whoknew123488

6mth

Commented

poor girl. the way he said it made it seem like such a burden to even entertain the thought of them together

"Naturally, I don't want to have multiple girls at once but for the sake of my little kitty, I am willing to put my dignity aside in order to make her happy and you too. So, I'll be asking you this, Rapunzel." Jin then took a deep breath and said warmly.

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Movies · SlimeSage

whoknew123488

6mth

Commented

just disappear already. he doesn't actually seem to bring anything to the table

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My Journey as Perseus K. Jackson

Book&Literature · PurebloodKing

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

how'd he make this decision when his mentality was supposedly messed with to make him reckless

I could have confronted the Scarecrow right then and there. So why didn't I? It was simple, I didn't want all the attention focused on me.

DC: The Enchanter

Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

yet he messed with his mentality.....it already said he was annoyingly reckless

"So, worry not. As long as you are able to use your brain and think straight… I can promise you that you will enjoy this even more than me."

DC: The Enchanter

Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog

whoknew123488

7mth

Posted

was expecting a shadow monarch story...... got some of that but it turns into a greyfia story very quickly and while it's written well that was not what was advertised

DxD: Shadow Monarch

Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

no

Both him and Carla had the talk about the future. Carla was reluctant at first but he convinced that he is going to have another wife in the future. He told her that he wouldn't make false promises that all the attention will be towards her but he did say that he will cherish as much time as he can with both of them. He also had another idea. He will use the doppleganger skill to spend time with both of them in the future.

The Anti Hero Mage

Anime & Comics · ashwiniprasad

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

so. God can't even protect him.guess he has to become a god or immortal

I am impressed that you did not give up even after death made things difficult for you. you did good, the guy needed a blow to his over inflated ego.( just dont die or you will not have a pleasant time here.)

IN Harry Potter With a System

Book&Literature · Dreamer_1297

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

shame it's that and not a purge of Ghost freaks ego

"Get the Blue Reward: Full Ghostfreak Abilities Upgrade!"

Login in Ben 10 (adaptation, not original)

TV · Dagon_vcg

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

too bad. was hoping this plot line wouldn't start cause the MC would be smart enough not to use this ticking time bomb

"If the host chooses to transform into Ghostfreak he will be able to complete the login!"

Login in Ben 10 (adaptation, not original)

TV · Dagon_vcg

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

39 chapters in and you haven't thought of a last name?

"This is Bryce (I accept suggestions for his last name in the comments), but you can call him nephew if you want", Max put his hand on bryce's shoulder.

Login in Ben 10 (adaptation, not original)

TV · Dagon_vcg

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

at this point should have just written it as him reincarnating here

[You are coming from a peaceful environment in your past life. The closest you got to actual violence was watching videos online. The reason you have been able to adapt so well to this world is due to Khun Eduan's inner ego influencing you. He experienced strife and death for thousands of years. Even just in the dungeon, the reason you didn't freeze when facing that first goblin was because of Khun Eduan's battle instincts ingrained into his inner ego]

Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

Anime & Comics · SaltyGamer

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

can this just not be a thing. if I wanted to read about 2 different people I'd have chosen a different story

[Hmm... It seems you are unlucky. The most probable cause is that the body's inner ego is able to influence your decisions]

Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

Anime & Comics · SaltyGamer

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

..... of course .... maybe don't make a super massive harem if you aren't capable of maintaining it.

"The first power that you will achieve during your second maturation, is the power to duplicate yourself into fully functional copy," Faora informed Harry as she made sure that his full attention was on her. "These duplicates will be fully functional able to do anything that you yourself are capable of but they will be subservient to the will and goals of the original. They will understand their purpose."

HARRY POTTER: ASCENSION BOOK 1

Book&Literature · Ser_borgur

whoknew123488

7mth

Commented

harem in this world just makes sense.not doing so actually seems wrong

And about the Harem-... No, this is not a Harem story Stop forcing me to change it, I would be happy if I could write a bit of romance but with the new story development that's the least of my concerns... yes I'm inexperienced you don't have to rub it in okay...