Musgarth - Profile

(Google translate) Typical characters? Serious? If he were a typical character, we would already be seeing him killing people, having sexual relations with everything that is a character, we would already be in the universe seeing uninteresting things about some world that doesn't even exist in the DC universe, just to try to fill in something that the author doesn't managed to deliver, and that's only because the author decided to accelerate the MC's personal growth process, which made the MC become OP very quickly and doesn't know what else to write..... as for this story, he's going a little further slow, developing the character and such, he's doing a great job, because it's very difficult to develop an OP character

(Google translate) Well, it's been fun to read, and I'm enjoying the world and character building, I'm not having any problems just with that, but my opinion on this subject and the various comments about it, I believe that if I had with the complete book, there wouldn't be this problem because the person would only read half of it and go to the part they want, so the problem is that as we have to wait anxiously for the release, when the day finally arrives, it's over that the MC isn't even mentioned once and that's when the chapter ends, then you have to wait longer until another one comes and so on.... so let's say that to "solve" this, it would be at least mentioning the MC a little more even though minimum in the chapters, I say this, not saying to stop the creation of the world and the growth of the character itself, I just say to maybe do that, reduce the boring comments, because my fear is to take this so seriously that end up giving up, and I wouldn't like to see that because I'm curious and anxious to see what happens, because we know that the character is OP, so the least I expect and would like to see is the possible growth of the MC's personality with all This power, not that I would like to see a play of his from time to time, I would, but let's face it, he's OP so what would be the fun? The cool thing is to see him dealing with this, his character growth, the opinions of the other MC, how his actions changed in the future and so on... well, I talked about more lol

(google translate) very good, continue in your own time, you don't need to worry about what people say or ask, create in your own time with your ideas and what you imagine

(google translate) I believe that the "problem" is his attitudes towards certain things, and how you are portraying this, which to tell the truth I myself wouldn't know exactly how to portray the MC's attitudes and opinions, taking into account all the power and knowledge of it... I wouldn't know how to develop this in a way that doesn't leave that attitude that a main villain in some story with MC with growth in power and such, faces, you know, that all-powerful villain who doesn't care about anything anymore , who despises the characters and such, one who in the end is always defeated, I believe the difficulty is creating an MC who doesn't look like that lol.

(google translate) write this down, don't author, please don't even think about it, it's cool the way it is, if the problem is too op, just work on solving the problems or whatever... I believe the problem is What people think is that anything that arises as a problem or struggle is resolved very easily, so instead of resolving everything, work more on dialogue (you are already doing this and you are doing it very well by the way) but try show more dialogue, more life and such, instead of fights that can be resolved together. a blink of an eye lol because at least for me, what I especially like about OP characters is the idea that they wouldn't have that annoying villain always appearing and not being resolved, so that he always appears again and bothers me lol and I also like it it's the possibilities of doing something that normally wouldn't be done because I don't have enough strength or whatever, like meeting characters that we wouldn't normally see because the MC is very weak, you know, like the gods, the perpetual ones and such, seeing these characters and the reactions to the MC, seeing conversations between them, thoughts and points of opinion and such in DC there are so many good characters (and strong that you wouldn't be able to see it if the MC wasn't OP)... well my opinion really lol do what you think is best for you and your readers...

maybe his power still hasn't gained control of the wings

(Google translator) I really don't understand all these people talking about him being played by a girl and such, that he doesn't show intelligence etc.. and that these scenes are unnecessary... I really don't understand, first that he is still a child and he already shows a very good intelligence just because he is understandable and stuff, if he were a normal child he would have already entered into A fight and friendship break up just for not agreeing with him.. second that these scenes are very good, and are essential for the book, because it doesn't get something monotonous of an overpower MC doing things, And don't skip the time too much and stuff... Well, amazing chapter and may you keep up your good work, and keep up those character development scenes

Google translator.... now that I noticed that I wrote everything in Portuguese kk...... 1 - Well, I have no problem with that kk I just ask, will the MC have any knowledge of the Witcher world? So to really know, because it can be said that I love the theme of rebirth etc. in a world where the MC has at least some knowledge of the world where he is, he doesn't even need to know the plot itself and such .. but well, I have that with you rewriting it, it gets much better kk a tip I think kk try more we dialogues and reactions of the other characters (focus like I say, to be more sure of this one, even because you are the only author that I think makes a scene of amazing dialogue kk) 2 - And in terms of the comments you speak, do you delete them? 🤔 Because the only ones I see are some thanking you and such kk

E em questão dos comentários que vc fala, tu apaga eles ? 🤔 Pois os únicos que eu vejo é uns agradecendo e tal kk

Bem, não tenho nenhum problema com isso kk só deixa eu perguntar, o MC vai ter algum conhecimento do mundo the Witcher ? So pra saber mesmo, pois pode se dizer que eu adoro o tema de renascimento etc em um mundo onde o MC tenha pelo menos algum conhecimento do mundo onde ele está, não precisa nem saber o enredo em si e tal .. mas bem, tenho certeza que com vc rescrevendo ele, vai ficar muito melhor kk uma dica eu acho kk tente ficar mais nós diálogos e reações dos outros personagens (focar eu falo, de ter mais desse tipo, até pq vc é o único autor que eu achei que faz uma cena de diálogo sensacional kk )

(Google translator) I'm loving the way you are writing the story and just to comment, on the question that it is very OP ... I would advise you to continue following the original story (of course, with your changes in relation to the plot) and do not add something like Marvel characters etc ... And when you finish with all the plot ideas, create like a reason for it Go to another world or even universe, like, he ran so fast that he ended up crossing to another universe (which could be Marvel or any other) then he spends time there and such

you can tell when it’s a big chapter, when the feeling it’s going through is so great that it gives you strength and the desire to go and do something, which in my case is playing the piano. (Google translator)

Thanks for the chapter

I think this MC vibe is so cool that it exists since the beginning, like, I don't need to worry about something happening and the MC doesn't know, and I also like that even though the MC is practically "invincible"(which is not a bad thing) and you still make the story really cool to read, especially the parts where the MC tells something about the past to other characters. Well, I just wanted to say that I'm liking your story very much and that you are sending it very well, so thank you very much for the chapter. (Google translator)

Thanks for the chapter

(Google translate) it would be nice to see some development of your powers, because it would be boring just to limit yourself to the original powers, like, the white beard fruit, it involves tremors, vibrations and such ... So if we take this characteristic that would be the vibration, it would be possible to develop a type of perception, because it would be possible to visualize the environment through vibrations, as it practically hires it.And like, you can have different types of powers, even if they are not all destructive, because you already thought you could vibrate the molecules at certain frequencies and such.