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"You still haven't given up on that desolated store of yours?"

"It's my calling."

That made me crack up a bit.

"You still haven't given up on reading fanfics yet?"

"It's my current addiction and only source of entertainment!" View More
Playing with other Supernaturals · C14
10 hours ago

Kul: No harem just them togther i totally support this relationship!!!

Playing with other Supernaturals · C9
10 hours ago

Peace12345: Finally they got together.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C9
10 hours ago

amaturewriter: YES I SUPPORT THIS SHIP!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Playing with other Supernaturals · C9
10 hours ago
No. This is fanfic written in English, not in Japanese. Mister works perfectly fine, there is no need to change it to become more weeb like. If it does, it will just be cringe. View More

AliefLucas: You should use -san instead mr. since it will make it more feel like kisuke.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C5
11 hours ago

SangN123: Hope he gets his hat, cane, and the fan just to mock people as before

Playing with other Supernaturals · C4
11 hours ago
But you don't have to make him care about the Issei, you could just make him curious about Issei and what Ddraig is and what Issei becomes later on. Kisuke doesn't need to meaningfully care, as long as it affects his life, he will do something. View More

Goyya: I really want him to become older than the MCs but it is hard to give kisuke a reason care about them aside from being supernaturals and even with that, it wont be a meaningful care.

Spoiler Alert in maybe 1 or 2 chapters: I plan to make him issei's childhood friend and he sees issei as little brother. just to give him a reason to get involve

Playing with other Supernaturals · C2
11 hours ago

josept95: I just started reading the novel, first mistake, kisuke is not a pervert and does not think about romance, he is a curious person, besides being calm what makes me seem naive, what makes people underestimate him and do not forget that he is the most intelligent person of all the whiteners, another point is that when he speaks he is educated he is never outgoing, in addition to being a person of science who always seeks more knowledge, so I hope not to meet later with a kisuke, a pervert that has harem, because the original kisuke is not like that.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C2
11 hours ago

Atals: oh and have him and azazel meet i think they are just like one another and would be great friends

Playing with other Supernaturals · C2
11 hours ago

SnowofBlood: Be careful, you have to remember even if Kisuke can be considered be a " good " guy, he is quite ruthless and calculative in his action so don't make him saving the poor and orphan, he pursue knowledge and I really like this scientist side of him. And please don't make him join a peerage, you can make him older than issei, rias... and he can open a strandy candy shop before the cannon plot.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C2
11 hours ago
This was too easy for how much you hyped the fight, and the fact you say that the MC wouldn't win if they were in the air of ground doesn't help me find awe or shcok, it just made me view the MC as a complete idiot. He barely managed to defeat a sleeping, old and sick dragon. Why did he even need the dragon anyway? He's already got the basilisk and I'm pretty sure that basilisk would be able to fight a normal dragon and it's not like the MC was expecting to fight an alpha dragon. View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C25
12 hours ago
I think you should redo chapter 1. The writing style of that chapter made me leave and search for a better fanfic. It was only until a few weeks or months after searching that I came back to read it. Surprised would be an understatement as I continued to read through the chapters. Keep up the good work, but the first chapter is a major turn off for new readers. View More

amaturewriter: NOP..JUST TRAVEL...HINT ...HINT

I am in Harry Potter! · C16
16 hours ago

Akshay007: Your writing style now staring to form a unique form.....
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If you continue like this...
It will help you in many other novel that you will write in the upcoming future...
Or in this novel....
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Good luck... 👍😘😍

I am in Harry Potter! · C16
16 hours ago

oninick: Its so fluffy I want to die!!!!! Thank you good sir won’t be too long till you’re no longer AmateursWriter soon to VeteranWriter!

I am in Harry Potter! · C16
16 hours ago

Jerry0: Yesssss!! I get the basilisk tamed thanks author guy!

I am in Harry Potter! · C16
16 hours ago

Flawless_Saber_Dao: Somebody find those damn onion cutting ninjas..

