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E***ww... Please dont request that. Boundaries. View More
The Heir is Here: Quiet Down, School Prince! · C475
2 days ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C1
1 week ago
Why is it saying as of today 10.15.19, the last update was 15 days ago, but yet the Privilege is being updated? 1578/1626. Really? View More
Perfect Secret Love: The Bad New Wife is a Little Sweet · C1578
1 week ago

angeli32: Our dear author, please stop this priviledge thing already and give us mass release..you've already gain a lot from us..😔

Perfect Secret Love: The Bad New Wife is a Little Sweet · C1578
1 week ago

HyAhCiNth: This is the big problem purchasing privilage..we spent a huge amount of SS then still we need to unlock the chaps,so irritating and we need justice from this..i hope WN will take action for this.🤔🤔🤔

Perfect Secret Love: The Bad New Wife is a Little Sweet · C1578
1 week ago
I'm not sure what is up with all these really stupid FLs View More

friskier: you are right.

My gay husband is a pervert · C96
1 week ago
Am I the only person that thinks she is dumb as a box of bricks? View More
My gay husband is a pervert · C96
1 week ago
Reading Status: C144
I actually liked this novel, but as of today the last update was 1 month ago. Shame.

I'm glad this happened before I had to use SS.

Maybe the author will finish it soon. Who knows. View More
Space and Rebirth: The Favored Genius Doctor and Businesswoman
1 week ago
What happened to the updates? View More
Space and Rebirth: The Favored Genius Doctor and Businesswoman · C144
1 week ago

1stSlug: This review is mostly for the Author and where they need to focus on what to fix with their writing style.

Okay, so I've read from start to end (current end Chapter 203, with the ave cost in stones between 4-6 per chapter, which is (VERY) roughly around 5-600 stones in total), and here are my views so far (Warning Spoilers Below!):

The Cons:

The Grammar is terrible!!! This is a major thing and it needs to be addressed as soon as possible. Every time I see a misspelled word, wrong word or even a missing comma, it ruins the reading experience. It's jarring and disruptive to read smoothly. Your story needs some SERIOUS TLC (tender loving care) with regards to editing!

There are also some rather glaring plot holes with regards to the story, mostly involving the time travel aspect. If you're going to play with time travel, you need to clearly and logically sound out the backstory. Simply forcing things to mesh doesn't work for a lot of readers. An example: (I've commented on this before) But the timeline with MC past enemy's is weird due to the fact that they both joined Uni later in their past lives (both around 20-21, that's a 2-3 year difference), but now they've both joined at 18 with no explanation on how this happened. So yes, you can say it's "due to the butterfly effect", but you need to explain HOW this came about. They don't share the shame social circles, nor have they met in this lifetime. So why the enemy female lead is suddenly at Uni with no logical reason, other than "Because!" is silly.

The "side villains".... This isn't so much a con on your part, but more of a generalization for the genre you're writing in. Are all the young woman in this world retards? Can't people take rejection and move on? It drives me crazy reading the level of stupidity of this arch-type. It seriously makes me grind my teeth in frustration.

Now normally, I should post the "Pros", but seeing as your novel is already highly ranked at the time I've typed this, I feel like you've already nailed down what you need to write. But for future readers, I'll type down a few quick points:

The Female lead is a level headed young woman, who is willing to put in the effort to succeed in life on her own terms.

Can never say no to cute pets.

Female lead can kick ass.

That is all.

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
1 week ago
An editor is needed badly. View More

cute1234: I don’t mean to discriminate. English is my 3rd language. This is only an honest opinion please don’t be offended. This story still needs a lot of editing. Also, please improve your vocabulary ..

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
1 week ago

cute1234: I don’t mean to discriminate. English is my 3rd language. This is only an honest opinion please don’t be offended. This story still needs a lot of editing. Also, please improve your vocabulary ..

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
1 week ago
Reading Status: C37
The plot and characters are very good. Unfortunately the author's writing style leaves a lot to be desired. Sentence structure, grammar, POV, and sentence tense are all over the place.

I feel like most paragraphs are rushed and there are words missing.

I will keep reading for the characters and plots. But author please get an editor. You are doing you creativness a disservice. View More
Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
1 week ago
Reading Status: C52
I'm not even sure what to say. Uhhhhh.... the random poorly misspelled Korean in this book. I'm confused. Why?? Which country is this taking place in?? Why does the FL keep Koreboo'ing?? The tense and POV is all over the place.

I like the fact that the author took a chance, but they really should have someone editing. View More
My gay husband is a pervert
1 week ago
I'm so confused. Which country is this story based in and why is there so much misspelled Korean mixed into the dialogue?? View More
My gay husband is a pervert · C36
1 week ago
Just skipped over this chapter. I have no desire to see those two interact. What a let down. View More
The Typhoon's Wife · C232
2 weeks ago
How disappointing. I thought Onita and the baby were a lock to bring some joy to his life. View More
The Typhoon's Wife · C231
2 weeks ago
I'm always amazed by the evil chicks in these novels. Their thought process is delusional. Are there real people walking around like this??? View More
Mr. CEO Loves The Devilish Beauty · C146
2 weeks ago
I'm not understanding why all of these novels have piss poor medical information and terminology regarding pregnancy. View More
Priceless Baby's Super Daddy · C512
3 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C1
1 month ago
Reading Status: C15
The plot and characters are good, but the author seems to have a problem with the sense. Past, present, future, first person, or third. It's kind of irritating. View More
Arranged Marriage: To Hear Your Voice
1 month ago

kashvi14: Yeah... Those two novels were the best I ever read. Simply awesome

The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage · C406
1 month ago
What an idiot. I don't think I've seen a stupider FL. Her dialogue is cringey. View More
The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage · C366
1 month ago

JennJennJenn: He said that he & Huiling already break up.

He said that he's a married man, and will act as one.

He said he dont bother about Huiling anymore.

He said his feeling for LC is different from what he had on Huiling..

He said that he will respect LC.


But...
One call from Huiling, he leave LC alone..

One visit from Huiling, he leave LC alone..

One request from Huiling, he unconditionally follow..

One word from Huiling, he felt guilty..

In which situation when Huiling present, that he ever think about LC feeling? Even once? NO... Theres none.

The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage · C244
1 month ago
She dumb as a door knob. View More
The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage · C244
1 month ago

Thormented: The nationalism is somewhat strong this chapter~ xD; poor fictional America.

Hang on Ning Xi! Cabbage is coming to wrap you up!

Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband · C649
1 month ago
This chick is not adorable. Stupidity is not cute. She's as dumb as a box of bricks. View More
The Heir is Here: Quiet Down, School Prince! · C150
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
Hmmmm... is the author deleting reviews that they don't like?
How sad, I guess they'll never improve. Constructive criticism is there for a reason. View More
Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
1 month ago
OMG!!!! Why so many exclamation points?? Are they yelling everything?? View More
He is a Nymphomaniac. · C456
1 month ago

Anamoly: Another fan of KO... no.. there is only one hacker KO and he lives in another story...

National School Prince Is A Girl · C11
2 months ago
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