and streamers filling the room. Then her friends started to arrive. They all sat down around the living room and talked for hours. Then her friends gave her presents one by one. She got little things like shirts, jeans, and a bracelet her friend Cam made, but there was one thing that when she saw it she was amazed. It was a gold locket that her parents gave her with a family photo from the beach in it. she gave her parents a big hug and then put it on, she said she would never take it off.

The Stolen Locket

The Stolen Locket

Teen · kayleeee_reneeee

Lexi_Roberson
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I have a question. Is this a short book, or are you going to be adding more to the first chapter? I am just curious. I think it was really good so far. Maybe check on the grammar. I always say use Grammarly, if you can't just make sure some things are capitalized. I seen a few sentences where "She" wasn't capitalized, it looked like this "she" instead of "She". Overall really good on this chapter so far. :)

There once was a girl named Leah. She had long red hair and emerald green eyes. She lived in the outskirts of London with her mom, dad, and older brother. It was nearing her 16th birthday. she was eager to see all her friends and to talk with them. She arranged for her friends to come to her house at 12:00 pm. She got up early in the morning of her birthday. She got her birthday dress ready the night before. She put it on, it was blue and came below her knees. She went down stairs to see the presents, balloons and streamers filling the room. Then her friends started to arrive. They all sat down around the living room and talked for hours. Then her friends gave her presents one by one. She got little things like shirts, jeans, and a bracelet her friend Cam made, but there was one thing that when she saw it she was amazed. It was a gold locket that her parents gave her with a family photo from the beach in it. she gave her parents a big hug and then put it on, she said she would never take it off.

The Stolen Locket

The Stolen Locket

Teen · kayleeee_reneeee

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I will check it out as soon as I can!!!
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Urban · d'elfe

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Yes I am not for sure though. My sister let me borrow her paper copy, but Im sure you can find it on Amazon. Most books are on there anyways lol!!

Tristan sighed then; she looked so defeated. So weary. Such a shame to diminish her good disposition when she was a delight. Like an angel roaming the earth, pushed to protect herself and hide her inner light.

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Urban · d'elfe

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yay!!! let me know when it's comes out!!! I know right!!!
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Lol sorry just now replying to this. My mind is so hectic right now. Ok thank you!!! I will hold onto my question further until I see the answer. Lol you mean punctuation??? Sorry grammar girl over here!! Ok, I will be looking into it. I do have a question, when you update a chapter of your story, does it send out an announcement to everyone???
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Urban · d'elfe

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Lol well it's clearly there in the writing 🤣😂 good job at that 👏👏

Frances physically recoiled at once, her eyes misting over. A pang of regret pinched his heart and Tristan breathed out. Stupid, stupid defenses ! She confided her insecurities, and he lashed out at her like a high school bully ! Tristan could have kicked himself for his lack of tact.

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Urban · d'elfe

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Yes!!! Hopefully we all find someone !!! I'm glad you did!!!

— “I wasn’t in the ‘beautiful’ bunch with my female friends, people flirted with them, not with me. I was the side kick”

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Urban · d'elfe

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... 😲😲😲

He stood, livid, in the studio and the walls seemed too small to enclose his raw power. Frances pushed her chair back slowly, standing on wobbly legs. Her first instinct was to take a step back… so She took a deep breath, and approached him as if he was a wild animal. Her presence caused him to blink, his voice sounding nearly deformed from the clenching of his jaw.

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Urban · d'elfe

Lexi_Roberson
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Commented
Brilliant !!! 👏👏👏

The young woman nodded, unsure, until his own posture relaxed slightly. A long, heavy breath passed her lips at the storm receded in his eyes ; the priest cursed himself. Where did that anger come from to take hold of him so easily ? How long since his emotions had betrayed him, throwing control to the wind ? It was dangerous ground indeed he was treading, all for the sake of Frances’ safety. He should have walked away from her; she endangered his poise and his vows. Yet, he couldn’t let her go. She was so innocent, so brilliant, so gentle… the wolves of reality would eat her alive, right ?

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Urban · d'elfe

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I just like how it went from Father Tristan to Tristan.

His stomach rolled and twisted so painfully that his lungs refused to breathe in. What ? Her fault ? Is that what she had retained from his warnings ? It was wrong, so very wrong, to hear her shoulder responsibility for harassment. Tristan ground his teeth together.

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