Webnovel Author: drewcifer82 - Fanfic Collection

drewcifer82

3mth

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This is kinda stupid. I understand that it’s a translation and I can’t make any worthwhile inputs. However, the fact that nothing actually changes plot-wise in an overall sense completely negates any draw this story has and also shows that while the author has a decent head on his shoulders for developing Mark himself as a character as well as for making up awesome pseudo-science, he/she refuses to change relevant plot points in order to add unnecessary drama. Sure it’d be boring if a character came in and with a wave of his hand made everything all better, but there needs to be actual influence on the major plot points in order to be effectual. This is, of course, just my opinion and can be taken with a grain of salt. I just feel rather strongly about it.

The content of the video that the Green Goblin was about to play on television was no less powerful than the explosion he caused at the conference today. It would utterly shatter the entire Avengers Alliance into pieces...

Marvel: Little Genius

Movies · Lightreaper

drewcifer82

7mth

Commented

Yayyy! I love this. Hope there’ll be more eventually.

ch 25 Ch.25 - Fly me to the Moon

Mass Effect: Project Hybrid

Video Games · Alexander_the_grey

drewcifer82

8mth

Commented

Hey author dude, I was wondering if you could maybe post up an Auxiliary chapter with A) a list of all his current Pokémon and B) the names and professions of all his friends and family? I’m having a rather hard time keeping up with everyone.

ch 88 C088 - Jasmine's big week of surprises

Pokemon: A life worth living

Video Games · Nuclide

drewcifer82

8mth

Commented

Hey author dude, I was wondering if you could maybe post up an Auxiliary chapter with A) a list of all his current Pokémon and B) the names and professions of all his friends and family? I’m having a rather hard time keeping up with everyone.

Chloe immediately felt at home in the kitchen and started helping out the Alcremie in making dough for pancakes. "Yes! I can't believe my husband had to drag me here! If only I had known, I wouldn't have made it so difficult for him. And I still can't believe my sister-in-law's husband-to-be turned out to be THE Recipe Professor."

Pokemon: A life worth living

Video Games · Nuclide

drewcifer82

8mth

Posted

This is my first five star review in recent memory. I’ve followed it from the start and had read the author’s previous work as well. And while I enjoyed the other one, this one has seemed to work its way into first place for me. It really captures the essence of Fairy Tail, the goofy campy stuff, the guild’s sense of family, and throws in some fun surprises along the way. The two OC’s are perfectly blended in without being obtrusive yet also change canon in logical ways in response to their presence. The harem isn’t forced, there’s real believable build up to each new member, and the lemons aren’t in your face and thrown in haphazardly without regard to the overarching plot. They’re also clearly marked so readers who want to skip, can. Just pay attention to the author notes for those instances where the lemon is further down and there’s still plot relevant writing at the beginning. The only complaint I could possibly see is how long it takes to reach canon episode/chapter 1. But honestly how it was done makes way too much sense for the complaint to be at all valid. So, suck it up, read it, and enjoy it. All in all, very well done and I can’t wait to keep reading. Thanks!

Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads

Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029

drewcifer82

8mth

Commented

Ah yes, the Apple of Discord. Gave Billy and Mandy lots of trouble, that it did.

Of course she will do no such thing, she's the titan of discord, it is but her duty to cause chaos and strife and should he kill her when she doesn't do as he says more chaos will ensue as her mother will not let such slight slide, she may not be the most loved of her mother's children but Nyx does indeed love all her children.

New God of the forge

Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational

drewcifer82

8mth

Commented

Misandristic*

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FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)

Book&Literature · CarlosDr3vna

drewcifer82

9mth

Replied to GloriousRightFoot

Of course it’s their choice. “Here’s a key to everything you could ever dream of for your planet and loved ones, buuut in order to get all the bells and whistles you have to join my harem. But yea, it’s totally your choice and I’m not a complete scumbag for dangling what amounts to salvation in front of you in exchange for your body.” There are so many better written plot lines that make much more sense that answer the question “why a harem?” out there you could have drawn inspiration from. Hell, you wrote better reasons to be a part of a harem before, Ein. This is basically sugarcoated coercion mixed with prostitution.

Final Fantasy Frontier

Video Games · GloriousRightFoot

drewcifer82

9mth

Posted

Relationships are forced. Partners are put into a catch 22 situation where they either get awesome stuff if they agree to be in the harem or they lose out on it if they don’t and it’s not about their feelings at all. The feelings that do sprout are due to basically Stockholm syndrome. It REALLY started off strong. Super strong. So much wasted potential.

Final Fantasy Frontier

Video Games · GloriousRightFoot

drewcifer82

9mth

Commented

He is blind and can’t see Mount Tai.

"Ugh… That sounds so esoteric." Gildarts said in response. "It sounds like something from another world. One where they use all sorts of over-the-top sayings to explain the simplest things."

Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads

Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029

drewcifer82

9mth

Commented

Blizzard of Ice

"Chionothýella Pagos," The girl turned around and looked at him. "We finally meet in person. I've heard much about you."

FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)

Book&Literature · CarlosDr3vna

drewcifer82

9mth

Commented

I’m getting Last Blood Elf vibes from this paragraph. Lol, next he’ll be stealing hats.

Ace was startled by his own thoughts, maybe he could record all the forms of magic and spells he had studied while also putting them in a collection? The mere thought thrilled him!

Magic Man

Movies · Monkey_Godking

drewcifer82

9mth

Replied to ZEDisAwesome

Oh I haven’t had that in a long time. I should go to the store and see if I can find it.

Luffy sat across the window as he sipped on a local drink, made out of concentrated rose syrup, sweet and red in color. A drink that he was oh so used to having in his previous life.

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

drewcifer82

10mth

Commented

So three anime so far? Plus a H animation? What other worlds are tied to his?

Ai, Yotsuba, and Chitoge all stole glances at him throughout their classes, failing to tear their attention away from him, especially when he's showing such a serious expression.

Welcome to the Multiverse Chat Group!

Anime & Comics · EclypseX

drewcifer82

10mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter, and thank you for coming back. Take your time. No offense meant by my hydra comment earlier in the chapter when she revealed her name to Pierce. I know that stories, especially stories about overcoming mental trauma, need stuff like that. Your writing honestly reminds me of a similar story about Wally West, Kid Flash, on AO3 called In The Life (While Running Blind) by DoctorMerlinReid. If you haven’t read it, you should. It’s pretty epic. And your story is turning out just as epic.

ch 24 Chapter 22

A Hero by the Name of Silk

Movies · Lightblade23

drewcifer82

10mth

Commented

Hmm knowledge transfer will be better here I think

Let me tell you, based on my analysis, as the internet becomes more advanced, with wider reach and faster speeds, we will enter an era of online knowledge payment in the future. I'm already preparing a private tutoring chip for Baymax, as well as related educational cloud platforms. I believe there will be great potential in the future!"