I am in Harry Potter! · C16
16 hours ago

Godread: Wow This chapter is the best ... thank you for this extraordinary novel. ... the best MC, the best daphen

I am in Harry Potter! · C16
16 hours ago
I'm not too sure about the whole crusade thing. The whole Christian crusades and his are kind of the same. While I have no excuses for the people that r*ped other people cause I myself think that they deserve worse than death, some of the people making drugs only do it to survive. While some people don't do it too survive I asure you most people do it due to the fact they can't get a good education, no one willing to hire them or simply the fact that all their expenses are too much for them to cover and many more that I can't even be bothered to remember or think about. Most if not all people given the choice would choose a proper job with proper wages or salaries then drug dealing with the risk of going to prison or dying. View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C13
18 hours ago
Couldn't you have made them like, I don't know 16 (19) or 15 (18)? 11 (13) years old seems too early to be thinking about that complicated stuff like love, don't you think? I know some kids at the age of 12 that date but at most their relationship lasts only a few weeks. They don't even care really, they just get bored or annoyed with each other. Your excuse sucks btw, just cause their mind is more mature doesn't mean they are attracted to the other sex. Their bodies need to start pumping out hormones for them to start feeling like what they are feeling now. View More

amaturewriter: YEP, HELP IN YEAR 4

I am in Harry Potter! · C12
18 hours ago
I don't understand this... Just pinch her back, better yet just tickle her, than she won't feel pain but just laugh like a freak. *sigh* stupid f*cking pushover, love the direction your story is heading btw. View More

amaturewriter: Appreciate the support :)

I am in Harry Potter! · C9
19 hours ago
His strength increases over time. Like his magic supply. View More

ZackN: Isn’t the mc supposed to be able to lift 3 tons? If so how is he defenseless when he runs out of magic. Or did I get the whole three tons wrong and that’s just the maximum amount he can lift if he trains.

I am in Harry Potter! · C5
20 hours ago
When I'm underwater I would think of not breathing, if I did I probably inhale a lot of water. View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C5
20 hours ago
I think cause he didn't have the regen powers before the scars were inflicted, his regenerative powers treated the scars as a part of his true body, not as damage cause they are already healed. I don't really know but that makes the most sense in my opinion than none. View More

F1nal: What happend with the regen powers? Wouldnt it remove all scaring?

I am in Harry Potter! · C3
1 day ago
Does the scar touch his jaw a bit like ban or no? View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C3
1 day ago
That's only true if the slice of life is funny and good, or really emotional and from what I have seen, only a few moments in the chapters could make me laugh and bother to comment, and sometimes even the comments were funnier. I can remember a few funny moments but they were all related to the Panda Onesie or something related to the stuff related to the Panda Onesie. Being honest, I stopped around chapter 54 or something because it was just the same thing over and over, It's something I wouldn't like to read or could stand reading. I thought it had good potential, but then I just got more disappointed as the story went on, it kind of bored me. Before you get rid of this from your library, I recommend you keep reading as I still haven't read the entire thing so it might get better or you might actually enjoy it.

P.S. Sorry if the paragraph doesn't make sense or seems jumbled, I am super tired right now, I have no idea why I'm still persisting to stay awake, probably because I'm hoping to see some good fanfics. *sigh* Why can't all "GOOD" fanfics be on this website? Can you tell me any good Fairy Tail and AOT (Attack on Titan) fanfics, preferable non-harem, Mikasa, no suicidal tendencies MC and basically what I'm looking for is a good AOT fanfic, Fairy Tail is just a bonus.

P.P.S. Please don't troll me and send me to some yaoi bullsh*t! When my friend said to go to wattpad for some good fanfics, I went on to find some BNHA/MHA fanfics but all I found was yaoi, EVERY SINGLE ONE WAS A FUCKING YAOI FANFIC! You wouldn't believe how disappointed I was... btw not against gay people, it's just I don't want to read boy on boy action *sigh* what I said is exactly was what a gay hater would say... Please just help me find a good fanfic website for AOT, thanks!

