Daoist_Lake

1mth

Posted

Writing : Readable Story : Good Character : Still Average Update : 1 Chapter / Week (Maybe) Background : Common on Fanfic. I don't want give too many suggestion : 1. Don't Write R18+ Chapter. It Ruin Story you build. 2. Don't give too many Harem. i don't know average person can satisfy everyone need (Just Be Rational) 3. Give Original MC (Fuutarou and other MC) their fated lover. this is just a suggestion. you can accept it or reject it. because my suggestion doesn't really conflict with the story you want to make. (Sorry my English really bad)

Daoist_Lake

2mth

Commented

Good.. Really Good 😭💢.. Wait until night, i Will give you a mere of my Power Stone 😏

ch 12 The Kingdom of the Stars

Daoist_Lake

2mth

Replied to KuramaUchiha

Of course, His Mother.

For several hours did they play a song together. The sound of his flute merged into hers. Their combined melody made a beautiful harmony... in this heaven-like country where the smell of blood prevails over everything and death looms at every corner, this is what Mei had longed for: the simple bliss that only music could bring, and the one who brought it to her is someone she can relate to...

Naruto: Eternal Darkness

Anime & Comics · DaoistSA8fR2

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Give us a illustration

I'd like it if you could comment and rate Kou Rei with a W or L 😏

Kingdom: The Path Of A General

Anime & Comics · Noiir

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Ex- Calibaaa!😭😭😭

"Hmm...it wouldn't be so bad, in fact, it's my dream to hold one and say something awesome chant while holding a sword..." I think to myself before giving it a shot.

My life in The beginning After the end

Anime & Comics · Takt_0

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Replied to sleepinghead

Every man is bad wolf, except me.

"My father said that men other than him are either old or yellow-haired(idiot)!"

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Trinity189

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

i don't know Tomodachi Game exist or not out from ANHS School.

This book has been deleted.

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

You can do A time skip for important event. And I hope MC never got inside Fairy Sphere after Acnologia attack Tenrou. MC can try save Fairy Tail Guild, but he fail and throw out of range Fairy Sphere.Thank you for the chapter. I remember this Story, its really good for Pure Fairy Tail fanfic.

ch 12 Author Update 1/11/24 (Will be deleted when next chapter releases)

Fairy Tail: A New Dawn

Anime & Comics · LuxAtro

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

😏

Feng Linlin's eyes widened with excitement as she began to recount her experiences in her charming, innocent tone. "Oh yes, big brother! When I was sleeping, I met mother in a dream. She was so pretty and told me to be strong, before eating your meat." she said, her voice laced with wonder and innocence. However, didn't she know, Feng Qian broke out in cold sweat when he heard it.

Soul Land: Surviving As A Spirit Beast In Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · FantasyLovers

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Replied to Empyream

I prefer your MC paired with Aria. Your Mc has a Serious Personality, it really suits Aria's Easy-Going Personality. It's not like Saeko and the other character don't matched with MC. It's just that your fanfic feels more alive when Aria appeared because there is comedy (even though the MC just prevents Aria from saying dirty jokes).

"Arima-kun you are lying." What she said surprised not only me, but also Raku and Saitou, Saitou was sweating because of this, while her two friends become flustered.

Is It Wrong to Watch Romantic Comedy Live at the Scene

Anime & Comics · Empyream

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Best Regards, a loving angel. Mwaaa~~ *Kissing-heart-emoji*]

Annihilation Maker DXD

Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Kazume : 😁🤌

[Advocate of Gender Equality: Can I get the site at least?]

Annihilation Maker DXD

Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

She should be fine. After all, he believes in her as much as she believes in him. Surely, she has the best intentions.

Annihilation Maker DXD

Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Gazing affectionately into Leo's distorted expression with a vein almost popping, Kaguya smiled softly and offered her blessing.

Annihilation Maker DXD

Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Uwoghhhhhhh!!! Yeah!!!

Hanging Around (Real).

Annihilation Maker DXD

Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Commented

Tolong, jangan jadi musuh bree :'v miripin kayak Kurumi.Jadi musuh udah itu jadi temennnnn :v ga ada shidou, plot bisa ga jalan

"kita lihat saja apa yang akan terjadi. Apakah kita menjadi kawan atau justru menjadi lawan, Itsuka Shido"

Date A Live: The Execution Spirits

Anime & Comics · Nara_Ryuko

Daoist_Lake

3mth

Replied to fakeDarkestknight2

Masuk ke lubang neraka ini mah

"aku seorang pastor yang sempat menyelamatkanmu. Kupikir dirimu sudah mati dan sudah kusiapkan kuburan dibelakang gereja, namun rupanya kau diberi kesempatan oleh -Nya untuk hidup."