Webnovel Author: FiragaFiesta - Fanfic&Novel Collection

An updated review! Basically, the story is the pinnacle of what a good Kurumi fic is. The world of MHA and the unique duo of All Might and Kurumi is just soooooo Kurumi. The story isn't stale as he skips the already seen scenes from time to time giving chance to bring more on Kurumi. Kurumi which is the reason people are reading in the first place, the cute teasing with Midoriya is a classic and the banters with All Might is just 👌. Everything else is the same as my previous review, I'm pretty happy that the writer isn't a give upper or a pressure magnet. That sick counter with entirely skipping Nomu vs All Might~ Daz' sum balls son. I particularly like how you manage to pin down Kurumi's playful tendencies with serious situations and her analysis at stuff, especially with helping the principal after the attack. On another note, if I have to be honest, the book isn't entirely perfect. Don't get me wrong, for a Kurumi fic it's top tier, possibly the single most greatest if it continues this way. Just that the pacing seemed to have sped up sometime, I'd like more of Nightmare's missions please, seeing Kurumi in UA and Nightmare with the LoV is a good duality to show the 2 sides of the story as they connect eventually from time to time with us knowing how exactly Kurumi has affected everything. That's all keep up the good work author

Haven't really read the fic, but since it's basically Date A Bullet but fanfic, I'd imagine the writer to fully well know what he's doing. Then I saw it's a multiverse that doesn't go into DxD, the confirmation of no Yuri and the slow pacing and I could already review this with just those alone. Writing Quality in this site is always a 3 for me regardless of whatever it is, why? Because Inkstone doesn't really provide much... flexibility in writing so yeah. Story Development is basically categorized into 2 things when talking about a fic, time skipping vodka or the slow wines. This is the slow wine so it immediately has a good ground for a good story, add the fact that it's Tokisaki "Bleh" Kurumi herself, you just can't go wrong. Character Design is fanfics with no OC is automatic 4 or 5 as long as they don't really break character, Kurumi is relatively easy to write and her personality is pretty much an anti-hero twisted justice bringing psycho. Nothing you can go wrong with as long as you know what you're doing really. Updating Stability good. Not dropped, good stuff, definitely not bad rates. It's well known in this site that as long as it's not dropped, there's updates. World Background to be honest, a multiverse fic can NEVER have 2 stars below in this category simply because the world is already done... However, you get bonus points if you expand on said universe more so. Though, I repeat, I haven't read the fanfic, I will do now. Continue the good work author~