P.P.P.S You're probably thinking why I just asked you to find my fanfics for me? It's because I'm too lazy to do it myself and I would rather ask people who may have more fanfic knowledge than me instead of cursing myself to the non-yaoi search... Why the **** am I still typing?! Just go to fucking sleep me!!! View More

Frytrix: When the character is op,
The author makes it slice of life to ensure the story stays alive 50% of the time.

A Lazy Man's Adventure · C22
1 day ago

BejayOtamega: Same.

Mutagen
1 day ago

Jetstorm: This thread is longer than most chaps of books I've read...

Mutagen
1 day ago

Jetstorm: Same here...I feel like ****...

Mutagen
1 day ago

BejayOtamega: I can't believe I've spent 29 mins reading this whole thread. What have I done with my life. Smh.

Mutagen
1 day ago

PettyOfficer: I expected the gangsters to have more guns. The MC was easily able to swipe one off a security guard. So why can’t the gangsters do so? Where did they get the first gun, anyway? Anyway, what was the reason for taking the Boss alive? Getting info where he got a gun?

Why the Hell did the MC forget taking the Boss hostage? While he was zoning out over the female love interest, the gangster could have knifed him for revenge. After all, you showed a cornered man doing mutual destruction already. It would’ve been good for character development and breaking the mood of the cliché for the Boss to do one final act.

Now you say the cinema is sound proofed. But you also said in the fiction that the gunshot was loud and clear. It attracted zombies. Now which is it? The gunshot lured zombies or it didn’t? Because it clearly did according to the fiction.

Also, my main point wasn’t having the mom clean up Mei. It was the gangster r*ping her all over and covering her with his jizz. A man is realistically unable to blow that many loads. How much time has passed since the outbreak? It’s been less than a day, probably an hour or two. What the f**k is that?

And you again show your favoritism for women. You didn’t bother to name the employee. It’s depressing. You wonder why I called the MC a harem maker now? You didn’t bother detailing other men. He doesn’t matter enough to you.

Mother walking after an hour or so later, my *ss. Sprains don’t heal that quickly, like I said. She’d also be useless to run away from zombies, let alone carrying the 30-50 lbs baggage of her daughter.

The rich fatty did hold everyone hostage. It’s how he forced the employees to close the shutters. I admit I was wrong about him killing someone.

The flashbacks were horrendous. This was TWO chapters worth. I’m pretty sure none of the other characters had this much dedication to their backstory. It was also a jarring tangent. The cliché made it worse. You might as well have brushed past it or started the story from here.

Too many flashbacks makes the reader have too much infodumping. We don’t remember all of it and we won’t care if it’s boring.

No sh*t I suspect a harem. You’re doing every cliché to jam in as many female baggages on the MC’s plate. You didn’t bother naming or directly describing the male employee’s intentions outright. All I see is that you care way more about describing the woman than moving the story forward. Especially with the TWO chapters of flashbacks.

I don’t CARE about chapter 132. I’m on chapter f**king 18. I can’t predict over 100 chapters in advance. I’m not God.

Your problem is that you have too many clichés happening at once. Pretty much every encounter is a cliché and every character is based off of a cliché. Your characters act on a cliché manner. They solve their problems in a cliché way. Nothing feels completely unique. That’s the problem.

Your biggest problem as a writer is saying “there is a reason” as an excuse. To us readers, we hear you say, “don’t worry, in the future, I covered up this plot hole.”

You’re the “mystery man” saying there is always a plan, but all the plans we see are absolute ****. There are always inconsistencies that are bugging readers and it doesn’t help that you’d rather waste chapters describing women instead of describing the plot.

We give up because we think you’re doing the carrot on a stick method. In honesty, it is. It’s too much effort for readers to swim through that cliché mess and be disappointed again and again. The answer is always somewhere near, but it’s not here. Or the answer is here, but you don’t understand it.

F**k. We readers understand it. The reason is ****. It’s plot armor.

Mutagen
1 day ago
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