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RedGunner

RedGunner

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fanatic about pokemon

2019-06-13 Joined Canada

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Replied to ILikecultivation
well, u are right, it's about who does it the best😁 But I felt it too coincidental to have same features.... Anyway, I feel Medieval era is more flushed out with better English and character development (my opinion) This one is good too XD

No, one person could make a Blood Bond with just one pokemon their whole life. If the said pokemon dies, they would never be able to make another Blood Bond ever, and hence the strength and potential of your starter mattered the most.

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Anime & Comics · Alan_demonic

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Replied to Adamgggggggg
I agree but most things are just giving me a Deja Vu. May be caz I just read the Medieval Era fanfic. Also the timing is too coincident when every concept connects like they are twins😅

No, one person could make a Blood Bond with just one pokemon their whole life. If the said pokemon dies, they would never be able to make another Blood Bond ever, and hence the strength and potential of your starter mattered the most.

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Anime & Comics · Alan_demonic

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Commented
edgy but cool

"It's a Katana if you still wondering," he shouted while he went out of the house.

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Anime & Comics · Alan_demonic

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Commented
Great choice, love Eevee

It was a quadrupedal pokemon with primarily brown fur. The tip of its bushy tail and its large furry collar were cream-coloured. It had short, slender legs with three tiny toes and a pink paw pad on each foot. It had brown eyes, long pointed ears with dark brown interiors, and a small black nose.

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Anime & Comics · Alan_demonic

RedGunner
Commented
😑dude, the name of this fanfic and this eyes red when the ability is on giving me bad vibes. I hope it's not what I am expecting

Everything was same but the colour of his eyes was not longer red rather it was vibrant red, glowing even in a brightly lit room.

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Anime & Comics · Alan_demonic

RedGunner
Commented
I think it should be Tailow?
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One Word Review: Decent. I will start with the Pros and then go with the cons which may or may not help the author. Pros: Different approach to a pokemon fanfiction by making MC not know much about pokemon even if he is from Earth. Author is trying to build a personality to the characters which is good. Interesting choice of pokemon and author also does a good job of not just giving away hidden abilities like many fan fictions do. Cons: Slow Pace (too slow for it's own good). Approach is different but story seems plain and bland at places(cliche too). Advice to author: People who read Fanfic are very familiar with Pokemon so you don't need to explain in detail about every Pokemon or try to build a thing like what Pokemon type it is and stuff. For example, MC asking what type his 2nd Pokemon is and Nurse Joy trying to build a suspense for two chapters doesn't really interest readers, it seems like a drag. Because the one who is reading it already knows even though the MC doesn't. Slow pace novels might be a good build-up for characters and world background but you seem to get lost in the idea of keeping it slow for the sake of it. There are number of scenarios where I felt, it did not help the character or the story in any way. You really need to interest the readers even if it is paced slow, so try creating interesting scenarios to make up for it. If you don't like my review then ignore it, if you do, then it's good for your story too. Trust me, I wrote Pokemon fanfic on this site and I am not blindly advising. Anyways good luck with the improvements in the book. I will review it again if it changes ✌️
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Replied to Yamero
he is immune, he fainted caz of the pressure that came out of MC due to a breakthrough

[Bro, you are alive!!!!! I can't believe you took them all down. You were insane, even I couldn't handle the pressure.] said Sandile. He was extremely happy right now.

Pokemon: The Other Side
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Pokemon: The Other Side (Dropped)

Anime & Comics · RedGunner

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Replied to phamtomof57
yes

They gave me a map to roam around here so that I don't get lost. I checked the area where the logistics department is and found it to be closer than expected. I walked in the direction casually, I placed my pokemon egg in the cabin and locked the room so that no one can steal it.

Pokemon: The Other Side
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Pokemon: The Other Side (Dropped)

Anime & Comics · RedGunner

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